Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and reduce redundancy. Add one specific detail about why you like it (taste, texture, or occasion) and use a linking phrase to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: My favourite food at the moment is rice with my friend HA's chicken curry. It smells wonderful and has a rich, spicy flavour that I especially enjoy after a long day. Because HA uses fresh spices and slow-cooks the sauce, the chicken is very tender and the dish feels comforting.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and then one or two specific examples with reasons. Avoid irrelevant comments (e.g. 'ordinary lad') and correct small errors (pluralisation, articles). Use a linking word to show contrast between treats and regular meals.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved treats such as ice cream and momos, although they were rare. However, our staple was nutritious rice and curry, so special foods felt like a real treat on festivals or visits to the market.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly, with correct tense and smoother linking words. Provide one concrete example of seasonal food to make the answer specific and add a reason why seasons change the diet.

Ví dụ: Yes, we eat different foods during the year because many crops are seasonal. For example, in autumn we harvest maize and make corn-based dishes, while in spring we enjoy fresh leafy vegetables. This means our diet naturally changes with each harvest.

Gợi ý: Make the change clear and concise. Avoid filler words and repetition. State whether your favourite has changed, give a specific childhood example, then explain current preference with reason and a linking word to show contrast.

Ví dụ: Yes, it has changed somewhat. As a child I loved the smell of goat meat cooked for festivals, and now I still crave goat meat because I associate it with family celebrations. However, I also enjoy simpler everyday meals like rice and curry, which I eat more often.

× Right now my favorite food is rice and chicken Curry made by my best mate HA who make a delicious food for me and it has got the beautiful aroma.

✓ Right now my favorite food is rice and chicken curry made by my best mate HA, who makes delicious food for me and it has a beautiful aroma.

Errors: incorrect capitalization of 'Curry' (should be lowercase), missing comma before nonrestrictive clause, subject-verb agreement 'who make' should be 'who makes', unnecessary article 'the' before 'beautiful aroma' and awkward phrasing 'has got' (use 'has' or 'gives'). Suggestions: use lowercase for common nouns, add a comma before 'who' when the clause describes but does not identify, use third person singular verb 'makes', and say 'has a beautiful aroma' or 'gives off a beautiful aroma' for natural phrasing.

× I was an ordinary lad when I was young, so I naturally craved for ice creams, momos, instant food which were hard to get because our regular meal was rice and Curry which was full of nutrient.

✓ I was an ordinary lad when I was young, so I naturally craved ice cream, momos, and instant food, which were hard to get because our regular meal was rice and curry, which was full of nutrients.

Errors: unnecessary preposition 'for' after 'craved' (crave is transitive), pluralization and article issues: 'ice creams' is usually 'ice cream', 'Curry' should be lowercase, 'nutrient' should be plural 'nutrients'. Also comma needed before nonrestrictive clause. Suggestions: remove 'for', use singular 'ice cream' as an uncountable noun, add commas to separate items, lowercase common nouns, and use plural 'nutrients'.

× In Nepal we grow our food in our own land, so. In different season we harvest various kind of crop, so we ate variety of food throughout the year.

✓ In Nepal we grow our food on our own land. In different seasons we harvest various kinds of crops, so we eat a variety of food throughout the year.

Errors: sentence fragment 'so.' and incorrect preposition 'in our own land' should be 'on our own land'. Number agreement: 'season' should be plural 'seasons', 'various kind of crop' should be 'various kinds of crops' or 'various crops'. Tense and verb form: 'we ate' implies past; context is general present, so use 'we eat'. Also add article 'a' in 'a variety of'. Suggestions: split fragment into two sentences, use correct prepositions, make nouns plural where appropriate, and use present tense for habitual actions.

× Yes, I vividly remember those memories, uh, when I used to hear the smell of goat meat, which we specially prepare on the the same festival.

✓ Yes, I vividly remember those memories, uh, when I used to smell goat meat, which we specially prepared for the same festival.

Errors: 'hear the smell' is incorrect verb choice; one 'hears' smells, so use 'smell' or 'used to smell'. Tense consistency: 'we specially prepare' should match past habitual 'used to' so use past 'prepared'. Preposition 'on the the same festival' is wrong; use 'for the same festival' and remove duplicate 'the'. Suggestions: use appropriate verbs for senses ('smell' not 'hear'), maintain consistent past tense for past habits, and use correct prepositions.

× But nowadays I crave for goat meat.

✓ But nowadays I crave goat meat.

Error: unnecessary preposition 'for' after 'crave' when expressing desire for something; 'crave' is transitive. Suggestion: remove 'for' and use 'crave goat meat'.

× I love those arrows aroma right now.

✓ I love that aroma right now.

Errors: 'arrows' is likely a typo or incorrect word; it should be 'aromatic' or simply 'aroma'. Also 'those' plural does not match singular 'aroma'; use 'that aroma' or 'those aromas' if plural. Suggestion: replace with 'that aroma' or 'that delicious aroma' for clarity.