Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrasing. Mention where it’s from and briefly explain the two styles with a linking word (for example, “therefore” or “however”). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is char kway teow, a popular stir-fried noodle dish from Malaysia. It comes in two main styles: the Chinese-style, which is darker and richer from soy sauce, and the Malay-style, which is spicier and uses sambal.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence about your childhood preference, then explain why with one or two specific reasons linked by words like “because” or “so”. Avoid filler words and tense confusion. Keep sentences short and natural.

Ví dụ: When I was young I liked McDonald’s because the food was tasty and convenient. I especially remember enjoying the fries and Happy Meals, so I often asked my parents to take me there.

Gợi ý: Give a clear yes/no answer first, then provide a specific example and a reason using linking words such as “for example” or “because”. Avoid unclear phrases and repetitions. Keep it to 2–3 coherent sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I eat lighter meals like salads and cold noodles because I prefer refreshing food, while in winter I eat soups and stews to stay warm.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear yes/no answer, then explain how and why your tastes changed with one or two specific details linked by words such as “because” or “as I grew up”. Avoid fragments and repeated filler words. Keep it concise and logical.

Ví dụ: Yes, it has changed as I grew up because my tastes became more sophisticated. When I was a child I preferred fast food, but now I enjoy traditional dishes like char kway teow because I appreciate the flavors more.

× Being named so popular food and char kway teow have two style.

✓ Char kway teow is a very popular food and has two styles.

The original sentence lacks proper subject-verb structure and uses awkward phrasing. 'Being named so popular food' is ungrammatical; use a clear subject 'Char kway teow' and verb 'is'. Also 'have two style' has number agreement and word order issues; use 'has two styles'. Suggestion: always form a clear subject + verb + complement and make nouns and verbs agree in number.

× 1 is China Chinese, one is Malay style.

✓ One style is Chinese and the other is Malay.

The original fragments are incomplete and use awkward word order. 'China Chinese' is incorrect; use the adjective 'Chinese'. Also present the two items in parallel form: 'One style is Chinese and the other is Malay.' Ensure complete clauses with subjects and verbs.

× I think is McDonald because right now I grow up already.

✓ I think it was McDonald's when I was young because now I have grown up.

The student mixes tenses and omits the subject 'it'. The question asked about childhood preference, so refer to the past: 'it was McDonald's when I was young'. 'Right now I grow up already' is ungrammatical; use present perfect 'I have grown up' to indicate change up to now.

× Then I also miss, uh, the McDonald's because McDonald's is very tasty and delicious.

✓ I also miss McDonald's because it is very tasty and delicious.

The article 'the' before McDonald's is unnecessary in general references; use 'McDonald's'. Use pronoun 'it' to avoid repeating the noun. Keep tense consistent: 'I miss' (present) is fine if the student currently misses it.

× Definitely because every time it wants one sent food also become boring.

✓ Definitely. Over time eating the same food all the time becomes boring.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases ('it wants one sent food'). The intended meaning is that repeated eating becomes boring. Use a clear subject 'eating the same food' and verb 'becomes'. Keep tense present for habitual situations.

× Also can scare scare the foods.

✓ It can also make me tired of the food.

'Scare scare the foods' is meaningless in English. The likely idea is becoming tired of or bored with food. Use appropriate verbs and nouns: 'make me tired of the food' or 'become boring'. Also place adverb 'also' in a natural position.

× Yes, it uh, because grow up, then I will taste was different uh, when I try, the taste is small also, and not, cannot, cannot eat very uh, no.

✓ Yes. As I grew up, my tastes changed, so when I tried it later the flavour was different and I could not eat it as much.

The original contains many tense and structure errors. The question asks about change since childhood, so use past tense for the change: 'As I grew up, my tastes changed.' Use clear clauses: 'when I tried it later the flavour was different' and 'I could not eat it as much.' Avoid filler words and repeat negatives. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb forms (grew, changed, was, could not eat).