Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you always bring a lot of keys with you?
Thí sinh
Unfortunately no I didn't like bring it with me because most of the time I may lose it and first reason I just prefer don't take it with me.
Giám khảo
Have you ever lost your keys?
Thí sinh
If I remember about it, I didn't lose any keys because I didn't bring it me. Most of the time my father bring it and when we must unlock the door, my father unlocked the door.
Giám khảo
Do you often forget the keys and lock yourself out?
Thí sinh
Absolutely yes. At once I lost my keys and for the reason I stayed out and this time I prefer to prefer to my to call my father and my father come in and unlock the door.
Giám khảo
Do you think it's a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour?
Thí sinh
From audacity it's a good idea for young people because most of people work during the day and they cannot before their time and this time when they have a child and they come from the school, they can they mustn't stay at all and they can their kids from the nerves.
Do you always bring a lot of keys with you?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: Javob qisqa, noto‘g‘ri grammatik tuzilma va so‘z tanlovi bor. Avvalo savolga aniq va sodda bosh jumla bilan javob bering (Yes/No + sabab). Keyin 1–2 qo‘shimcha jumla bilan aniq sabab yoki misol keltiring. Natijada yordamchi so‘zlar (because, so, therefore, for example) dan foydalaning va fe’l va egalik shakllariga e'tibor bering.
Ví dụ: No, I don’t usually carry many keys because I often worry about losing them. For example, I only take my house key when I know I’ll be out late, otherwise I leave it at home.
Have you ever lost your keys?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Javob chalkash va grammatik xatolar ko‘p. Savolga bevosita “Yes” yoki “No” bilan boshlang va keyin aniq voqea yoki sababi bilan davom eting. O‘tgan zamon va fe‘lni to‘g‘ri ishlating (lost, brought, unlocked). Bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (because, so, when) foydalaning.
Ví dụ: No, I haven't really lost my keys because I usually don't carry them. My father usually brings the keys, so he always unlocks the door when we get home.
Do you often forget the keys and lock yourself out?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: Javob aniq, lekin grammatik va lug‘aviy xatolar ko‘p hamda bir oz takrorlanuvchi. Oddiy va ravon gap tuzing: bosh jumla (Yes/No + frequency), so‘ng misol va natija. O‘tgan voqeani so‘zlashda to‘g‘ri vaqt va iboralarni (once, one time, I had to call) ishlating.
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes forget my keys. Once I left them at home and had to call my father, who then came and unlocked the door for me.
Do you think it's a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Javob mazmunan tushunarli, lekin ifoda tartibi va grammatika yomon. Savolga aniq fikrni boshlang (I think... / I don't think...). Keyin sabablar bering va aniq misol keltiring. “Neighbour” bilan bog‘liq xavfsizlik va ishonch haqida gapiring, bog‘lovchi so‘zlar (because, for example, however) qo‘shing.
Ví dụ: I think it can be a good idea to leave a spare key with a trusted neighbour because many parents are busy during the day. For example, if a child comes home from school early, a neighbour could let them in safely.
× Unfortunately no I didn't like bring it with me because most of the time I may lose it and first reason I just prefer don't take it with me.
✓ Unfortunately no. I don't like to bring it with me because most of the time I may lose it and, for the first reason, I just prefer not to take it with me.
The student mixed past and present tenses incorrectly (used 'didn't like' and 'don't' inconsistently) and used incorrect verb forms ('bring' instead of 'to bring', 'don't take' instead of 'not to take'). Use present simple for habitual preferences: 'I don't like to bring it' and 'I prefer not to take it'. Also add punctuation and 'for the first reason' for clarity.
× If I remember about it, I didn't lose any keys because I didn't bring it me.
✓ If I remember correctly, I haven't lost any keys because I didn't bring them with me.
Use present perfect ('haven't lost') to describe past experiences relevant now and correct phrase 'remember correctly'. Also correct object pronoun and plurality: 'them' for 'keys' and include 'with' in 'bring them with me'.
× Most of the time my father bring it and when we must unlock the door, my father unlocked the door.
✓ Most of the time my father brings them and when we need to unlock the door, my father unlocks it.
Subject-verb agreement requires third person singular 'brings' and 'unlocks'. Use present simple for habitual actions ('need', 'unlock'). Avoid mixing past 'unlocked' with habitual context.
× Absolutely yes. At once I lost my keys and for the reason I stayed out and this time I prefer to prefer to my to call my father and my father come in and unlock the door.
✓ Absolutely yes. Once I lost my keys and I had to stay outside, so I preferred to call my father and he came and unlocked the door.
Use past simple consistently when recounting a specific past event ('lost', 'stayed', 'preferred', 'came', 'unlocked'). Remove duplicated words and incorrect infinitive forms. Use 'had to' to express necessity in past.
× From audacity it's a good idea for young people because most of people work during the day and they cannot before their time and this time when they have a child and they come from the school, they can they mustn't stay at all and they can their kids from the nerves.
✓ Generally, it's a good idea for young people because most people work during the day and cannot come home early. When they have a child who comes home from school, they don't have to wait around and can avoid stressing their kids.
Original contains many modal and vocabulary errors. Use 'can' and 'cannot' correctly ('cannot come home early'), and 'don't have to' for lack of necessity. Replace unclear phrases ('from audacity', 'most of people', 'they mustn't stay at all', 'they can their kids from the nerves') with clear alternatives. Ensure proper noun forms and sentence structure.