Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장이 전반적으로 이해되지만 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 말할 수 있습니다. 주제문으로 바로 시작하고 이유를 설명할 때 동사 시제와 어순을 다듬으세요. 또한 중복 표현(‘favorite’ 반복)을 피하고 장소 정보를 더 구체적으로 표현하면 좋습니다. 예: 주제문 → 이유 → 구체적 세부사항(어떤 종류의 초밥인지, 왜 특별한지) 순으로 2~3문장으로 정리하세요.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is sushi. I often eat it when I visit my hometown because there’s a small family-run restaurant near my apartment that makes very fresh nigiri. I especially like salmon sushi because of its rich, buttery texture.

Gợi ý: 의미는 전달되지만 문법과 표현이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 과거 습관을 표현할 때는 ‘used to’나 ‘would’를 활용하고, ‘snacks taste unnatural’ 같은 표현은 더 자연스러운 이유(예: 너무 달다, 인공적이다)를 제시하세요. 또한 부정문 대신 긍정적인 비교를 통해 풍부한 세부사항을 추가하세요.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I used to eat a lot of fresh fruit and rarely ate processed snacks. I found packaged snacks too sweet and artificial, so I preferred apples, oranges and bananas as healthier alternatives.

Gợi ý: 대체로 잘 대답했지만 몇몇 어색한 표현(‘at different times of one year’)을 고치고, 연결어를 사용해 문장들을 더 매끄럽게 이어보세요. 계절별 이유(신선도, 계절성)나 구체적인 어떻게 먹는지(예: 샐러드, 주스) 같은 세부사항을 추가하면 더 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes. I tend to eat seasonal fruits throughout the year. For instance, in summer I enjoy strawberries and watermelons because they’re very juicy and refreshing, and I often have them as a snack or in smoothies.

Gợi ý: 의미는 전달되지만 어색한 문장구조와 모호한 표현(‘some beef’)이 있습니다. 변화를 말할 때는 ‘used to’나 ‘I used to prefer… but now I prefer…’ 형태를 사용하세요. 이유(맛, 식감, 건강, 경험)를 덧붙이면 답변이 더 설득력 있습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, my tastes have changed. I used to prefer fish when I was a child, but now I prefer beef because I enjoy its richer flavour and I often cook grilled steak at home.

× I love to eat sushi whenever I go to my hometown because around my apartment there is a favorite restaurant.

✓ I love to eat sushi whenever I go to my hometown because there is a favorite restaurant near my apartment.

'Around my apartment there is a favorite restaurant' is understandable but awkward; native speakers use 'near my apartment' or 'around my apartment' with a different word order. Reordering to 'there is a favorite restaurant near my apartment' is more natural and clear. Suggestion: Use 'near' to indicate proximity and place 'there is' before the noun phrase for natural English word order.

× When I was young I really loved eating fruits.

✓ When I was young, I really loved eating fruit.

'Fruits' is grammatically correct but in English uncountable 'fruit' is more natural when speaking generally. The past tense 'loved' is correct. Suggestion: Use 'fruit' for general reference to types of fruit in past context.

× I didn't even eat any kind of snacks because they taste like a bit unnatural.

✓ I didn't even eat any kind of snacks because they tasted a bit unnatural.

The sentence mixes past ('didn't eat') with present ('taste'). Maintain past tense throughout by changing 'taste' to 'tasted'. Also 'like a bit unnatural' is unidiomatic; use 'a bit unnatural' without 'like'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and remove unnecessary 'like'.

× I eat many kinds of fruits at different times of one year.

✓ I eat many kinds of fruit at different times of the year.

Use 'fruit' (uncountable) for general reference and 'the year' rather than 'one year' when referring to seasons within a typical year. Suggestion: Say 'at different times of the year' to refer to seasonal variation.

× For example, every summer I prefer eating strawberries and watermelons because they taste very juicy and sweet.

✓ For example, every summer I prefer to eat strawberries and watermelons because they are very juicy and sweet.

Both 'prefer eating' and 'prefer to eat' are acceptable; however, matching the predicate 'taste' to 'are' is more natural when describing characteristics. Use 'are very juicy and sweet' to describe the fruits. Suggestion: Prefer 'prefer to eat' for clarity and 'are' for inherent properties.

× Yes, I have felt some changes in my preference of food.

✓ Yes, I have noticed some changes in my food preferences.

'Have felt' is grammatical but unnatural; 'have noticed' is better to express awareness of change. Use 'preferences' plural and 'food preferences' or 'preference for food' is more natural. Suggestion: Use 'have noticed' and pluralize 'preferences'.

× So when I was a child I liked fish more than some beef, but nowadays I prefer eating beef rather than fish.

✓ When I was a child, I liked fish more than beef, but nowadays I prefer beef to fish.

'Some beef' is unnecessary—use 'beef' generally. For comparisons, use 'prefer X to Y' rather than 'prefer X rather than Y'. Also remove 'So' at the start for concision. Suggestion: Use 'prefer X to Y' and keep parallel nouns without 'some'.