Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
My favorite food is 3 cup chicken. Three cup chicken is a traditional Chinese food. It has a different and unique material including sesame oil, rice wine, and soy sauce, and it has a richest flavor.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
When I was young, I really enjoyed a sweet food. That is because sweet food can improve my mood and bring happiness, such as a donut. You know Mr. Donut and popcorn. If I want to watch the movie, I will buy a popcorn.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think the flavor can be changed. That is because when I was a child I ate a sweet food such as Donuts and popcorn. Recently I eat a spicy food such as kimchi and milk tea and a three cup of chicken.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yet when I was a child I liked it. It's a sweet food, but I think the things we can make an illness and lie to broken. So I change my flavor from sweet to the spicy.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答较直接但存在语法、用词和表达不自然的问题。应改进语法(例如“3 cup chicken”应为“three-cup chicken”或“Three Cup Chicken”)、词汇搭配(“unique material”应为“key ingredients”)、以及句子流畅度。可以用一到两句说明为什么喜欢,加入具体感官描写并用连接词使回答更连贯。注意句子不要过长,控制在3–4句内。
Ví dụ: My favourite dish is Three-Cup Chicken, a traditional Chinese recipe. Its key ingredients—sesame oil, rice wine and soy sauce—create a rich, savory flavour. I love it because the sauce soaks into the chicken, giving it a tender texture and a slightly sweet, aromatic taste.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答内容重复且语法和用词不准确。应直接给出主题句(I liked sweet snacks when I was young),随后用一两个具体例子和原因支持(e.g. donuts and popcorn make me happy because...)。使用连词如“for example”或“because”来增强连贯性,并注意时态一致和冠词使用(a popcorn → popcorn / a donut)。
Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved sweet snacks. For example, I often ate donuts and popcorn because sugary treats improved my mood and made special occasions, like movie nights, more fun.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答偏离问题且逻辑混乱。考官问的是“是否根据季节改变饮食”,但回答谈过去与现在的口味变化。应直接回答季节性饮食习惯(e.g. eat lighter foods in summer, warm soups in winter),并用具体例子和连词说明原因。避免把不相关信息混在一起,注意食物搭配词汇(milk tea不是辣的,表述要准确)。
Ví dụ: Yes. In summer I prefer light, cooling foods like cold noodles and fresh fruit, while in winter I enjoy warm, hearty dishes such as soups and braised chicken because they help me feel comfortable in the cold.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且语法错误严重,表达不清晰。应先直接回答(Yes or No),然后说明原因并给具体例子。避免无意义短语(如“make an illness and lie to broken”)。用清楚的因果句(because/so)解释为何从甜食转为重口味,控制在2–3句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, my tastes have changed. I used to prefer sweet snacks, but now I like spicier dishes because I enjoy stronger flavours and they feel more satisfying to me.
× My favorite food is 3 cup chicken. Three cup chicken is a traditional Chinese food. It has a different and unique material including sesame oil, rice wine, and soy sauce, and it has a richest flavor.
✓ My favorite food is Three-Cup Chicken. Three-Cup Chicken is a traditional Chinese dish. It has different and unique ingredients, including sesame oil, rice wine, and soy sauce, and it has a rich flavor.
错误类型:形容词/副词使用不当。问题主要在于形容词形式和名词搭配不当。“material”用在食谱上下文不合适,应使用“ingredients(配料)”;“a richest flavor”中使用了最高级“richest”但句意为一般描述,应该用形容词原级“rich”。此外食物专有名词通常以大写和连字符/驼峰书写更自然(Three-Cup Chicken)。建议:使用与语境匹配的名词(ingredients),将最高级改为一般级(rich),并规范专有名词写法。
× When I was young, I really enjoyed a sweet food. That is because sweet food can improve my mood and bring happiness, such as a donut. You know Mr. Donut and popcorn. If I want to watch the movie, I will buy a popcorn.
✓ When I was young, I really enjoyed sweet foods. That was because sweet foods could improve my mood and bring me happiness, such as donuts, Mr. Donut snacks, and popcorn. If I wanted to watch a movie, I would buy popcorn.
错误类型:现在时使用不当及时态不一致。句子中多处时态应与“when I was young”保持过去时一致:主句用过去时(really enjoyed),因此后续描述也应使用过去时(was/could/would/wanted)。另外名词复数和冠词使用不当:sweet food 应改为复数或不可数形式(sweet foods 或 sweets),不需要在 popcorn 前加不定冠词。建议:保持时态一致,使用过去时态描述过去的习惯;将可数名词用复数或用不可数形式。
× If I want to watch the movie, I will buy a popcorn.
✓ If I want to watch a movie, I will buy some popcorn. (或 If I wanted to watch a movie, I would buy some popcorn.)
错误类型:量词使用不当。popcorn 通常为不可数名词,不与不定冠词 a 连用,应使用 some 或省略冠词。句子时态也应与条件句类型一致(现实或与过去相反),因此可根据语境调整为现在/将来或过去/虚拟。建议:将 a popcorn 改为 some popcorn 或 popcorn,并注意条件句时态一致。
× Yes, I think the flavor can be changed. That is because when I was a child I ate a sweet food such as Donuts and popcorn. Recently I eat a spicy food such as kimchi and milk tea and a three cup of chicken.
✓ Yes, I think tastes can change. That is because when I was a child I ate sweet foods such as donuts and popcorn. Recently I eat spicy foods such as kimchi, drink milk tea, and eat Three-Cup Chicken.
错误类型:现在时态与名词形式问题。原句中“the flavor can be changed”不自然,改为“tastes can change”更贴切;描述过去的习惯应使用过去式(ate),但句中混用时态与单复数不当(a sweet food、Donuts 大小写不一致)。milk tea 通常是饮料,不应与“eat”连用。Three-Cup Chicken作为菜名应规范。建议:保持时态一致,使用复数或不可数形式,动词与食物类别搭配正确(eat food, drink tea)。
× Yet when I was a child I liked it. It's a sweet food, but I think the things we can make an illness and lie to broken. So I change my flavor from sweet to the spicy.
✓ When I was a child, I liked it. It was a sweet food, but I thought it could cause illness and harm. So I changed my preference from sweet to spicy.
错误类型:过去时使用不当和句子结构问题。原句时态混乱(现在时 It’s 与过去时 I liked),且表达不清楚('the things we can make an illness and lie to broken' 无意义)。应将对过去的描述全部用过去时(liked, was, thought, could, changed)。‘change my flavor’ 用法不地道,应改为 'changed my preference'。建议:将叙述关于过去的句子改为过去时,使用常见表达(cause illness, harm, preference),并简化句子以增强清晰度。