Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cách cải thiện: (1) Sửa ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để trả lời rõ ràng hơn, tránh thiếu động từ và chia thì sai. (2) Giảm sự lặp từ và tiếng ững ừ (umm), sử dụng liên từ để nối ý mạch lạc. (3) Thêm chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn (ví dụ phương pháp chế biến, nơi thường ăn) nhưng không quá dài (tối đa 4-5 câu).

Ví dụ: My favourite food is fried chicken because I love its crispy coating and juicy meat. I particularly enjoy it with garlic-and-butter sauce, which adds a rich, savory flavour. I often have it with friends at a local restaurant on weekends, which makes the meal more fun.

Gợi ý: Cách cải thiện: (1) Sử dụng thì quá khứ nhất quán và câu chủ đề rõ ràng. (2) Tránh lỗi nhỏ về số nhiều/ít và cấu trúc so sánh. (3) Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể ngắn (ví dụ thương hiệu, hành vi) và dùng liên từ để nối ý.

Ví dụ: When I was young I loved fast food, especially burgers and fried chicken. I also ate a lot of sweets like ice cream, chocolate and candy after school. In hindsight, my diet was not very healthy, but I preferred tasty treats to nutritious meals at that age.

Gợi ý: Cách cải thiện: (1) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (subject-verb agreement, từ vựng sai) và tránh từ mơ hồ như “live food” hoặc “missed”. (2) Dùng từ vựng chính xác cho mùa và món ăn (e.g., refreshing, seasonal fruits). (3) Tránh tiếng ững ừ và tổ chức câu rõ ràng với liên từ để so sánh mùa hè và mùa đông.

Ví dụ: Not really — but my choices do change with the weather. In summer I prefer cold, refreshing items like fresh fruit or fruit-flavoured ice cream. In winter I usually choose hot dishes such as hot pot or soups because they warm me up.

Gợi ý: Cách cải thiện: (1) Dùng thì đúng (past vs present) và sửa lỗi số nhiều/số ít (e.g., 'enjoy' → 'enjoyed', 'snack' → 'snacks'). (2) Làm câu mạch lạc hơn bằng cách dùng liên từ (however, although, but) và đưa ví dụ cụ thể về thay đổi thói quen. (3) Giữ câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên, tối đa 4-5 câu.

Ví dụ: Yes, my tastes have changed. As a child I enjoyed junk food and sugary snacks, but now I try to eat a more balanced diet to stay healthy. However, I still allow myself fast food occasionally as a treat.

× I love how crispy is inside while staying.

✓ I love how crispy it is on the inside while staying so.

The adverbial phrase 'on the inside' was misplaced and the sentence lacked the subject 'it' before 'is'. Correct word order is subject + verb + complement. Also 'staying' needs clearer connection; suggested 'while staying so' or better rephrase to 'while staying juicy' depending on intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'it is on the inside' for correct English.

× You see in the inside is coming a variety of flavour but my favorite is umm garlic and butter sauce.

✓ You see, a variety of flavors comes from the inside, but my favorite is garlic and butter sauce.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and lacks subject-verb agreement. 'A variety of flavors' is the subject and takes singular verb 'comes'. Also 'in the inside' should be 'from the inside' or 'on the inside'. Suggestion: place the subject before the verb and use 'from/on the inside' appropriately.

× I usually eat it with my friends on weekend because it make the meal more enjoyable.

✓ I usually eat it with my friends on the weekend because it makes the meal more enjoyable.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'weekend' and subject-verb agreement error: 'it make' should be 'it makes'. Use 'the weekend' for general habitual actions and add -s for third person singular.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young?

✓ What kind of food did you like when you were young?

This sentence is correct; the past tense question uses 'did' with base verb 'like'. No change needed.

× As I say, I also had a sweet too, so I ate a lot of ice cream and chocolate and candy.

✓ As I said, I also had sweets, so I ate a lot of ice cream, chocolate, and candy.

Use past 'said' instead of present 'say' when referring to earlier speech. 'A sweet too' is awkward; use plural 'sweets'. Also use commas to separate items in a list.

× Looking back, my diet wasn't very healthy, but like many children, I prefer tasty food over nutritious meal.

✓ Looking back, my diet wasn't very healthy, but like many children, I preferred tasty food over nutritious meals.

Tense inconsistency: referring to childhood should keep past tense 'preferred'. Also 'nutritious meal' should be plural 'nutritious meals' or 'a nutritious meal' depending on meaning; plural matches general idea.

× Not really, I am a spontaneous person but I think my food choice also depend on the weather.

✓ Not really. I am a spontaneous person, but I think my food choices also depend on the weather.

Subject-verb agreement: 'choice' should be plural 'choices' to match context, and verb needs -s for third person singular 'depend' should be 'depend' because subject 'choices' is plural — keep 'depend'. Also add punctuation to separate clauses.

× Like in the summer I usually eat live food like fruit ice cream because they are refreshing.

✓ In the summer I usually eat light foods like fruit ice cream because they are refreshing.

'Live food' is incorrect; likely intended 'light food' or 'light foods'. Match plurality: 'foods' with 'they are'. Ensure adjective 'light' instead of 'live'.

× Uh. In contrast, during winter I prefer hot dishes like uh hot pot or soup since they have missed they were.

✓ In contrast, during winter I prefer hot dishes like hot pot or soup because they are warming.

Original ends with meaningless phrase 'they have missed they were'. Replace with clear reason 'because they are warming' or 'because they keep me warm'. Remove filler 'uh' for clarity.

× Yes, it has changed quite a bit. When I was younger I mostly enjoy junk food and sugary snack.

✓ Yes, it has changed quite a bit. When I was younger I mostly enjoyed junk food and sugary snacks.

Tense inconsistency: referring to past habits should use past simple 'enjoyed'. Also pluralize 'snacks' to match general category.

× Now I still like delicious food, but I pay more attention to eating balanced meal because I want to stay healthy.

✓ Now I still like delicious food, but I pay more attention to eating balanced meals because I want to stay healthy.

'Balanced meal' should be plural 'balanced meals' when talking generally. Maintain article usage for general statements.

× Even so, I still treat myself to fast food once in a while.

✓ Even so, I still treat myself to fast food once in a while.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed.