Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng, trực tiếp nêu món ăn yêu thích; tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp. Cụ thể: (1) Nói tên món ăn đầu tiên như một câu chủ đề. (2) Nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể, dùng từ nối (because / because of / and) để liên kết. (3) Giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu và tránh tiếng lắp. Ví dụ cần nói: “My favourite food is ... because ...”.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is pizza because it tastes delicious and is easy to share with friends. For example, I often eat it at parties, which makes social gatherings more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần tách rõ hai thời điểm (khi nhỏ và hiện tại). Sử dụng thì quá khứ cho sở thích trong quá khứ và thì hiện tại cho hiện tại. Cụ thể: (1) Mở bằng một câu chủ đề: “When I was young, I liked ...”. (2) Giải thích lý do ngắn gọn và thêm so sánh với hiện tại bằng linking words (but / now / however). (3) Dùng từ vựng chính xác: “fast food” thay vì “fat food”, “vegetables” thay vì “vegetable”.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked fast food because it tasted delicious and was convenient. However, now I prefer vegetables because they are healthier and make me feel more energetic.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và dùng từ phù hợp cho mùa. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề: “Yes, I do” hoặc “No, I don't”. (2) Nêu ví dụ cho mùa nóng và mùa lạnh, dùng linking words (for example / in summer / in winter). (3) Tránh từ không đúng như “dream” hoặc “brain”; dùng “cold dishes”, “ice cream” hoặc “hot soup/hot pot”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I usually eat cold dishes or ice cream to feel refreshed, while in winter I prefer hot dishes like hot pot because they keep me warm.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần so sánh rõ ràng giữa quá khứ và hiện tại, dùng thì phù hợp. Cụ thể: (1) Mở bằng câu chủ đề: “Yes, it has” hoặc “No, it hasn't”. (2) Nói rõ món trước đây và lý do, sau đó nêu món hiện tại và lý do, dùng linking words (because / but / however). (3) Tránh câu rời rạc và sửa từ vựng (e.g., “instant noodles” not “turn noodle”).

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite food has changed. When I was a child I loved fast food like fried chicken and instant noodles because they were tasty and convenient, but now I prefer vegetables because I care more about my health.

× I'm a keen offer because because, uh, it's religious and apparently level up at level.

✓ I'm a keen eater because, uh, it's delicious and apparently helps me level up.

The student used 'offer' instead of 'eater' (word choice/pronoun-like error) and unclear phrases. Use 'eater' to indicate someone who likes food. 'It's religious' is likely wrong; replaced with 'it's delicious' to match context. 'Apparently level up at level' is ungrammatical; clarified to 'helps me level up'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns and simple clear phrases; avoid repeating words like 'because because'.

× When I will try I like fat foods because it's delicious and income and convenient and now when I younger I like I like the vegetable.

✓ When I was young I liked fatty foods because they were delicious, filling, and convenient, but now when I was younger I liked vegetables.

The sentence mixes future auxiliary 'will' with past meaning. Use past tense 'was' and 'liked' for childhood. 'Fat foods' better as 'fatty foods'; 'it's' should agree with plural 'they'. 'income' is incorrect word; replaced with 'filling'. The clause 'now when I younger I like I like the vegetable' is inconsistent; likely meant 'When I was younger I liked vegetables.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past for childhood), match subject-verb number, and choose correct vocabulary.

× When it uh, when the weather hot, I usually eat umm, I dream because it made me rest and uh cool MO more breath and cool and uh, when the brain, I usually eat hot pot.

✓ When the weather is hot, I usually eat ice cream because it helps me feel refreshed and cool, and when it's cold, I usually eat hot pot.

Missing verb 'is' after 'weather'; use 'ice cream' instead of 'I dream'. 'Made me rest' is wrong; use 'helps me feel refreshed'. 'MO more breath' is nonsensical; clarified to 'feel refreshed and cool'. 'When the brain' is incorrect for 'when it's cold' or 'when it's winter'; replaced accordingly. Suggestion: include appropriate linking verbs with weather ('is hot'), choose correct nouns, and contrast with 'when it's cold'.

× My favorite change a lot when I try when I was try. I like fast food. It's big, it's convenient and delicious. Such as fried chicken all in turn noodle. But I'm more younger. I like vegetable.

✓ My favorite changed a lot when I was younger. I liked fast food because it's quick, convenient, and delicious, such as fried chicken and instant noodles. But when I was younger I preferred vegetables.

Tense errors: 'change' should be past 'changed' to refer to past; 'when I try when I was try' is incorrect—use 'when I was younger'. 'I like fast food' should be past 'I liked' if speaking about the past. 'It's big' is odd for fast food; 'quick' or 'convenient' fits. 'all in turn noodle' likely means 'instant noodles'. 'But I'm more younger' is ungrammatical; use 'when I was younger'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent when describing past preferences, use clear nouns ('instant noodles'), and avoid comparative errors like 'more younger'.