Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a direct, concise answer first and avoid asking questions back to the examiner. Use correct grammar and simple linking to add one or two clear reasons. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk every day because it helps me get fresh air and occasionally meet neighbors, which makes my walks enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then support it with a specific reason and a brief example. Use past tense consistently and avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and 'like'.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't go outside often as a child. I spent most evenings doing homework, so I had little time for outdoor play.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give two clear, specific reasons linked with simple connectors. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'fresh air', 'health') and grammar (plural/singular) will make your answer sound natural.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because of the greenery and fresh air, which help them relax. In addition, parks are social places where families exercise or friends meet.

Gợi ý: State the place clearly, then give one or two coherent reasons. Avoid repetition and incorrect words; use accurate phrases (e.g., 'relieve stress', 'play chess') and keep sentences short and grammatical.

Ví dụ: I would like to take a long walk in my schoolyard because it is large and peaceful. I could walk with a friend to relieve stress and maybe play chess afterward.

Gợi ý: Answer in past or present perfect as appropriate, then add one or two clear reasons. Avoid filler words and correct word forms (e.g., 'a place', 'social place'). Keep it concise and grammatical.

Ví dụ: Lately I have been walking in the park because it is a pleasant place to exercise and spend time with family or friends.

× Definitely yes. Are you too walk a lot? Because when I going go for a walk like I can may meet other person and get some fresh air.

✓ Definitely yes. Do you walk a lot too? Because when I go for a walk, I may meet other people and get some fresh air.

Errors: incorrect modal/auxiliary verbs and mixed forms. 'Are you too walk a lot?' should be 'Do you walk a lot too?' using the correct auxiliary for present simple questions. 'When I going go for a walk' mixes present participle and base form; use 'when I go for a walk' for habitual action. 'I can may meet other person' uses two modals and wrong noun number; use a single modal 'may' and plural 'people': 'I may meet other people'. Suggestions: form yes/no questions with do/does for present simple, avoid stacking modals, and match plurality for count nouns.

× When I was a child, I didn't usually go outside because, you know, when I was young, I used to learn a lot. Like I had to finish my homework every night, so I don't have any time to play outdoors.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't usually go outside because, you know, when I was young, I used to study a lot. I had to finish my homework every night, so I didn't have any time to play outdoors.

Errors: inconsistent tense usage. 'Used to learn' is awkward; use 'used to study' or 'study a lot'. 'So I don't have any time' mixes present with past context; use past 'didn't have any time'. Suggestions: keep past tense consistently when describing habitual past actions and use appropriate verbs ('study' rather than 'learn' for regular schooling activities).

× I think people are walking in the park because of the greenery and fast air.

✓ I think people walk in the park because of the greenery and fresh air.

Errors: progressive form incorrectly used for general truth; use simple present 'walk' for habits. 'Fast air' is incorrect collocation; correct adjective is 'fresh air'. Suggestions: use simple present for habitual/general statements and choose appropriate adjectives.

× We have them relaxed.

✓ They help us relax.

Errors: incorrect pronoun and structure; 'We have them relaxed' is ungrammatical. The intended meaning is that parks help people relax: use 'They help us relax.' Suggestions: use correct subject ('They' referring to parks) and verb 'help' with base verb 'relax'.

× Park are also social place where people can exercise, spend time with family or meet friends.

✓ Parks are also social places where people can exercise, spend time with family, or meet friends.

Errors: missing plural marker and articles. 'Park are' should be 'Parks are' (plural). 'Social place' should be plural 'social places'. Add commas for clarity. Suggestions: match plural nouns with plural verbs and pluralize countable nouns.

× So they're good both for help and socializing.

✓ So they're good both for health and socializing.

Errors: 'for help' is wrong word choice; intended 'health'. 'They're' referring to parks is acceptable. Suggestions: choose correct noun 'health' to express benefit to physical well-being.

× I would like to take a long walk in my schoolyard because it's a a large and peaceful space.

✓ I would like to take a long walk in my schoolyard because it's a large and peaceful space.

Errors: duplicated article 'a a'. Remove the extra 'a'. Suggestions: proofread for duplicated words.

× I could walk there with my friend to re relieve stress and chess or playing game would would be a night break from shooting.

✓ I could walk there with my friend to relieve stress, and chatting or playing games would be a nice break from studying.

Errors: duplicated words ('re relieve', 'would would'), wrong word choices ('chess' unclear, 'night break', 'shooting' instead of 'studying'). Use 'relieve stress'. 'Chatting or playing games' fits social activities. 'Nice break from studying' is logical. Suggestions: remove duplicates, choose appropriate verbs/nouns, and ensure word choice matches intended meaning.

× So I usually go for a walk lately in the park because it is a like the space we can like also exercise, spend time with our family or friends and park also a social play that where people can.

✓ Lately I usually go for a walk in the park because it is a space where we can exercise, spend time with family or friends; the park is also a social place where people can meet.

Errors: awkward word order and filler words ('like' overused), article errors ('a like the space'), missing plural and articles ('park also a social play'). 'Lately' with 'usually' is acceptable but place 'lately' before the verb for clarity. Suggestions: remove filler words, reorder sentence for clarity, use correct articles and plural forms, and complete the clause 'where people can meet.'