Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammar errors (e.g., ‘by but’, double words). Aim for natural phrases like ‘I don’t have a single favourite, but I often enjoy…’

Ví dụ: I don’t have a single favourite food, but I often enjoy ice cream and chocolate. When I’m in a good mood I treat myself to something tasty, whereas if I’m feeling down I tend to eat more comfort foods. For example, on weekends I usually buy a small tub of ice cream to relax.

Gợi ý: Expand your one-word answer into a short, complete sentence and add a specific detail or example. Use a linking phrase to connect idea and reason, for instance ‘because’ or ‘mainly’ to explain why you liked it.

Ví dụ: When I was young I preferred homemade food because it tasted fresher and my family cooked it with love. For example, my mother’s vegetable curry and steamed rice were my favourites.

Gợi ý: Give a brief explanation after ‘Yes’ with a linking word and a specific example. Describe how seasons or festivals change your diet to make the answer informative and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. For instance, in summer I eat more salads and cold desserts like ice cream, while in winter I prefer soups and hot stews to keep warm.

Gợi ý: Clarify the question and give a coherent response. Start by directly answering ‘Yes’ or ‘No’, then explain what changed and why using a clear example. Avoid confusing word order and repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, my tastes have changed since childhood. I used to prefer simple items like plain bread, but now I enjoy a wider range of foods, such as spicy dishes and international cuisines, because I’ve travelled and tried new flavours.

× Actually I do not have any special or favorite food by but I usually like ice cream, chocolates and sweets items items.

✓ Actually, I do not have any special or favorite food, but I usually like ice cream, chocolates and other sweets.

Original sentence has extra word 'by', a repeated word 'items', and awkward coordination. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Remove 'by', delete duplicate 'items', and use 'other sweets' to sound natural. Add a comma before 'but' to separate independent clauses.

× And whenever I'm in good mood I try to eat delicious food.

✓ Whenever I'm in a good mood, I try to eat delicious food.

Beginning a sentence with 'And' is informal and unnecessary here; also missing article 'a' before 'good mood' and missing comma after the dependent clause. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Remove 'And', add 'a', and add a comma after the introductory clause.

× But whenever I'm in bad mood I try to eat a lot of food whenever I'm free or like.

✓ When I'm in a bad mood, I tend to eat a lot of food, especially when I'm free or bored.

Sentence has awkward repetition 'whenever' and unclear ending 'or like'. Missing article 'a' before 'bad mood' and needs commas. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Use 'When' for smoother start, 'tend to' for habitual action, and clarify 'or bored' to complete the idea.

× Homemade food.

✓ I liked homemade food.

Single fragment lacks a verb and does not match past-tense question 'What kind of food did you like when you were young?'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) and also a sentence without a verb (ID 23). Provide a full sentence in the past tense to answer the question.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year.

A one-word answer 'Yes' is grammatically correct but uninformative. The examiner asked for detail; expand into a full sentence to show ability. This addresses sentence structure (ID 26).

× As a food, bread, food changed since you were a child, Yes, yes.

✓ My favorite food has changed since I was a child; it used to be bread, but now I like other things more.

Original is ungrammatical: wrong tense form 'food changed since you were a child', incorrect second-person 'you', repeated words, and awkward commas. This is sentence structure error (ID 26) and subject-verb/agreement confusion (ID 27). Use present perfect 'has changed' to talk about change up to now, keep 1st person consistent, and clarify contrast between past and present.