Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答自然但填充词较多，句子有重复与语法小错误，应更直接地给出主题句并用一到两句具体细节支持，控制在最多五个句子内。注意使用连词（for example, moreover, also）使结构更连贯，并改正如“That’s will be”之类的语法错误。

Ví dụ: My favourite food is salad because it is quick and healthy to prepare. For example, I usually combine fresh vegetables and fruits, add a dressing, and sprinkle nuts for extra texture. I also change the sauces to vary the flavour, so it never gets boring.

Gợi ý: 回答包含核心信息但有语法与用词错误且较多犹豫语。应以直接的主题句开始，然后用具体细节（味道、做法、情感）支持，减少停顿词并修正语法（例如“the soup was”而非“they soup was”）。

Ví dụ: When I was young, my favourite dish was my mother’s mushroom soup because it tasted light and refreshing. She usually cooked it simply with mushrooms, a little salt and sometimes ginger, which made it comforting and warm.

Gợi ý: 回答思路清楚但表达混乱，存在很多口头填充词和不准确词汇（例如 “drinkies”, “hot pop”）。应用一到两句清晰对比，使用连接词（for instance, whereas）并给出具体例子（哪类热菜、冷饮）。避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For instance, in summer I prefer salads and cold beverages to feel refreshed, whereas in winter I choose hot soups and stews to keep warm.

Gợi ý: 回答表达含糊且有较多语法与词汇错误（如“fight with some sugar”, “keep their feet”），逻辑不够清晰。应先给直接对比句，然后解释原因并用具体细节支持，避免不恰当或难懂的短语。

Ví dụ: Yes, it has changed. As a child I loved fatty meats and sweet dishes, but now I prefer refreshing salads because I want to eat healthier and feel lighter.

× For example, you have some veggies and some fruits.

✓ For example, you have some veggies and some fruit.

句中使用了可数名词复数“fruits”，但作泛指时常用不可数名词“fruit”或“fruits”取决于语境。这里列举两类食材并作为整体类别时，用“fruit”更自然。建议将“fruits”改为“fruit”。

× You can mix it together and put some sauce on it and if you.

✓ You can mix them together and put some sauce on them.

句中指代前文的“veggies and fruit”是复数，故指代代词应为复数“them”，而不是单数“it”。将“it”改为“them”。

× Or sometimes down to eat some as a flavors, you can just change the sauces and you can just put some nuts on that.

✓ Or sometimes to change the flavor, you can just change the sauce and you can just put some nuts on it.

原句中代词使用混乱（“that”和“as a flavors”），另外“flavors”与主语搭配不当。应明确表达“改变口味”，使用单数不可数名词“flavor”，并采用代词“it”指代“salad”。

× That's will be very good.

✓ That will be very good.

“That”作主语时与助动词“will”构成将来时，不应有额外的“'s”。原句多了“'s”，导致主谓不一致，应删除。

× Back to my childhood, my favorite food would be umm, the mushroom soup made from my mom because they soup was really refreshing and uh, my mom didn't put some uh umm.

✓ Back in my childhood, my favorite food would be the mushroom soup my mom made because the soup was really refreshing, and my mom didn't add many ingredients.

原句中“they soup”不符合第三人称单数名词的用法，应为“the soup”。同时“made from my mom”表达不自然，改为“my mom made”。为了语法正确及通顺，对句子结构做了调整。

× my mom didn't put some uh umm. Other ingredients in it, but some salt and mushroom, sometimes some, uh, ginger.

✓ My mom didn't add many other ingredients to it, just some salt, mushrooms and sometimes ginger.

“didn't put some”与否定搭配不当，否定句常用“any”或“many/few”，此处用“many other ingredients”更合适；并将名词复数形式和列举做了规范。

× And then she put water into it.

✓ And then she added water to it.

习惯用法中通常说“add water to something”，而不是“put water into it”。使用“added”也更自然。

× For me, umm, there is. I just eat different, umm, dishes between, uh, summer and winter, for instance, I be, I'm drawn to eat some salad or some cool, umm, drinkies because uh, that's makes me, that's makes me really. Go down.

✓ For me, I just eat different dishes in summer and winter. For instance, I'm drawn to eating salads or cool drinks in summer because they help me cool down.

原句断断续续，存在不完整句（“there is.”）和时态、结构混乱。将句子合并为完整句并使用正确的动词形式（drawn to + -ing），修正“drinkies”为“drinks”，并改为“cool down”。

× But on the other On the other hand, in the winter I'm I have inclined to have some hot pop that makes me warm up.

✓ But on the other hand, in winter I tend to have something hot that warms me up.

原句重复“on the other”，人称和动词搭配混乱（“I'm I have inclined”），应使用固定表达“tend to”或“am inclined to”，并用“warms”与主语一致。将“hot pop”改为更自然的“something hot”。

× When I was a child, I, I'm really drawn to eat some fatty, uh, meats like, uh, some pork and with, uh, and fight with some sugar and lots of integrated.

✓ When I was a child, I was really drawn to eating fatty meats like pork, often cooked with sugar and many other ingredients.

讨论过去时应使用过去时态：把“I'm really drawn”改为“I was really drawn”，并使用“drawn to + -ing”。“lots of integrated”不通，改为“many other ingredients”。

× But when I grow up, umm, you know, some grows, they want to keep their feet.

✓ But when I grew up, I wanted to take care of my health.

句子时态与主语不一致。“When I grow up”应为过去对过去经历的描述用“when I grew up”。原句“keep their feet”语义错误，疑为“keep fit/keep healthy”，改为“take care of my health”。

× So nowadays I am, I lean towards to some, uh, refreshing salad and it can keep me.

✓ So nowadays I lean towards refreshing salads because they help me stay healthy.

“lean towards to”搭配错误，应为“lean towards”不加“to”；“salad”复数更自然；句子结尾“it can keep me”不完整，改为明确目的“help me stay healthy”。