Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct basic grammar (work → walk), and add a linking phrase to connect ideas. Limit to up to 5 sentences and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk to work because it is close to my home, and I often take evening strolls in the nearby park and gardens to relax.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense (past), reduce hesitations, correct word choice (work → walk), and organize into a clear topic sentence plus supporting detail with linking word. Be specific about where and why.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often walked outside as a child. For example, I used to walk around the playground by the river and sometimes helped my parents with errands, and I found walking relaxing and good exercise.

Gợi ý: Give a fuller, fluent answer: start with a clear topic sentence, use linking words (for instance, because, moreover), correct grammar (children not child's; avoid 'work' for walk), and provide specific reasons.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because it is relaxing and safer than busy streets. Moreover, parks offer fresh air and pleasant scenery, and you can enjoy watching children play without the noise and traffic of vehicles.

Gợi ý: Make the sentence structure smoother, avoid repetition (fresh repeated), and use comparative/concise phrases. Use linking words like because and include one specific image or activity.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the countryside because the air is much fresher and there is far less traffic; I could enjoy quiet lanes, open fields, and views of nature.

Gợi ý: Use correct past/present simple consistently, remove redundancy, and make the meaning clear. Say whether you walked recently and where, with one linking phrase for frequency or time.

Ví dụ: Lately I have been walking to my workplace because it is very near my home, and in the evenings I sometimes walk in a small park near my house.

× Yes, I work a lot. I walk to my work because it is not far from my home and I also take evening strolls near park and near gardens.

✓ Yes, I work a lot. I walk to my workplace because it is not far from my home, and I also take evening strolls near the park and in the gardens.

Present tense is acceptable but 'workplace' is a more natural noun than 'work' for location; articles are missing before 'park' and 'gardens'. Add 'the' before 'park' and 'in the gardens' for correct preposition and article usage. Use a comma before 'and' to join independent clauses. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I, yes, I usually go to work when I was a child, uh, I walk around the playground by the side of river.

✓ Yes, I usually went to play when I was a child. I walked around the playground by the side of the river.

The sentence mixes present simple ('usually go', 'I walk') with past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past simple ('went', 'walked'). Also 'play' is more natural than 'go to work' for a child, and 'the river' needs the definite article. Avoid filler words for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I also work with my parents and because walking is very relaxing and it is a type of exercise.

✓ I also walked with my parents because walking was very relaxing and a good form of exercise.

Time reference is childhood, so verbs should be past simple ('walked', 'was'). Remove the extra conjunction 'and' before 'because'. 'A type of exercise' is awkward; 'a good form of exercise' is clearer. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Because walking in parks is very relaxing. It is our type of exercise.

✓ Because walking in parks is very relaxing, it is a common form of exercise for us.

The first fragment is a dependent clause; combine into one sentence with a comma. 'Our type of exercise' is unclear; 'a common form of exercise for us' is clearer. Tense (present) is fine for general statements. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Also, you see people and small children's around, playing, running and you just work around the park without any, umm, motorcycles or uh, different travelers.

✓ Also, you see people and small children around, playing and running, and you can walk around the park without motorcycles or other vehicles.

'Children's' is incorrect possessive; use plural 'children'. 'You just work around the park' is incorrect verb choice—use 'walk'. 'Different travelers' is vague; 'other vehicles' or 'motorized traffic' is clearer. Remove fillers and add commas for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:12

× If I got a chance to take a long walk, I would prefer to go the countryside because the air is fresh there, very less traffic and the air is pollution free, very fresh and very refreshing.

✓ If I got the chance to take a long walk, I would prefer to go to the countryside because the air is fresh there, there is very little traffic, and the air is pollution-free and refreshing.

Use 'got the chance' (definite article) and 'go to the countryside' (preposition 'to'). 'Very less traffic' is ungrammatical; use 'very little traffic'. 'Pollution free' should be hyphenated as 'pollution-free' when used as a compound adjective. Avoid repeating 'very fresh' and 'very refreshing'. Grammar problem type ID:3

× Lately I walk to my workplace because it is very near to my home and sometimes at evening I go to work apart nearby my home.

✓ Lately I have been walking to my workplace because it is very near my home, and sometimes in the evening I go for a walk near my home.

Use present perfect continuous 'have been walking' or present perfect to express recent repeated actions ('lately'). 'Near to my home' should be 'near my home' (no 'to'). 'At evening' is incorrect; use 'in the evening'. 'Go to work apart nearby my home' is confusing—'go for a walk near my home' is clear. Grammar problem type ID:6