Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be natural and clear: give a direct topic sentence, correct vocabulary and a brief reason. Avoid unclear phrases like "city hatching." Use 2–3 sentences and a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot now. I didn't walk much in the past, but since my city has become more crowded, I prefer walking for short trips and exercise.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and use correct grammar for comparisons. Use one linking word (e.g., "because" or "so") and avoid repetition. Be specific about frequency or activities.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went for walks with my family when I was a child because the air was cleaner then. We usually walked in the park on weekends, which I enjoyed a lot.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use concise supporting details with correct verbs and articles. Use a linking phrase like "for example" or "because" and smooth phrasing (e.g., "without having to worry about").

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because they feel safer and more relaxed. For example, parks are away from busy roads, so you don't have to worry about traffic or cyclists.

Gợi ý: Combine sentences into a clear, fluent response. Use correct verb forms and precise vocabulary (e.g., "relax" instead of "wind down" is fine but use properly). Give one specific reason and link it with "because" or "as."

Ví dụ: I would like to take a long walk along the river because watching the water helps me relax. The riverside paths usually have pleasant views and a calm atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Answer concisely with a correct topic sentence, avoid repetition, and fix vocabulary and articles ("river", "waves"). Use one linking word to explain the effect on you.

Ví dụ: Recently I went for a walk along the river near my house because it is close and peaceful. Watching the ripples on the water helped me relax.

× In the past I didn't walk a lot, but nowadays I do walk a lot because the city hatching.

✓ In the past I didn't walk a lot, but nowadays I do walk a lot because the city is getting more crowded.

The original sentence uses 'hatching' incorrectly; likely intended meaning is the city becoming crowded or growing. This is a vocabulary/word choice error but affects tense and structure. Use present continuous 'is getting' to describe an ongoing change and 'crowded' to convey congestion. Suggestion: use clear verbs for changes (is becoming, is getting) and correct adjectives (crowded).

× I went outside to have a walk with with my family when I was a child because the air pollution not not bad as nowadays.

✓ I went outside for walks with my family when I was a child because the air pollution was not as bad as it is nowadays.

Multiple errors: repetition 'with with', wrong phrase 'to have a walk' (use 'for walks'), and incorrect tense/structure for comparison. Use simple past 'went' and 'was' for past condition, plus comparison 'not as bad as it is nowadays' to compare past and present. Remove duplicate words. Suggestion: say 'went for walks' and use 'was not as bad as it is now.'

× So I enjoy when outside to have a walk in the past.

✓ So I enjoyed going outside for walks in the past.

Original mixes tenses and has incorrect word order. Use past simple 'enjoyed' to match 'in the past', and use gerund phrase 'going outside for walks' as the object of 'enjoyed'. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense and correct verb patterns (enjoy + gerund).

× Because the park is a safe place that you can walk without focus on traffic or cyclists will bump into you.

✓ Because the park is a safe place where you can walk without worrying about traffic or cyclists bumping into you.

Problems: 'that' is awkward; 'without focus on traffic' is incorrect phrase; verb forms mismatched. Use 'where' to introduce place, 'worrying about' for concern, and gerund 'bumping' to indicate possible action. Suggestion: use 'where' for locations and 'worry about' + noun/gerund for concerns; keep verb forms parallel.

× I would like to take a long walk along the river. Because when we looking at the width of the water on the river will make me wind down.

✓ I would like to take a long walk along the river, because looking at the wide water of the river helps me wind down.

Original has sentence fragment and incorrect verb form 'we looking' and odd noun phrase 'width of the water'. Combine into one sentence, use gerund 'looking' as subject, 'helps me' for present effect, and 'wide water' or 'the river's wide expanse' to describe view. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and ensure subject-verb agreement ('looking... helps').

× I went, I went for a walk along the liver because it's close to my house, so that made me relax when I look at the wave of water.

✓ I went for a walk along the river because it's close to my house, and it relaxed me to watch the waves of the water.

Errors: repetition 'I went, I went', misspelling 'liver' for 'river', tense mismatch 'made me relax' vs 'look'. Use past simple 'relaxed me' to describe past feeling. Use 'watch' or 'look at' in correct form and plural 'waves'. Suggestion: remove repetitions, correct spelling, and keep past tense consistent when describing past actions.