Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (verb forms, articles, plurals), and avoid repetition. Use one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, so) and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot because I live in a small neighbourhood where driving is inconvenient. For example, shops and schools are within a short distance, so my family usually walks. Walking also benefits our health because it keeps our muscles active and improves stamina.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct topic sentence, avoid fragments, correct past tense and word order, and include one clear specific example. Use linking words such as 'when' or 'so' to make the story coherent. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went out to walk when I was a child. I would leave my bike by the road and walk or run around the neighbourhood with my friends, playing games like hide-and-seek.

Gợi ý: Good answer: clear topic sentence and a relevant example. To improve, add a linking phrase and a second brief supporting detail (e.g., exercise or social reasons) and vary vocabulary slightly.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because the greenery and fresh air are rejuvenating and reduce stress. Moreover, parks offer space for light exercise and socialising, so a short stroll among the trees is a pleasant break from city noise.

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct verb/phrase forms. Start with a direct statement, give 1–2 specific reasons, and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and correct the gerund/infinitive form after 'best'.

Ví dụ: I would like to take a long morning walk in New York City parks because I have never been there and people say the scenery is beautiful. I think walking there would be a great way to relax and escape the city's noise.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and natural phrasing. Begin with a clear past-tense sentence, give one or two specific details (when, what you saw), and avoid awkward expressions. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: Recently I took a morning walk in a nearby national park called Two Rivers Park. It was a peaceful place with lots of greenery, which helped me relax and clear my mind.

× Yes I do walk a lot since I live in the small neighborhood which is is such a inconvenience way to go anywhere with car.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot since I live in a small neighborhood, which makes it inconvenient to go anywhere by car.

The original sentence has plural/singular and article issues: 'the small neighborhood' should be 'a small neighborhood' (article error, use general reference). 'is is such a inconvenience way' is ungrammatical; 'inconvenience' should be adjective 'inconvenient' and 'way' is unnecessary. Also 'with car' should be 'by car' (preposition). The correction uses proper article, adjective form, and preposition and removes redundancy.

× So we prefer to walk by ourself and also I believe that walked would give us a lot of benefits with our our health since it moved our muscle and improve our life.

✓ So we prefer to walk by ourselves, and I believe that walking gives us many health benefits because it moves our muscles and improves our lives.

The sentence has incorrect reflexive pronoun 'ourself' (should be plural 'ourselves') and wrong verb forms: 'walked' should be the gerund 'walking' (Verb + -ing form), 'would give' is inconsistent with general statement so use present 'gives', 'moved' should be present 'moves', and 'improve' needs third-person singular 'improves'. Also 'our our' is duplicated. Correction fixes pronoun number, uses gerund for general benefits, corrects verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I did often go aside every time I would laugh I would left my bike in the nearby the road and just walk around the neighborhood neighborhood running or even play hide and seek with my friends.

✓ Yes, I often went out; whenever I laughed I would leave my bike on the nearby road and just walk around the neighborhood, running or even playing hide and seek with my friends.

Multiple tense and word choice errors: 'did often go aside' is incorrect — use 'often went out' (past simple for habitual past). 'every time I would laugh' is better as 'whenever I laughed' for natural past habit. 'I would left' mixes conditional 'would' with past 'left' — use 'would leave' or simple past 'left'; here 'would leave' matches habitual past. 'the nearby the road' has extra article; use 'on the nearby road'. Repeated 'neighborhood' removed. 'playing' as gerund matches parallel structure with 'running'.

× I think many people enjoy walk in parks because the greenery and fresh air are rejuvenating and help reduce stress.

✓ I think many people enjoy walking in parks because the greenery and fresh air are rejuvenating and help reduce stress.

The verb 'enjoy' must be followed by a gerund, not the base verb. Change 'enjoy walk' to 'enjoy walking'. The rest of the sentence is correct.

× For example, a short stroll among the trees would provide a welcome escape from the daily pressure and noise of the city.

✓ For example, a short stroll among the trees provides a welcome escape from the daily pressures and noise of the city.

'Would provide' is conditional; for a general statement present simple 'provides' is more natural. Also 'daily pressure' is better as plural 'daily pressures' because there are multiple sources of pressure. This fixes tense and noun number.

× Oh, I would like to take a long walk, a long morning walk in New York City parks because I haven't been there before and I've heard from a lot of people that it has a really beautiful view.

✓ Oh, I would like to take a long morning walk in New York City's parks because I haven't been there before, and I've heard from many people that they have really beautiful views.

Minor corrections: combine duplicate 'a long walk, a long morning walk' into one phrase. Use possessive 'New York City's parks'. 'A lot of people' changed to 'many people' for formality. 'It has a really beautiful view' is unclear because 'parks' is plural; change to 'they have really beautiful views' to match number.

× And I'm pretty sure it would be the best place to rejuvenating ourselves outside the noise of this in New York City.

✓ And I'm pretty sure it would be the best place to rejuvenate ourselves away from the noise of New York City.

'To rejuvenating' is incorrect after 'to' which requires base verb 'rejuvenate' (infinitive). 'Outside the noise of this in New York City' is ungrammatical; use 'away from the noise of New York City' for correct preposition and word order.

× I lately took my morning walk in the nearby National Park, it's called the 2 river Park.

✓ Recently, I took my morning walk in the nearby national park; it's called the Two Rivers Park.

'Lately took' is awkward; 'recently' or 'lately' should precede the verb. Use 'recently, I took' or 'I have lately taken' depending on nuance. 'National Park' should be lowercase 'national park' unless it's a formal name. '2 river Park' corrected to proper name 'Two Rivers Park' and punctuation improved.

× It's such a convenient search of escaping my life pressure since offer a lot of greeneries and rejuvenating my mind.

✓ It's such a convenient way to escape the stress of my life because it offers a lot of greenery and refreshes my mind.

This sentence has multiple structural errors: 'convenient search of escaping' is ungrammatical — use 'convenient way to escape'. 'My life pressure' should be 'the stress of my life' or 'my life stress'. 'Since offer' lacks a subject and tense — use 'because it offers'. 'Greeneries' is nonstandard; use 'greenery'. 'Rejuvenating my mind' needs a verb form 'refreshes my mind' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The correction fixes word choice, verb agreement, and sentence flow.