Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more coherent and grammatical: give a clear topic sentence, then 2–3 supporting details linked with connectors. Avoid sentence fragments and keep within five sentences. Include specific examples of toppings or pizza styles to make your answer more vivid.

Ví dụ: I like pizza because it tastes delicious and I can customize the toppings. For example, when I travel I try local pizzas such as Neapolitan in Italy or margherita with fresh basil. Also, pizza is convenient to share with friends at parties, so it is my favorite food for social occasions.

Gợi ý: Correct basic grammar and use clearer sequencing. Start with a topic sentence, then give specific supporting details and link them (e.g., because, so). Avoid filler words and unclear phrases; use precise verbs and nouns.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved chocolate because it was sweet and came in small bars that were easy to share. For example, I often shared chocolate with my best friends at breakfast, which helped us bond and created happy memories.

Gợi ý: Fix vocabulary and accuracy: use correct names for foods and correct verb forms. Provide 1–2 clear examples of seasonal foods and how you cook them, using linking words (for example, so, therefore). Ensure sentences are grammatical and specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season because seasonal produce is fresher and more nutritious. For example, in spring I choose bamboo shoots because they have a fresh, slightly sweet flavor, and I often add them to soups or stir-fries.

Gợi ý: Make tense and grammar consistent and give concise reasons for the change. Use linking words like 'however' or 'now' to contrast past and present, and be specific about what you choose now and why.

Ví dụ: Yes, it has changed. As a child I liked chocolate because it was very sweet; however, now I prefer healthier and fresher foods because I want a balanced diet and better nutrition, such as salads, grilled fish, and whole grains.

× My favorite food is pizza because it tastes great and I can change the toppings.

✓ My favorite food is pizza because it tastes great and I can change the toppings.

No grammatical change needed; sentence is correct. Keep adjective 'favorite' and adverb 'great' as is.

× I enjoy the very original pizza in each countries.

✓ I enjoy the original pizza in each country.

Errors: 'very original' is unnatural here and 'countries' should be singular after 'each'. Use 'original' without 'very' and 'each country' to indicate every country individually.

× When I travel abroad.

✓ When I travel abroad, I often try local pizzas.

Fragment: 'When I travel abroad.' is a dependent clause and needs a main clause. Add a main clause to complete the sentence and make the meaning clear.

× What more is also convenient?

✓ What is more convenient is that I can share it with my friends.

Word order and structure are incorrect. Use 'What is more' to introduce an additional point and provide a clause explaining it.

× I can share it with my friends.

✓ I can share it with my friends.

Sentence is correct as written; keeps modal 'can' and object 'it' clear.

× So and the party is always our first priority choosing food.

✓ For parties, choosing food is always our first priority.

Original is ungrammatical and wordy. Reorder into a clear noun phrase 'For parties' and use 'choosing food is our first priority' for correct structure.

× When I was a young, my favorite food was chocolate because it tastes very sweet and comes into a small bars that it was easy to share.

✓ When I was young, my favorite food was chocolate because it tasted very sweet and came in small bars that were easy to share.

Errors: 'a young' should be 'young' (no article). Tense should be past ('tasted', 'came') to match 'was'. Use 'came in small bars' not 'comes into' and plural agreement 'bars' with 'were'.

× When I have a breakfast with my, uh, best friends, I often shared it which help us to bound and make those moments found.

✓ When I had breakfast with my best friends, I often shared it, which helped us bond and made those moments memorable.

Use past tense 'had' to match past context. 'Have breakfast' doesn't need 'a'. 'Shared' should be past 'shared' consistent; change 'help' to past 'helped', 'bound' to 'bond', and 'make those moments found' to 'made those moments memorable' for correct collocation.

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

✓ Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Question is correct in present simple for habitual action; no change needed.

× Yes, I prefer seasonal foods because they are fresher and contains more nutrition.

✓ Yes, I prefer seasonal foods because they are fresher and contain more nutrients.

Subject 'they' is plural, so verb should be 'contain' not 'contains'. 'Nutrition' is an uncountable noun; 'nutrients' is more natural here.

× For example, I will choose the bamboo shoes in the spring because if taste have it's ever sour flavors and taste fresher so I will put it into the soup or the stir fries.

✓ For example, I choose bamboo shoots in the spring because they often have a slightly sour flavor and taste fresher, so I put them into soup or stir-fries.

Multiple errors: 'bamboo shoes' should be 'bamboo shoots'. Tense adjusted to habitual present 'choose'. 'If taste have it's ever sour flavors' is ungrammatical; correct to 'they often have a slightly sour flavor'. Use plural agreement 'them' and correct compound noun 'stir-fries'.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

✓ Has your favorite food changed since you were a child?

Question is correct (present perfect) for change since childhood; only spelling adjusted to American 'favorite' to match earlier usage, otherwise no grammatical change needed.

× Yes, when I was a child my favorite food is chocolate because it is the really sweet.

✓ Yes, when I was a child my favorite food was chocolate because it was really sweet.

Tense mismatch: use past tense 'was' to match 'when I was a child'. Remove extraneous 'the' before 'really sweet'.

× But further later on I right now much prefer to choose a healthier and fresher foods I start to think about to balance my daily diets and also the nutrition it contains.

✓ But later on I much prefer healthier, fresher foods. I have started to think about balancing my daily diet and the nutrition it contains.

Run-on sentence with tense and article issues. 'Prefer' should be followed by noun phrase without 'to choose'. Use plural 'foods' without 'a'. Split into two sentences, use present perfect 'have started' for recent change, 'balancing my daily diet' (singular) and 'the nutrition it contains' for clarity.