Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence (state your favourite), then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “when I eat in when I eating mum.” Use correct tense and collocations (e.g., “eating with my mum” and “I feel relaxed and stress-free”).

Ví dụ: My favourite food is Asian cuisine, especially Korean, Japanese and dim sum. I like them because the flavours are varied and the ingredients are fresh. Also, when I eat these dishes with my mum, I feel relaxed and stress-free, which makes the meal more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Correct tense and word choice, and be specific. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then give a reason using linking words (because/so). Replace vague phrases like “this those materials” with “the ingredients” and fix grammar (e.g., “was” and “liked”).

Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked eating sushi because the ingredients tasted very fresh and I believed it was healthy. For example, I often chose salmon sushi since it was nutritious and easy to eat.

Gợi ý: Good content and examples — improve grammar and cohesion. Use a clear topic sentence and correct conditional structure: “It depends on my mood” or “I don’t change food by season, but by mood.” Use linking phrases (for example, however) appropriately and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: I don’t usually change my food by season; instead, it depends on my mood. For example, if I feel like spicy food, I choose Mexican or Sichuan Chinese dishes, but if I want something healthy, I prefer salads or Japanese cuisine.

Gợi ý: Clarify the meaning and correct grammar. Start with a direct answer: “Not really” or “Yes, it has changed.” Then explain with reasons using linking words. Fix negative wording — likely you meant you don’t like trying new things. Avoid sentence fragments like “But.”

Ví dụ: Not really — my favourite foods have stayed similar since childhood. I still prefer sushi and Chinese dishes because I tend to stick to familiar foods rather than trying new things, so my preferences have remained consistent.

× Uh, actually I have a lot of favorite food and among all the kind of food, I prefer Asian food at most.

✓ Uh, actually I have a lot of favorite foods and among all the kinds of food, I prefer Asian food the most.

Plural and article/word form errors: 'favorite food' should be plural 'favorite foods' when referring to many items (Grammar Problem Type 1 and 22). 'all the kind of food' is incorrect; it should be 'all the kinds of food' to match plural 'kinds'. 'at most' is used incorrectly for preference intensity; 'the most' is correct. Suggestion: ensure noun number (singular/plural) matches meaning and use 'the most' for superlative preference. (Note: Although multiple related issues appear, corrections follow the listed problem types.)

× When I eat in when I eating mum, I just feel relaxed and stressed and without stress.

✓ When I eat with my mum, I just feel relaxed and stress-free.

Incorrect verb form and preposition/pronoun use: 'when I eating' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'when I eat' (present simple for habitual action) or 'when I am eating' for progressive. The phrase 'eat in when I eating mum' contains wrong preposition and word order; likely intended 'eat with my mum'. 'relaxed and stressed and without stress' is contradictory and ungrammatical; 'relaxed and stress-free' conveys the intended meaning. Suggestion: use correct verb forms and common collocations ('eat with someone', 'stress-free'). (Note: Primary issues addressed under verb + -ing form and related article/pronoun corrections per allowed types.)

× When I was when I was young, I really like to eat Japanese sushi because I feel this those materials are really fresh and can it's good for my healthy.

✓ When I was young, I really liked to eat Japanese sushi because I felt the ingredients were really fresh and good for my health.

Tense inconsistency and word choice: The sentence mixes past and present ('When I was young' requires past tense verbs). 'I really like' should be 'I really liked'. 'I feel' becomes 'I felt'. 'this those materials' is incorrect; use 'the ingredients'. 'can it's good for my healthy' is ungrammatical; correct is 'were good for my health'. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for past-time clauses, use 'ingredients' for food components, and 'health' as the noun. (Note: Corrections focus on present/past tense issues and noun choice per listed types.)

× Not exactly. I will change The type of food that I eat depends on my feelings.

✓ Not exactly. The type of food that I eat depends on my feelings.

Redundant and incorrect auxiliary/modal structure: 'I will change The type of food that I eat depends on my feelings' is a fused or run-on sentence combining future 'I will change' with a noun clause. The intended meaning is that the type of food depends on feelings, so remove 'I will change'. Also correct capitalization 'The'→'The'. Suggestion: keep clauses separate and use simple present 'depends' for general truths. (Note: Addressed as sentence structure error per list.)

× For example, if I want to eat spicy food today, I will choose Mexican food or Chinese food.

✓ For example, if I want to eat spicy food today, I choose Mexican or Chinese food.

Tense/modal mismatch in conditional: With 'if I want' (present), using 'I will choose' is acceptable for future choice but in spoken general preference it's natural to use simple present 'I choose'. Either is grammatically possible; correction makes tense consistent for habitual/present decision. Suggestion: for habitual or immediate decisions in spoken English, use simple present or 'I'll choose' for immediate future. (Marked as present tense issue.)

× However, if I want to focus more on nutrition, I will choose salad or Japanese food.

✓ However, if I want to focus more on nutrition, I choose salad or Japanese food.

Same conditional/tense consistency as above: using simple present 'I choose' fits habitual preferences. 'I will choose' is not wrong but can sound awkward in describing general choices. Suggestion: use consistent tense for habitual statements. (Note: kept within present tense issue type.)

× Not exactly for my for the dish dishes every day.

✓ Not exactly for my dishes every day.

Article and word duplication: 'for my for the dish dishes every day' contains redundant prepositions and duplicated nouns. Correct is 'for my dishes every day' or better 'Not really for daily dishes.' Also 'Not exactly' is slightly odd; 'Not really' is more natural. Suggestion: remove duplicated words and choose correct article or possessive. (Note: corrected under article errors and sentence cleanup.)

× I always prefer Japanese sushi or Chinese food because I'm a person that don't really want to try fresh things.

✓ I always prefer Japanese sushi or Chinese food because I'm a person who doesn't really want to try new things.

Pronoun and subject-verb agreement: Use 'who' for people rather than 'that'. 'don't' should be 'doesn't' to agree with singular subject 'I am a person who'. 'fresh things' is awkward; 'new things' is more natural for trying unfamiliar foods. Suggestion: use 'who' for people and ensure verb agrees with the relative clause subject. (Note: Addresses pronoun use and agreement—types 12 and 27.)

× I just want to stick on one things like forever.

✓ I just want to stick to one thing forever.

Singular/plural and preposition error: 'one things' mixes singular 'one' with plural 'things'; use 'one thing'. The verb phrase is 'stick to' not 'stick on'. 'like forever' is colloquial filler; 'forever' suffices. Suggestion: match number with quantifier and use correct preposition 'stick to'. (Note: Corrected as singular/plural issue and preposition per allowed types.)