Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (work → walk; companies → commute/office), and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to explain reasons (because/so). Keep answers under five sentences. Also use accurate verb forms and plural/singular forms.

Ví dụ: No, I don't walk much. I usually walk only to and from the office. Instead, I prefer strength training at the gym because walking aggravates my knees, so I do squats and push-ups a few times a week as a safer alternative.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence and keep sentences grammatical. Use linking words (because/so) to add details and be specific about ages and activities. Avoid repetition (work used incorrectly) and plural forms (grandma/grandmas).

Ví dụ: Yes. When I was four or five, I often went outside with my grandmother. She liked to take me to the park where I played with friends, so those visits felt warm and happy to me.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, concise opinion sentence and follow with specific reasons. Use correct vocabulary (stressful life, relax, take a deep breath) and linking phrases (because, for example). Avoid repetition and long awkward phrases.

Ví dụ: I think people walk in parks because it helps them relax. Walking in a park reduces stress and gives people time to think or reflect, for example about their plans or personal goals.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with the place name and a brief reason. Use correct grammar and vocabulary (pilgrim/pilgrimage route, patient → patient? unclear; likely 'patient' not needed). Keep to two or three sentences and explain specifically why it's meaningful.

Ví dụ: I would like to walk the Camino de Santiago in Europe. It is a famous pilgrimage route leading to a cathedral, and I think the long walk would be meaningful and give me time to reflect and get new ideas.

Gợi ý: Give a specific recent example in past tense, with one clear reason. Avoid confusing pronouns and incorrect phrases (working academically, aim main things). Use linking words (so/therefore) and correct verb forms.

Ví dụ: Recently I walked along the river near my neighbourhood. It is a peaceful spot where I go when I feel stressed, because walking there helps me relax and think about my main goals.

× No, I don't work much. Usually I will only work to my companies and when I go back home.

✓ No, I don't walk much. Usually I only walk to my company and when I go back home.

The student used 'work' instead of 'walk' (wrong verb) and 'will' is unnecessary for habitual actions. Use simple present for habits: 'I don't walk much' and 'I only walk to my company'. Also 'companies' should be singular 'company' if referring to one employer; if plural, rephrase 'to my companies' but context implies singular.

× And for the exercise I prefer strengthen training at the gym.

✓ For exercise, I prefer strength training at the gym.

Use the noun phrase 'strength training' rather than 'strengthen training'. 'Prefer' takes a noun or verb with -ing, but here a noun phrase fits: 'prefer strength training'.

× I usually do squat and push up a few times a week because I find walking aggravate my knees.

✓ I usually do squats and push-ups a few times a week because I find walking aggravates my knees.

Use plural nouns for repeated exercises: 'squats' and 'push-ups'. When a noun is subject of a verb, ensure subject-verb agreement: 'walking aggravates' (third-person singular), not 'aggravate'.

× So I opt for exercise that feels safer for me.

✓ So I opt for exercises that feel safer for me.

'Exercise' should be plural 'exercises' when speaking generally. With plural subject, use verb 'feel' (not 'feels'). Alternatively: 'I opt for the exercise that feels safer for me' if referring to one type.

× Yeah, I usually go outside to work with my grandma when I was a like four or five years old child and she really like to bring me to the park and let me have fun with my friend there.

✓ Yeah, I usually went outside to play with my grandma when I was about four or five years old, and she really liked to take me to the park and let me play with my friends there.

When describing past habits, use past tense: 'went', 'liked', 'took', 'played'. 'Work with my grandma' likely meant 'play' or 'go out with'. 'A like' should be 'about' and 'child' unnecessary. 'Friend' plural 'friends' fits general meaning.

× So I enjoy the times when I have a work with my grandmas that's make me feel warm and sweet.

✓ So I enjoyed the times when I was with my grandma; they made me feel warm and happy.

Maintain past tense 'enjoyed' for past events. 'Have a work with my grandmas' is incorrect—use 'was with my grandma'. 'Grandmas' plural unclear; choose singular if referring to one. 'That's make' should be 'they made' for agreement and past tense. 'Sweet' replaced by 'happy' for natural collocation.

× Yeah, I think for the people who live in the stress and pressure life right now, working in the park is a way easy to release and take a take a long breath about their life and having a walk also make them have time to think about their future.

✓ I think for people who live stressful, pressured lives right now, walking in the park is an easy way to relax and take a long breath, and having a walk also gives them time to think about their future.

Use noun forms 'stressful, pressured lives' or 'stress and pressure' correctly. 'Working in the park' should be 'walking in the park'. 'A way easy' order should be 'an easy way'. 'Release' should be 'relax'. Remove duplicate 'take a'. 'Having a walk also makes' requires subject-verb agreement: 'walk also gives them time' or 'also makes them have time' but 'gives them time' is natural.

× Yeah, there's a place I really want to take a long walk is called the praying walk in Europe.

✓ Yes, there's a place I really want to take a long walk: it's called the Pilgrimage Walk in Europe.

Sentence structure: use colon or 'that' to connect clauses. 'Praying walk' is unnatural; likely 'pilgrimage walk' or 'pilgrimage route'. Capitalization aside, rephrase for clarity: 'There's a place I really want to walk called the Pilgrimage Walk'.

× I really want because I'm a patient.

✓ I really want to go because I am a patient person.

Original is fragmentary and unclear. 'I'm a patient' is wrong: 'patient' as adjective needs 'person' or use 'I'm patient'. Add 'to go' to show intention: 'I really want to go because I'm a patient person' or 'because I'm patient'.

× So if I have a chance, I really want to walk along the road to the final church that is really meaningful towards and I hope I can get a lot of idea there.

✓ So if I have the chance, I really want to walk along the route to the final church because it is very meaningful, and I hope I can get a lot of ideas there.

Use 'the chance' not 'a chance' for a specific opportunity. 'Road to the final church' better as 'route to the final church'. 'Meaningful towards' is incorrect; use 'meaningful'. 'Get a lot of idea' should be 'get a lot of ideas' (plural).

× Oh, usually I'll walk just around the place and walk walking.

✓ Oh, usually I just walk around the neighborhood.

Redundant 'walk walking' removed and 'around the place' replaced with natural 'around the neighborhood'. Use simple present for habitual actions: 'I just walk'.

× They are working academically, there's a lot of place they can work along the river.

✓ Nearby there are many places where people can walk along the river.

Original is confused. 'Working academically' is incorrect context; likely 'nearby' or 'in my area'. 'A lot of place' should be 'many places'. 'They can work along the river' should be 'people can walk along the river'.

× So if I am feel stressful or tired, I think I will go there to relax and so think about the my aim main things.

✓ So if I feel stressed or tired, I think I will go there to relax and think about my main goals.

Use correct adjective 'stressed' not 'stressful'. Remove extra 'am' and use present tense 'feel'. Omit extra 'so'. 'The my aim main things' is ungrammatical: use 'my main goals' or 'my main aims'.