Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar, use a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and keep within 3–4 sentences. Mention frequency, reason, and location with linking words. Correct verb forms (e.g. "morning walk", "since yesterday" with present perfect is odd).

Ví dụ: I don't walk a lot, but I try to go for a short walk every morning because I've had digestive problems recently. For example, I started going to Thakuria Lake yesterday, which is near my house and surrounded by greenery, and I find those walks relaxing.

Gợi ý: Good direct answer and past habits. Improve by adding one specific detail and a linking phrase to make it more natural, and avoid filler words like "etcetera."

Ví dụ: Yes, I often walked to a nearby park with my grandfather when I was a child. We would stroll along tree-lined paths and I remember riding the seesaw and swinging for hours, which made those visits very memorable.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons with correct grammar. Avoid claims like "cure diseases"—use safer phrasing such as "relieve symptoms". Use linking words (for example, "firstly", "also").

Ví dụ: People enjoy walking in parks mainly because of the fresh air and greenery. For example, parks offer cleaner air and peaceful surroundings, which can help older adults relieve respiratory symptoms and reduce stress, so many prefer spending time there.

Gợi ý: Provide a concise topic sentence, then 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Fix vocabulary errors ("litters" or "litter", "spend a lot" → "spend a long time"). Avoid unnecessary repetition.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk around Thakuria Lake because it is beautiful and well maintained. The lake is clean, with little litter, and the peaceful environment makes walking there very calming.

Gợi ý: Be precise and grammatically correct. Use past tense for a recent action, and correct medical vocabulary and phrasing (e.g. "diagnosed with an acute heart condition"). Explain briefly why you accompanied him and what happened. Avoid fragmented sentences.

Ví dụ: I went for a walk to Thakuria Lake with my father yesterday. He was diagnosed with an acute heart condition last year, and his doctor recommended daily walks to improve his health, so I accompanied him because he was having some difficulty breathing.

× Not a lot but I try to do it because I am suffering from some digestive issues since last month.

✓ Not a lot, but I have tried to do it because I have been suffering from some digestive issues since last month.

The phrase 'since last month' requires a present perfect or present perfect continuous tense to show an action continuing from the past to the present. 'I am suffering ... since' is incorrect; use 'I have been suffering' (present perfect continuous). Also 'I try to do it' should agree with the ongoing habit: 'I have tried' or 'I try' with punctuation. Suggestion: use present perfect continuous to express ongoing condition (have been suffering) and keep 'I try to do it' or 'I have tried to do it' depending on emphasis.

× So I have started morning work since yesterday.

✓ So I started morning walks yesterday.

'Have started ... since yesterday' can be acceptable when followed by present perfect, but the phrase 'morning work' is unnatural here and 'started' past simple is better with a specific time 'yesterday'. Use 'morning walks' to match meaning. If keeping present perfect, use 'I have started morning walks as of yesterday.' Suggestion: use 'started' with specific past time or present perfect with 'as of' for continuation.

× I went to the Thakuria lake, which is a lake nearby my house full of greenery.

✓ I went to Thakuria Lake, which is a lake near my house and is full of greenery.

Use 'near my house' instead of 'nearby my house'. Also capitalize proper noun 'Thakuria Lake' and add 'and is' to join clauses smoothly. Suggestion: use 'near' with 'my house' and include linking verb for clarity.

× I like to spend my time walking there.

✓ I like to spend my time walking there.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed; it matches present habit.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

Question is correct; past tense 'did' with 'were' is appropriate for past habits. No change required.

× Yes, when I was a child I used to go to the park nearby my house with my grandfather.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I used to go to the park near my house with my grandfather.

Use 'near my house' instead of 'nearby my house'. 'Used to go' correctly indicates past habitual action. Suggestion: replace 'nearby' with 'near' for correct preposition use.

× We used to walk a lot there and I also used to ride some rides like Seesaw etcetera.

✓ We used to walk a lot there and I also used to ride rides like the seesaw, etc.

'Seesaw' should be lowercase and preceded by an article in this context ('the seesaw'). Avoid 'some rides like Seesaw'—use 'rides like the seesaw'. Also 'etcetera' abbreviated to 'etc.' is acceptable. Suggestion: use articles with specific ride names and correct casing.

× Mainly because of the greenery present there.

✓ Mainly because of the greenery there.

Sentence fragment: it's a subordinate clause and should be attached to a main clause. 'The greenery present there' is understandable but wordy. Better: 'Mainly because of the greenery there' combined with the next sentence. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments; join with following sentence.

× Also with the rapid growth of pollution in the cities is causing a lot of respiratory diseases among the older people.

✓ Also, the rapid growth of pollution in cities is causing a lot of respiratory diseases among older people.

Original has extra 'with' making structure incorrect. Remove 'with' and use 'the rapid growth of pollution in cities is causing...' Also 'older people' commonly 'older people' without 'the'. Suggestion: simplify subject phrase and ensure subject-verb structure: 'the rapid growth ... is causing'.

× That's why spending time in the nature can help them cure this kind of diseases.

✓ That's why spending time in nature can help them recover from this kind of disease.

Do not use 'the' before 'nature' in this context; use 'in nature'. 'Help them cure this kind of diseases' is incorrect: people recover from or are cured of diseases. Use singular 'this kind of disease' or plural 'these kinds of diseases'. Suggestion: 'help them recover from these kinds of diseases' or 'help them recover from this kind of disease.'

× So they prefer to spend a lot of time in natural places.

✓ So they prefer to spend a lot of time in natural places.

Sentence is correct; plural 'places' matches 'a lot of time'. No change needed.

× I would like to take a long walk around Thakuria Lake.

✓ I would like to take a long walk around Thakuria Lake.

Sentence is correct and matches conditional question. No change needed.

× It is really a beautiful place.

✓ It is really a beautiful place.

Correct as is.

× It is also well maintained by the government.

✓ It is also well maintained by the government.

Correct passive construction; no change needed.

× No liters are found in the lake which is very common in some lakes in India.

✓ No litters are found in the lake, which is a common problem in some lakes in India.

'Liters' is a misspelling for 'litters' (trash) or confusion with 'litres'. Context implies trash: use 'litter' (uncountable) or 'no litter is found' and 'which is a common problem'. Use singular 'is' to refer to the situation. Suggestion: 'There is no litter in the lake, which is a common problem...' or 'No litter is found in the lake.'

× So walking around the lake really feels calm and relaxing as you can spend a lot.

✓ So walking around the lake feels calm and relaxing because you can spend a lot of time there.

'Feels calm and relaxing' is fine, but 'as you can spend a lot' is incomplete. Specify 'a lot of time there.' Suggestion: complete the thought and reorder for natural flow: 'feels calm and relaxing because you can spend a lot of time there.'

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where have you gone for a walk lately?

The adverb 'lately' usually pairs with present perfect to indicate recent experience. 'Did you go ... lately' is possible but less natural. Suggestion: use present perfect 'have you gone' for recent actions.

× As I have mentioned earlier, I go for a walk to the Thakuria lake with my father.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I go for walks to Thakuria Lake with my father.

Use simple past 'As I mentioned earlier' for a previous statement. Also 'go for walks' plural is more natural for a habitual activity. Capitalize 'Thakuria Lake' and 'go for a walk to' -> 'go for walks to' or 'go walking at'. Suggestion: 'As I mentioned earlier, I go for walks at Thakuria Lake with my father.'

× My father was also diagnosed by UH by an acute heart disease last year.

✓ My father was also diagnosed with an acute heart disease last year.

Use 'diagnosed with' (not 'diagnosed by'). 'UH' unclear — remove or clarify. Use past simple 'was diagnosed ... last year' is correct. Suggestion: 'diagnosed with an acute heart condition' and omit unclear 'UH'.

× So doctor has suggested him to go for work in order to cure these diseases quickly.

✓ So the doctor suggested that he go for walks in order to improve his condition quickly.

'Doctor has suggested him to' is incorrect. Use 'the doctor suggested that he' + base verb, or 'the doctor suggested he should'. Also 'go for work' is unnatural; likely 'go for walks' or 'get some exercise'. 'Cure these diseases' should be 'improve his condition' or 'help his recovery'. Suggestion: 'The doctor suggested that he go for walks to help his recovery.'

× So I went to work with my father yesterday because he was having some breathing.

✓ So I went walking with my father yesterday because he was having some breathing difficulties.

'Went to work' is wrong context; should be 'went walking' or 'went for a walk'. 'He was having some breathing' is incomplete — use 'breathing difficulties' or 'shortness of breath'. Suggestion: 'I went for a walk with my father yesterday because he was having some breathing difficulties.'