Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
My favorite food is pizza. I'm crazy about its fresh taste. It's very delicious.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
When I was young, my favorite food is absolutely pizza. I'm totally crazy about its fresh taste. I think it's very delicious.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. When it is summer I prefer it cold foods. When winter comes I prefer it warm food to cozy my body.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, not change it. When I was a child, my favorite food was pizza. Now my favorite food is pizza either.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 表达要更自然并避免重复,同时控制在最多五句。可以先直接回答,然后用一两句具体理由(例如口感、配料或场合)来丰富内容,使用连词让句子更衔接。注意使用时态和词序的准确性。
Ví dụ: My favourite food is pizza. I love it because of its crispy crust and fresh toppings like tomato and basil, which make each bite flavorful. I often eat pizza with friends on weekends because it’s easy to share.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 注意时态一致性(描述过去的喜好要用过去时),避免与第一题重复相同表述。可以先用一句过去时陈述,然后补充具体记忆或原因,使用连接词让表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: When I was young, my favourite food was pizza. I remember my parents often bought small cheese pizzas for me after school, and I loved the warm, cheesy taste. Those memories made pizza my go-to treat.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 注意语法和搭配(例如 ‘prefer cold foods’ 而不是 ‘prefer it cold foods’),表达要简洁并给出具体例子说明不同季节的食物差异,使用连接词(such as, for example)增强逻辑。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. In summer I prefer cold foods, such as salads, cold noodles or smoothies, because they help me feel refreshed. In winter I usually choose warm, hearty dishes like soups or stews to keep my body warm.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要用完整、正确的句子;否定句要语法正确(例如 ‘No, it hasn’t changed.’)。避免重复同样的信息,可补充简短原因说明为什么没有改变。
Ví dụ: No, it hasn’t changed. When I was a child my favourite food was pizza, and I still enjoy it now because I like the variety of toppings and how easy it is to share with friends.
× When I was young, my favorite food is absolutely pizza.
✓ When I was young, my favorite food was absolutely pizza.
该句描述过去的情况,应使用过去时。原句使用现在时“is”与时间状语“when I was young”时态不一致。建议在谈论过去的习惯或喜好时将动词改为过去式,例如用“was”。
× I'm totally crazy about its fresh taste.
✓ I was totally crazy about its fresh taste.
此句位于描述过去的句子中(与“When I was young”连用),应使用过去时。原句使用现在时“I'm”与过去背景不一致。建议将表示当时状态的动词改为过去式。
× I think it's very delicious.
✓ I thought it was very delicious.
句子出现在回忆过去的情境,应统一使用过去时。原句使用现在时与上下文不符。建议把表态动词和描述都改为过去式以保持时态一致。
× When it is summer I prefer it cold foods.
✓ When it is summer, I prefer cold foods.
原句中“it cold foods”结构错误。“prefer”后直接接名词短语,不需要代词“it”。此外“cold foods”作为不可数或可数复数视具体食物,一般可用“cold foods”或更自然的“cold dishes/foods”。建议去掉多余的“it”并在“summer”后加逗号。
× When winter comes I prefer it warm food to cozy my body.
✓ When winter comes, I prefer warm food to keep my body cozy.
原句有多处问题:不应在“prefer”后加“it”;“cozy my body”表达不自然。改为“prefer warm food to keep my body cozy”更符合英文习惯,使用不定式表示目的。并在“when winter comes”后加逗号。
× No, not change it.
✓ No, it hasn't changed.
原句语序和时态都不正确。要表达“没有改变”,应使用现在完成时“hasn't changed”或过去式“didn't change”视上下文而定。因为问题是“Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?”,恰当回答为现在完成时“it hasn't changed”。建议使用完整主语+助动词+过去分词结构。
× Now my favorite food is pizza either.
✓ Now my favorite food is pizza, too.
“either”一般用于否定句中,而肯定句中表示“也”应使用“too”或“as well”。因此将“either”改为“too”,并用逗号连接更自然。