Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 発音と語彙の誤り（"work" と言う代わりに "walk" を使うべき）と冗長な繰り返しが目立ちます。まずは正しい単語を使い、文を簡潔に保ち、最大5文程度で話す練習をしてください。また冠詞や前置詞のミス（"at in the morning"、"around the my the park"）を直すために短いフレーズを意識してゆっくり話すと良いです。具体的には「主語＋動詞＋場所／頻度」の基本構造で1文目に結論を言い、その後に頻度や詳細を1〜2文で補足してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk quite a lot. I usually walk in the park near my house three times a week in the morning. Each walk lasts about thirty minutes and helps me wake up for the day.

Gợi ý: 語彙の選択が不適切（"work" と "crime" は文脈に合わない）で内容が不明瞭です。過去の習慣を表すために過去形を使い、理由を明確で関連のある語彙で説明してください。また文を短く区切り、具体的な活動（勉強、部活動、家族の手伝いなど）を挙げると説得力が増します。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I didn't go for walks very often. I was usually busy with school, homework and after-school activities, so I had little free time to walk.

Gợi ý: 出典を示そうとする試みは良いですが、語彙（"working" と "goods substance"）と構文が間違っています。理由を簡潔に述べ、1〜2つの具体的な利点（運動、リラックス、自然を感じるなど）を挙げてください。接続詞（such as, because, so）を使って論理的につなげると良いです。

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because it is good for physical and mental health. For example, walking reduces stress and improves fitness, and being among trees makes it easier to relax.

Gợi ý: 意味が不明確で危険な場所（高速道路）を選んでいる点と語彙ミス（"work" と "walk" の混同、文法の不一致）が問題です。理想の長歩きの場所を選ぶ際は安全で魅力的な理由（風景、静けさ、広さ）を挙げ、仮定法の形（If I could, I would...）を使ってください。

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk along a coastal path. The sea views and fresh air would make the walk very enjoyable and relaxing.

Gợi ý: 時制と語彙（"worked" ではなく "walked"）が混同しており、冗長で不自然な語順があります。まず簡潔に結論を述べ（When and where）、その後に所要時間や目的（健康のため）を付け加えてください。時間表現は "at 7:00" のように正しく配置しましょう。

Ví dụ: Recently I walked around my neighborhood at 7:00 in the morning. I usually walk for about 15 minutes for my health.

× Yes, I think I work a lot. At in the in the morning, I work. I walk around the my the park near my house three times a week.

✓ Yes, I think I walk a lot. In the morning, I walk. I walk around the park near my house three times a week.

ID:6 Explanation: The student used 'work' where the context requires the present simple verb 'walk'. Present tense should match the habitual action (walk a lot, walk in the morning). Also extra articles and words (At in the in the, the my the) are incorrect; remove duplicates and use 'the park' not 'the my the park'. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions and keep articles correct: 'I walk around the park.'

× In my childhood I think I didn't work more than now. This is because I was so busy such years activity, crime, school and crowd. That is why I didn't have free time to work.

✓ In my childhood I think I didn't walk more than now. This is because I was so busy with activities, school and other commitments. That is why I didn't have free time to walk.

ID:5 Explanation: The speaker used 'work' instead of 'walk' repeatedly; verb choice changes meaning and conflicts with context. 'Didn't work more than now' should be 'didn't walk as much as now' (past simple negative). 'Such years activity, crime, school and crowd' is ungrammatical; use 'busy with activities, school and other commitments'. Suggestion: Use past simple for past habits, choose correct verb (walk), and use 'busy with' + noun phrase.

× For Harris, according to some research, working is good for our health. Working, working helps helps us to release the goods substance. That is why.

✓ According to some research, walking is good for our health. Walking helps us to release good substances.

ID:6 Explanation: 'Working' is incorrect verb choice; context is about walking. Repetition 'working, working' and duplicate 'helps helps' are errors. 'Goods substance' is incorrect phrase; use 'good substances' or better 'beneficial substances'. Suggestion: Use the correct noun 'walking', avoid repetition, and use natural collocations like 'helps us release beneficial substances.'

× If I could, I want to work on the highway, because on the highway always running how and inhibit prohibits people from running, walk, walking.

✓ If I could, I would like to walk on the highway, because on the highway there are usually signs that prohibit running or walking.

ID:7 Explanation: Mixed conditional/modal errors: 'If I could, I want' should be 'If I could, I would like' or 'I would'. The verb 'work' is wrong; should be 'walk'. Word order and phrasing 'always running how and prohibit prohibits people' is ungrammatical; use 'there are signs that prohibit running or walking.' Suggestion: Use conditional modal 'would' for hypothetical situations and choose correct verbs; use clear clause 'there are signs that prohibit...' to express prohibition.

× Recently I worked along my neighborhood in the morning at the 7:00 I I walked to there along there for 15 minutes for health.

✓ Recently I walked around my neighborhood in the morning at 7:00. I walked there for 15 minutes for my health.

ID:5 Explanation: 'Worked' is incorrect verb choice; use past simple 'walked' for recent past actions. 'Along my neighborhood' should be 'around my neighborhood'. 'At the 7:00 I I walked to there along there' contains redundant words and wrong prepositions; use 'at 7:00' and 'I walked there for 15 minutes.' Suggestion: Use past simple for recent completed actions, correct prepositions ('around', 'at 7:00'), and avoid redundancies.