Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Говорите более естественно и грамотно: используйте короткие связные предложения, исправьте порядок слов и времена. Уточните, почему не гуляете и чем именно занимаетесь дома; избегайте повторов и провалов в грамматике.

Ví dụ: No, I don't walk much. I prefer staying at home where I study foreign languages and read books. I also enjoy chatting and playing games with friends online.

Gợi ý: Используйте простую последовательную структуру: тема + причина + пример. Избегайте ненужных описательных фраз и повторов, контролируйте времена (past simple/used to).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My mother used to take me out for walks with my friends almost every day. I remember playing in the park and enjoying the fresh air.

Gợi ý: Давайте более конкретные причины и используйте связки: сначала общее утверждение, затем 2–3 конкретных причины с примерами. Избегайте тавтологии («parks», «in the parks»).

Ví dụ: I think people like walking in parks because they are peaceful and green. Parks help improve mood and reduce stress, and many have paths and benches for relaxing.

Gợi ý: Сформулируйте ясное условное предложение и закончите мысль. Назовите конкретное место и объясните причину, избегайте обрывов и неправильной структуры (would be like take).

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I'd take a long walk around London, especially along the Thames. I would enjoy the historic sights and the riverside views.

Gợi ý: Ответьте прямо, используйте правильный порядок слов и артикли: указание времени и причины коротко. Избегайте похожих ошибок с артиклями и словом «lately».

Ví dụ: Lately I went to the center of Kyiv with my friends for a birthday celebration. We walked around the main square and visited some cafes.

× No I do not. I'm a home girl and I also prefer stay home and learn like foreign languages also like. Reading books and have a fun with my friends in Internet.

✓ No, I do not. I'm a home person and I also prefer to stay home and learn foreign languages. I also like reading books and having fun with my friends on the Internet.

В этом предложении неверно используются личные/безличные формы и инфинитивы. Нужен предлог to перед инфинитивом 'stay', существительное 'home girl' лучше заменить на нейтральное 'home person' или 'homebody', глаголы согласовать: 'like reading' и 'having fun'. Также корректно использовать 'on the Internet' вместо 'in Internet'. Suggestions: add 'to' before infinitives, use gerunds after 'like', replace informal noun and correct preposition.

× Yes, I did because of my mom. She always used to make me go outside to have a walk with my friends in childhood and in my childhood I was a a beautiful child and.

✓ Yes, I did because of my mom. She always used to make me go outside for walks with my friends when I was a child.

Нарушено использование временных выражений и повторы. 'Have a walk' лучше выражается как 'go for a walk' или 'go outside for walks'. Фраза 'in childhood' неверна в современном английском; используется 'when I was a child'. Удалён лишний повтор и лишнее 'a a beautiful child' как неуместное в контексте. Suggestions: use 'used to' for habitual past, 'when I was a child' for childhood reference, and collocation 'go for a walk'.

× In my opinion, people prefer go to walk in the parks because of their beauty in the parks and have a good mood and trees. Give us more brief.

✓ In my opinion, people prefer to walk in parks because of their beauty, the pleasant atmosphere and the trees. Please be more specific.

Неправильное использование предлогов и инфинитива: требуется 'prefer to walk' или 'prefer walking'. 'In the parks' можно сократить до 'in parks' при общем утверждении. 'Have a good mood' нехарактерно для English; лучше 'pleasant atmosphere' или 'it puts them in a good mood'. 'Give us more brief' непонятно — заменено на 'Please be more specific'. Suggestions: use 'prefer to' + verb or verb+ing, avoid repeating 'in the parks', use natural collocations like 'pleasant atmosphere'.

× If I had a chance to take a long walk, I would be like take a long walk in the cities like in England, London and maybe the.

✓ If I had the chance to take a long walk, I would like to take it in cities such as London in England.

Неправильное использование выражения 'would be like take' — нужно 'would like to take'. Повтор 'take a long walk' можно сократить. Неправильный порядок и лишенное завершения 'and maybe the.' удалено. Для примера городов лучше использовать 'cities such as' или 'in cities like'. Suggestions: use 'would like to' + infinitive, use 'such as' for examples, complete the sentence.

× I went to the center of Kiev with my friends on their birthday party and it was my a walk lately.

✓ I went to the center of Kyiv with my friends for their birthday party, and that was my most recent walk.

Нужно согласование времен и корректные предлоги: 'for their birthday party' вместо 'on their birthday party'. 'It was my a walk lately' неверная структура; лучше 'that was my most recent walk' или 'my latest walk'. Также 'Kiev' современно пишется 'Kyiv'. Suggestions: use 'for' with events like 'birthday party', use 'most recent' or 'latest' to express 'lately' in this context and correct place names.