Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Sửa ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, nói rõ ràng và ngắn gọn. Tránh lặp từ và lỗi động từ (ví dụ “work” thay cho “walk”, “don't have time” thay vì ‘don't need don't have a lot of time to working’). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó cho một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ hợp lý (e.g., “because”, “so”).

Ví dụ: No, I don't walk much because I usually commute by motorbike. As I'm quite busy with work, I rarely have time for walking.

Gợi ý: Trả lời quá khứ cho câu hỏi quá khứ; tránh lẫn lộn thì (student used present routine). Giảm lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp (“pick my son” → “take my son”, “worked together on the park” → “went to the park together”). Dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn ở quá khứ và một câu bổ sung cụ thể với liên từ như “and” hoặc “so”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often walked outside when I was a child. I used to go to the park with my family on weekends because the air was fresh and we enjoyed playing there.

Gợi ý: Nói rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp và tiếng ững ừ. Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó đưa 1–2 lý do cụ thể với liên từ (“firstly”, “also”, “because”). Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp như “fresh air”, “relaxed”, “exercise”.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks mainly because the fresh air and peaceful environment help them relax. Also, parks provide safe paths for light exercise and a pleasant place to meet friends.

Gợi ý: Sử dụng câu điều kiện đúng (second conditional) và tránh lặp. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề với cấu trúc phù hợp (“If I had the chance, I would…”) rồi nêu lý do ngắn gọn. Dùng từ vựng chính xác như “walk along the beach” hoặc “coast”.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the beach because I enjoy the sea views and the calming sound of the waves.

Gợi ý: Dùng thì quá khứ đơn chính xác và cấu trúc tự nhiên. Tránh từ ngữ thừa như “went a working”. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề (Last week I went...) và thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động với liên từ rõ ràng (“and”, “so”).

Ví dụ: Last week I went for a walk at the lake near my house. In the afternoon I took my son there, and we walked and played by the water.

× No, I don't work a work a lot because I usually I use motorbike. To commute and I feel I am quite busy. So I don't need don't have a lot of time to working.

✓ No, I don't walk a lot because I usually use a motorbike to commute and I am quite busy, so I don't have a lot of time for walking.

The original has several sentence structure and word-choice issues: repeated words ('work a work'), incorrect verb (work instead of walk), extra pronoun ('I usually I use'), sentence fragments ('To commute'), double negative ('I don't need don't have'), and wrong verb form ('to working'). Combine ideas into one clear sentence: use 'walk' not 'work', remove duplicate words, place 'to commute' after 'motorbike', use 'so' to connect clauses, and use 'have a lot of time for walking' (noun after 'for'). Suggested practice: read sentences aloud to find duplicates, ensure verbs match intended meaning, and connect fragments into complete sentences.

× Yes, absolutely. Are you? I usually pick my son to go to the park every weekend, so we are worked together on the park where the atmosphere is clear and we are quite comfortable.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I usually take my son to the park every weekend, so we go to the park together where the air is fresh and we feel comfortable.

Errors: 'Are you?' is irrelevant; 'pick my son to go' uses wrong verb and preposition—use 'take my son to the park'; 'we are worked together on the park' uses passive and wrong verb—use 'we go to the park together'; 'atmosphere is clear' is unnatural—use 'air is fresh'; 'we are quite comfortable' better as 'we feel comfortable'. Suggested practice: use 'take someone to a place', avoid unnecessary questions, and prefer active simple present for habitual actions.

× I think there are some reason make people like walking walk in the park. Firstly, the atmosphere is so fresh. People feel comfortable when uh, go walk, uh, walking in the, uh, park.

✓ I think there are some reasons that make people like walking in the park. Firstly, the air is very fresh. People feel comfortable when they walk in the park.

Errors: 'some reason' should be plural 'some reasons'; 'make' needs relative clause 'that make'; duplicated words 'walking walk'; awkward filler words and wrong verb forms. Use 'air is very fresh' and 'people feel comfortable when they walk'. Suggested practice: ensure noun-verb agreement for countable nouns and avoid repetition; use 'when they walk' for general statements.

× If I have a chance, I want to go walking in the sea, I can, I can, I can look to see and enjoy the atmosphere near the sea.

✓ If I had the chance, I would go for a walk by the sea; I could look around and enjoy the atmosphere there.

This conditional requires the second conditional because the situation is hypothetical: 'If I had the chance, I would...'. Use 'go for a walk by the sea' (not 'walking in the sea') and 'could look around and enjoy the atmosphere there'. Remove repeated 'I can'. Suggested practice: learn conditional structures (real vs. hypothetical) and common collocations like 'go for a walk' and 'by the sea'.

× Last week I went a working in the in the lake near my house. In the afternoon I took my son go to the lake and play and walking with him.

✓ Last week I went to the lake near my house. In the afternoon I took my son to the lake to play and walked with him.

Errors: 'went a working in the in the lake' is ungrammatical—use 'went to the lake'; 'took my son go to the lake' needs 'took my son to the lake'; 'play and walking' should be parallel past forms: 'to play and walked with him' or 'to play and to walk with him'. Use past simple for completed actions. Suggested practice: use 'go to' with places, keep parallel verb forms, and use past simple consistently for past events.