Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two brief supporting reasons with clearer vocabulary and avoid contradictions (cars and bicycles are both vehicles but bicycles are still walking-related transport). Use linking words to connect ideas and keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Not really — I don't walk much. I usually get around by car or bicycle because it's faster and more convenient, and I prefer saving my energy for other activities.

Gợi ý: Use a clear topic sentence then provide specific, coherent supporting details. Avoid unclear words (e.g. 'pray' is likely incorrect). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and give one or two concrete examples of activities to make the answer vivid, keeping it concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child I was very playful, so I often went out with friends to explore the neighborhood. For example, we would walk to the park to play games and talk about our day.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct reason, then give two specific supporting points using linking words ('for example', 'also', 'because'). Avoid tense errors and redundant adjectives. Be concise and logical.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because the environment is pleasant and peaceful. For example, parks often have attractive scenery and fresh air, and they are usually safer than busy streets because there is less traffic.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give specific sensory details and reasons using linking words. Avoid tense mismatches and repetitive adjectives. One or two concise sentences are sufficient.

Ví dụ: I'd like to take a long walk along the seaside because the views are beautiful and the sea breeze is very relaxing. Walking by the water would help me unwind and enjoy the fresh air.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer then expand with brief, clear reasons. Avoid informal fillers ('yeah', 'really lazy') and contradictory phrasing. Use linking words like 'usually' or 'because' to structure the response.

Ví dụ: I walked to school today, which is where I usually walk. I don't go for walks often otherwise, because I usually use other transport for longer trips.

× I usually transport by vehicles like cars or such as bicycles instead of walking.

✓ I usually travel by vehicles like cars or bicycles instead of walking.

Use 'travel' instead of 'transport' for personal movement; 'vehicles like cars or bicycles' is correct plural form and 'such as' is redundant with 'like'. Ensure noun forms match context.

× Well, as a lazy person I can definitely say I do not walk a lot.

✓ Well, as a lazy person I can definitely say I do not walk a lot.

No change needed grammatically; sentence correctly uses 'do not' for first person. Included for completeness.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside for a walk when you were a child?

Use 'for a walk' rather than 'to have a walk' which is unnatural in this context. The past tense question form 'Did you...?' is correct, so adjust the noun phrase only.

× When I was a child, I was really pray, playful and I used to go out and hang out with my friends a lot.

✓ When I was a child, I was really shy and playful, and I used to go out and hang out with my friends a lot.

The word 'pray' is incorrect here; likely intended 'shy'. Also add a comma and conjunction for clarity. Maintain past tense 'was' and 'used to'.

× And yeah, we enjoyed walking while chatting with each other, communicating what we've done that day.

✓ And yeah, we enjoyed walking while chatting with each other, talking about what we had done that day.

Use past perfect 'had done' to refer to earlier actions that day, and 'talking about' is a more natural collocation than 'communicating'. Also keep past tense consistent.

× Definitely because the park had a great view that's stunningly beautiful and the park is really comfortable that it's not quite far from our home and it's safe that there won't be vehicles crossing around.

✓ Definitely because the park has a great, stunning view, it is quite close to our homes, and it is safe because there are no vehicles passing nearby.

Maintain present tense when explaining general reasons: use 'has' and 'is'. Use plural 'homes' or 'our home' consistently; 'there are no vehicles' is correct existential form. Reorder and simplify clauses for natural English.

× Well, for me I definitely would like to go nearby the sea since the view was really stunningly beautiful and I love the wind that makes me feel really comfortable and relaxed.

✓ Well, I would definitely like to go near the sea because the view is stunningly beautiful, and I love the breeze that makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

Use 'near the sea' instead of 'nearby the sea'. Use present tense 'is' for general descriptions and 'breeze' is more natural than 'wind' here. Remove redundant adverbs. Maintain conditional 'would like'.

× Well, I just went to my school today by foot, so yeah, school is the most common place I usually walk to, and instead of that I barely walk outside since, yeah, I'm really lazy.

✓ Well, I walked to my school today on foot, so school is the place I usually walk to; otherwise I rarely walk outside because I'm really lazy.

Use simple past 'walked' for a completed action 'today'. 'On foot' is the correct phrase. Replace 'most common place I usually' with 'the place I usually', and 'barely' with 'rarely' for natural usage. Keep tense consistent.