Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời ngắn gọn nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Cần sửa câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng thì đúng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể (thời gian, tần suất). Tránh lỗi cấu trúc như “what help me healthy” và số nhiều/số ít (friend/friends). Nên dùng liên từ đúng để nối ý.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk quite regularly, usually with my family or friends. Walking with them helps me stay healthy and reduces stress, especially when we walk for 30–60 minutes in the evenings.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời trực tiếp nhưng có lỗi thì (watch → watched), lặp từ và có thể mở rộng bằng lý do cụ thể hơn. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng linking words (because, so) để giải thích ngắn gọn.

Ví dụ: Not really. When I was a child I usually watched movies and slept a lot at home, so I didn’t go outside very often because my family preferred staying indoors.

Gợi ý: Nội dung khá tốt nhưng có vài lỗi từ (flat → clean/fresh), cấu trúc liệt kê chưa tự nhiên (or exercise or meeting friends). Cần dùng từ chính xác hơn, nối các ý mạch lạc và đưa thêm ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: cảnh, tiếng chim).

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because they can relax and breathe fresh air. Parks provide green space for exercise and meeting friends, and the peaceful scenery, such as trees and birds, makes walks more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Ý tưởng hay nhưng có lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp (train → time/chance, peninsula số ít/plurals, have → has, monkey → monkeys, 'coastal hiking trend' không tự nhiên). Nên sử dụng cấu trúc điều kiện chính xác và mô tả chi tiết hơn về địa điểm/hoạt động.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk on a Japanese peninsula. The mountains there have interesting wildlife, like monkeys, and the coastal hiking trails offer beautiful views, so it would be both relaxing and exciting.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời khá rời rạc và khó hiểu, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không đúng (business → busy, 'go anywhere' không rõ nghĩa, UMM không giải thích). Cần trả lời trực tiếp nơi đã đi gần đây, dùng thì đúng (present perfect/simple past) và nếu muốn nêu mong muốn, đặt nó như một câu riêng rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: I haven’t been walking much recently because I’ve been very busy with work. If I had time, I would like to take a long walk along the seafront at UMM, enjoying the sea breeze and views.

× Yes, I usually walk with my family or my friend what help me healthy and reduce stress.

✓ Yes, I usually walk with my family or my friends, which helps me stay healthy and reduce stress.

The sentence uses incorrect pronoun 'what' and wrong singular/plural forms. Use 'which' to refer to the whole clause 'walking with family or friends', change 'friend' to 'friends' to match general meaning, use third person singular verb 'helps' for the singular subject 'which', and add 'stay' to collocate with 'healthy'. Suggestions: replace 'what' with 'which', use 'friends' if plural, and use 'helps me stay healthy'. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I think no. When I was young I usually watch a movie at home and sleep every day, so I I didn't often go outside when I was a child.

✓ I don't think so. When I was young I usually watched movies at home and slept every day, so I didn't often go outside when I was a child.

Mixes present and past tenses: 'I think no' should be 'I don't think so' (present opinion), but the description of past habits requires past simple: 'watch' -> 'watched', 'sleep' -> 'slept'. Also remove duplicated 'I'. Suggestions: use past simple for habitual actions in the past and correct the response phrase to 'I don't think so'. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I think people like to walk in parks because they can relax and enjoy the flat, fresh air. Parks also offer green space or exercise or meeting friends, so walking there made people feel happy and refreshing.

✓ I think people like to walk in parks because they can relax and enjoy the clean, fresh air. Parks also offer green spaces for exercise and meeting friends, so walking there makes people feel happy and refreshed.

'Flat' is incorrect for describing air; use 'clean' or remove. 'Green space' should be plural or 'green spaces'. Use preposition 'for' with activities. 'Made' is past but general truth needs present simple 'makes'. Use adjective 'refreshed' to describe people, not 'refreshing'. Suggestions: use 'clean, fresh air', 'green spaces for exercise and meeting friends', and present simple 'makes people feel refreshed'. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× If I had the train, I would like to take a long walk on some Japanese peninsula.

✓ If I had the chance to take the train, I would like to take a long walk on some Japanese peninsula.

Original 'If I had the train' is unclear; likely means 'if I had the chance to take the train' or 'if I could take the train'. Clarify condition using correct modal phrasing. Suggestions: use 'had the chance to take the train' or 'could take the train'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× The mountain there have interesting wildlife like monkey and coastal hiking trend offer beautiful view.

✓ The mountains there have interesting wildlife like monkeys, and coastal hiking trails offer beautiful views.

Subject-verb agreement and plural forms are incorrect: 'mountain' should be 'mountains' to match 'have', and 'monkey' should be plural 'monkeys'. 'Coastal hiking trend' is wrong collocation; use 'coastal hiking trails' and plural 'views'. Suggestions: ensure nouns agree in number and use correct collocations like 'hiking trails' and 'beautiful views'. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× So it would be relaxing and exciting at the same time.

✓ So it would be relaxing and exciting at the same time.

Sentence is grammatical; no change needed. 'Would be' correctly expresses conditional mood followed by adjectives 'relaxing' and 'exciting'. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Oh, I have been to business lately to go anywhere, but if I could I would like to take a long walk in UMM. In the sea.

✓ Oh, I haven't been anywhere recently because of business, but if I could I would like to take a long walk in UMM, by the sea.

Original 'I have been to business lately to go anywhere' is ungrammatical. Use present perfect negative 'haven't been anywhere recently' to express lack of free time due to business. Place 'because of business' to show reason. 'In the sea' is wrong for walking; use 'by the sea'. Suggestions: say 'I haven't been anywhere recently because of business' and 'take a long walk in UMM, by the sea'. Grammar problem type ID: 6