Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
Well, it's hard to say. I like this spaghetti and they like that, but I like hamburgers very much.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
I loved spaghetti.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I am at New Year I eat dumplings.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
Mary hasn't because I like it very much. It is in my memory and I don't want to forget it, so I actually eat it every day or sometimes.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答应更直接和简洁,开门见山说明最喜欢的食物,然后用一到两句具体理由支持。避免含糊不清和不相关的短语(例如 “they like that”)。可使用连接词如 because 或 since 来组织句子。
Ví dụ: My favourite food is hamburgers because I love the combination of juicy grilled beef and fresh toppings. For example, I often choose ones with cheddar cheese and crispy lettuce because they taste satisfying and are easy to eat on the go.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但太短。可以在一句主题句后用一到两句具体细节补充,例如说明为什么喜欢、谁常做给你吃或给出一个小例子,以使答案更丰满且连贯。
Ví dụ: I loved spaghetti when I was young because my mother used to make a rich tomato and meat sauce that I found comforting. I remember having it every Sunday after playing outside, which made it feel like a special family meal.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答可以更自然并给出更多细节。说明习俗或原因并使用连接词(for example, because, so)来扩展。例如说明这是节日习惯、谁和你一起吃、或描述饺子的特殊意义。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. For example, during the New Year I always eat dumplings because they are a traditional food that symbolizes good luck. My family gathers to make them together, which makes the meal even more meaningful.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答有逻辑和语法错误(例如 ‘Mary hasn't’ 应为 ‘Mine hasn’t’ 或 ‘No, it hasn’t’),表达也不够清晰且冗长。应直接回答是否改变,然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持,避免重复和模糊表述。
Ví dụ: No, my favourite food hasn't changed since childhood because spaghetti has always reminded me of happy family meals. I still eat it regularly, sometimes even several times a week, because it brings back good memories.
× I like this spaghetti and they like that, but I like hamburgers very much.
✓ I like this spaghetti and they like that, but I like hamburgers very much.
原句包含代词指代不清或主谓不一致的潜在问题,但该句按语法不违反清单中的指定类型(主语谓语一致总体正确)。如果想改进,应明确代词指代对象,例如:"I like this spaghetti and they like that dish, but I like hamburgers very much." 建议:在对话中将“they”明确为指代的人或使用单数/复数一致的词。
× What kind of food did you like when you were young? / I loved spaghetti.
✓ What kind of food did you like when you were young? / I loved spaghetti.
问题与回答使用了一般过去时并且一致,语法正确。无需修改。如果有改进空间,回答可以更完整:"When I was young, I loved eating spaghetti." 建议:保持时态一致,必要时补充动词短语使句子更自然。
× Yes, when I am at New Year I eat dumplings.
✓ Yes, at New Year I eat dumplings.
原句中使用现在进行时短语"when I am at New Year"不合习惯表达。节日期间的习惯应使用一般现在时和固定短语,推荐改为"at New Year"或"on New Year's Day"。建议:用一般现在时表达习惯性的行为,并使用固定时间短语(at New Year / on New Year's Day)。(语法类型:6 现在时使用问题)
× Mary hasn't because I like it very much.
✓ No, it hasn't changed because I like it very much.
原句"Mary hasn't"与上下文不相关且缺乏谓语和宾语,导致句子结构错误。根据上下文应回答"Has your favourite food changed?",正确回复为"No, it hasn't changed because I like it very much." 建议:回答类似yes/no问题时完整使用助动词+动词,确保主语和谓语完整。
× It is in my memory and I don't want to forget it, so I actually eat it every day or sometimes.
✓ It is in my memory and I don't want to forget it, so I actually eat it every day or sometimes I do.
句子在表达频率时不自然且末尾"or sometimes"位置不对,造成句子结构不完整。可改为"so I actually eat it every day, or sometimes I do." 或更自然地"so I eat it often, sometimes even every day." 建议:将频率副词位置靠近动词,并确保并列成分结构平行与完整。