Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
My favorite food is hamburger because it's very delicious. When I was tired, I can fast eat it, then I can get energy to do what things I want.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
When I was young, my favorite food was fruit, and my favorite food is strawberry because when I was little I think red is a beautiful color, so I like it. Red fruits, for example, apple, Peach and strawberry. And strawberry is very easy.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course in our countries we eat dumplings when the Chinese New Year and when we want to go someplace we eat noodles to give a best wishes. And I like eat different food when I do different things, for example like.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course I was. I like it strawberry when I was little. But when I go get older I like eat hamburgers because I think I can eat it very fast and it has a it has energy.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 句子需要更自然和连贯。回答应直接开门见山说明喜好,然后用一到两句简短而具体的理由和例子来支持。注意时态和语法(例如 use 'can eat quickly' 或 'can eat it quickly',以及用现在完成或一般现在时),避免冗长或重复。可以加入连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: My favourite food is hamburgers. I like them because they are tasty and convenient; when I'm tired I can eat one quickly and it gives me energy to keep working.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答应更有条理和具体。用一两句总结过去的偏好,然后举具体例子并说明原因。注意语法一致(past tense for childhood)与词汇大小写,并使用适当的连接词(for example, because)。避免冗词如“and strawberry is very easy”意义不明,应说明为何容易(e.g. easy to eat)。
Ví dụ: When I was young I loved fruit, especially strawberries. I liked them because of their bright red colour and sweet taste; they were convenient to eat as a snack, for example after school.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更准确、有逻辑并补充细节。直接回答后举两个典型季节性或场合性食物的例子,并说明原因或文化背景。注意语法(e.g. 'in our country','to wish someone good luck','I like to eat different foods for different occasions'),避免未完成的句子。
Ví dụ: Yes. For example, in my country we eat dumplings at Chinese New Year to symbolise wealth, and we often eat long noodles for good luck before a journey. I also choose different foods when I exercise or study, like light salads when I want to feel energetic.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 需要更清晰地比较过去与现在的喜好。用一两句陈述变化,再给出具体原因,注意时态和语法('Yes, it has' 或 'Yes, my favourite food has changed';'when I was little','as I got older')。避免重复短语如 'it has a it has energy'。
Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite food has changed. When I was little I loved strawberries because of their sweet taste, but as I got older I prefer hamburgers because they are quick to eat and give me energy when I'm busy.
× My favorite food is hamburger because it's very delicious.
✓ My favorite food is hamburgers because they're very delicious.
学生在谈论一般喜好时应使用复数形式“hamburgers”更自然;同时与复数名词搭配的代词也应为复数“they're”。建议:谈论种类或一般喜好时用复数名词,例如“I like apples.”。
× When I was tired, I can fast eat it, then I can get energy to do what things I want.
✓ When I was tired, I could eat it quickly, and then I could get the energy to do what I wanted.
句中时态为过去(When I was tired),情态动词应使用过去形式“could”;“fast eat”是不正确的搭配,应改为副词+动词“eat quickly”;“do what things I want”结构不通顺,应改为“do what I wanted”。建议:保持时态一致,掌握情态动词时态变化,并用副词修饰动词。
× What kind of food did you like when you were young? Student: When I was young, my favorite food was fruit, and my favorite food is strawberry because when I was little I think red is a beautiful color, so I like it.
✓ When I was young, my favorite food was fruit, and my favorite fruit was strawberries because when I was little I thought red was a beautiful color, so I liked it.
提问使用过去时,回答应保持过去时。句中出现现在时“is/think/like”与上下文时态不一致,应改为过去时“was/thought/liked”;“strawberry”在泛指喜好时用复数“strawberries”。建议:叙述过去经历时全部用过去时,注意名词单复数。
× Red fruits, for example, apple, Peach and strawberry.
✓ Red fruits, for example, apples, peaches and strawberries.
列举名词时应使用复数形式(apples, peaches, strawberries)且首字母大小写应统一;句中没有错误的介词但存在名词复数错误,主要问题是名词形式。建议:列举类别时用复数形式。
× And strawberry is very easy.
✓ And strawberries are very easy to eat.
原句“strawberry is very easy”缺少动词宾语结构,不完整。应补足动词不定式结构“easy to eat”并使用复数“strawberries”。建议:注意形容词后常接不定式说明具体内容,例如“easy to do sth”。
× Yes, of course in our countries we eat dumplings when the Chinese New Year and when we want to go someplace we eat noodles to give a best wishes.
✓ Yes, of course in our country we eat dumplings at Chinese New Year, and when we travel we eat noodles to give best wishes.
句中“in our countries”应为单数“in our country”或“In our country”;固定短语为“at Chinese New Year”;“go someplace”更自然为“travel”或“go somewhere”;“a best wishes”中“best wishes”是复数祝福,不需要冠词“a”。建议:使用固定搭配(at Chinese New Year),注意可数名词与冠词配合。
× And I like eat different food when I do different things, for example like.
✓ And I like eating different foods when I do different things, for example, when I'm studying or traveling.
动词“like”后应接动名词“eating”而不是不带to的动词原形“eat”;“different food”在泛指时用复数“different foods”;句末“for example like”不完整,应给出具体例子。建议:记住动词搭配,如“like + -ing”,并补全句子内容,使表达完整。
× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? Student: Yes, of course I was. I like it strawberry when I was little.
✓ Yes, of course. I liked strawberries when I was little.
回答含混不清,“I was”独立使用不合适。问题用Present Perfect(Has ... changed),回答可用现在完成或过去时解释变化,但学生选择过去时时应说“I liked...”。同时“I like it strawberry”语序和词形错误,应为“I liked strawberries”。建议:回答时避免孤立的“I was”,保持时态一致,使用正确词序与名词形式。
× But when I go get older I like eat hamburgers because I think I can eat it very fast and it has a it has energy.
✓ But as I got older, I liked eating hamburgers because I thought I could eat them very quickly and they gave me energy.
描述年龄变化应使用过去时“got older/liked”;“go get older”不正确,应为“got older”或“as I got older”;“like eat”应为“liked eating”;代词与名词数一致“them”对应“hamburgers”;“it has a it has energy”重复且用法错误,改为“they gave me energy”。建议:注意固定表达“as I got older”,动词搭配“like + -ing”,以及代词与先行词数的一致性。