Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetitions and fillers, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also correct small errors (e.g., 'similar to Japanese cuisine', 'soy sauce' relevance).

Ví dụ: My favourite food is Thai cuisine because it is very healthy and balanced. For example, many dishes use fresh herbs and vegetables, and the flavours are light yet complex. I also enjoy Japanese food sometimes because both cuisines emphasize freshness and simple seasoning.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and organize details logically. Avoid confusion and irrelevant fragments. Say what you liked, why you liked it, and give a brief example. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'I liked strawberries', 'my mother bought them for me').

Ví dụ: When I was a child I loved strawberries because they tasted sweet and were easy to eat. For example, my mother often bought fresh strawberries for me as a snack after school, which made me very happy.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give seasonal examples. Explain how seasons or occasions affect your choices, and use linking words ('for example', 'also'). Avoid repeating 'because' twice. Correct phrasing: 'I do' then justify.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I prefer light Mediterranean dishes like Italian salads and pasta, while in winter I enjoy heartier French stews. Also, my husband and I like trying different cuisines throughout the year, which influences our meals.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear, complete answer: say whether it changed and explain why with specific reasons and a short example. Avoid fragments and unclear phrases. Use linking words ('because', 'so', 'now') and correct grammar ('I cook for myself', 'I live in Tokyo').

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I preferred simple snacks, but now I enjoy Korean dishes because I live in Tokyo with my husband and we cook Korean food at home. For example, we often make kimchi stew together, which I now love.

× I like Thai food because Thai, Thai food is very healthy and I feel, umm, I feel it's similar Japanese food cuisine. So I like Thai food and I like soy sauce.

✓ I like Thai food because it is very healthy and I feel it is similar to Japanese cuisine. I also like soy sauce.

Errors: redundant words and awkward structure; missing preposition 'to' after 'similar'; unnecessary repetition of 'Thai' and 'I feel'; incorrect noun order 'Japanese food cuisine'. Suggestion: Remove repetitions, use 'it' to refer to Thai food, add 'to' after 'similar', and use 'Japanese cuisine' for natural phrasing.

× When I was a kid, kids, I was like strawberries because I have had sick, uh, when I was child food and my mother bought to me this.

✓ When I was a kid I liked strawberries because I had been sick when I was a child and my mother bought them for me.

Errors: repetition 'kids'; incorrect verb choice 'was like' should be 'liked' (past tense preference); incorrect tense and form 'I have had sick' should be past perfect or simple past 'I had been sick'/'I was sick'; 'when I was child' needs article 'a child'; 'bought to me this' uses wrong word order and pronoun — use 'bought them for me'. Suggestion: Use simple past to narrate childhood preferences, include articles, correct verb forms, and place objects after verbs ('bought them for me').

× Yes I do because I like eating food such as Italian and French because my husband also likes eating different cultural food.

✓ Yes, I do, because I like eating Italian and French food and my husband also likes foods from different cultures.

Errors: word order and noun choices — 'eating food such as Italian and French' is awkward; 'different cultural food' is unnatural. Suggestion: Use 'Italian and French food' and 'foods from different cultures' for correct noun phrases and clearer meaning. Commas improve readability.

× Yes, make Koreans. Uh, I'm living in Tokyo with my husband and I cooking. I'm cooking the food myself for myself. So in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I eat Korean food now. I'm living in Tokyo with my husband and I cook the food myself. In my childhood, I did not.

Errors: 'make Koreans' is ungrammatical — needs subject and verb such as 'I eat/make Korean food'; 'I cooking' missing auxiliary verb 'am' or should be 'I cook'; 'I'm cooking the food myself for myself' is repetitive — use 'I cook the food myself'; final fragment 'So in my childhood.' is incomplete. Suggestion: Use complete sentences, correct verb forms (present simple for habitual actions 'I cook'), avoid repetition ('for myself' once), and clarify contrast with childhood using a full clause.