Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct, correct grammar and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and word choice (walk vs work, makes).

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot because it makes me feel healthier. For example, I walk to work most days and I also take an evening walk to relax after work.

Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently and give specific details. Begin with a clear topic sentence in past simple, then add one or two specific places or memories with a linking word. Avoid filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went outside to walk when I was a child. For instance, I used to walk along the Nile with my family and play in the nearby streets or visit the local club on weekends.

Gợi ý: Give a concise main reason and two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Use plural agreement and avoid repetition. Use vocabulary like 'safer', 'pleasant', 'children'.

Ví dụ: People like to walk in parks because they are safer and more pleasant than busy streets. Also, parks are good for children since there is space to play and less traffic, which makes parents feel more relaxed.

Gợi ý: Use the conditional correctly and give a clear destination and reason. Keep it to one topic sentence plus a supporting detail. Remove hesitations and incomplete thoughts.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along a coastal path because I enjoy the sea views and the fresh air, which helps me relax and think clearly.

Gợi ý: Answer using past simple and be specific about time and place. Start with a clear topic sentence stating where you went recently, then add one brief reason or detail. Avoid unrelated words and hesitations.

Ví dụ: I went for a walk last weekend in a nearby seaside park. I enjoyed the fresh air and watched the waves while walking with a friend.

× Yes, of course I work a lot because it make because it make me more healthy.

✓ Yes, of course I walk a lot because it makes me healthier.

The verb 'make' should be conjugated for third person singular 'it' as 'makes' (ID 2). Also 'work a lot' does not match question 'Do you walk a lot?', so replace with 'walk a lot' to match context. 'More healthy' is unidiomatic; use comparative adjective 'healthier'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and choose verbs that match the question; use 'healthier' for comparative form.

× Yes, I go outside out when a child 'cause I love walking a lot in the street or in the Drive or Nile or go to a club.

✓ Yes, I went outside when I was a child because I loved walking in the street, along the Nile, or going to a club.

The sentence describes past habits, so verbs should be in the past tense: 'go' -> 'went', 'love' -> 'loved' (ID 5). Also fix pronoun/article use: add 'I was a child' and 'because' spelled fully. Use parallel forms: 'walking', 'going'. Suggestion: use past tense consistently for past events and maintain parallel verb forms.

× Because it's more safe and, uh, comfortable, uh, and if, uh, their child it is, it is safe for her, for them, for them.

✓ Because it's safer and more comfortable, and if their child is there, it is safe for them.

Use comparative adjective 'safer' instead of 'more safe' (ID 13). Remove redundant phrases and correct pronoun placement: 'their child it is' is incorrect; use 'their child is there'. Eliminate repeated 'for them'. Suggestion: use standard comparative forms (safer) and keep sentence concise and correctly ordered.

× If I have a chance, I won't, uh, talk, uh, I, I want to uh, uh, walk, uh, and drive on my.

✓ If I had the chance, I would go for a long walk; I want to walk and drive around.

The question asks a hypothetical (If you had the chance), which requires the second conditional: 'If I had the chance, I would...' not 'If I have a chance' nor 'won't' (ID 7). The original is also fragmented and unclear; reorganize into clear conditional and intent. Suggestion: use correct conditional structure for hypothetical situations and remove filler words.

× Uh, I want to work on the arrival mail, go to uh, enjoy with uh, driving rail and missing, uh, sea and uh, and the uh. And so he was was that.

✓ Recently, I went for a walk to the waterfront to enjoy driving along the coast and the scenery.

The examiner asked about a recent past action so past tense is required: 'I want' -> 'I went' (ID 5). The original contains many fragments and unclear words; reconstruct into a coherent past-tense answer. Suggestion: focus on clear verbs in past tense and remove hesitations; describe place and activity concisely.