Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words for coherence. Correct verb forms (work → walk), remove redundant phrases, and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add a specific detail (how long, how often) to strengthen the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk regularly in the mornings in a nearby park because the cool air helps me concentrate on my studies. I usually walk for about 30 minutes before breakfast, and the green surroundings make me feel relaxed and focused.

Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently and be clearer. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give a specific example and link ideas. Correct grammar (was a child, worked, meditated) and avoid vague phrases. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went for walks with my father when I was a child. We usually walked before school and sometimes practiced short meditation, which helped me stay healthy and calm.

Gợi ý: Provide a concise topic sentence and vary vocabulary. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and give a specific reason or example. Avoid repetition (parks, walk in parks).

Ví dụ: I think people enjoy walking in parks because the peaceful atmosphere and fresh air make exercise and meditation more pleasant. For example, many people go there to jog or practice yoga, which improves both physical fitness and mental focus.

Gợi ý: Make a clear conditional structure and correct grammar. Start with a concise topic sentence, then give specific details (who, where, distance, why). Avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words (because, and) to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk with a friend in the international park about 7 or 8 kilometres from my house because it has many different kinds of trees and pleasant trails. We could spend two hours exploring the paths and enjoying nature.

Gợi ý: Use correct past tense and be concise. Start with a direct past-tense sentence, give a specific time and reason, and avoid repetition (lately, in the night). Limit to 2–3 sentences and connect ideas with because or so.

Ví dụ: A few days ago I went for a walk with a friend at about 10:00 p.m. because I had finished work late and needed to relieve stress, so the walk helped me relax.

× Yes, I work a lot early in the morning in parks because it feels very cool and it also helps me to concentrate on my studies.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot early in the morning in parks because it feels very cool and it also helps me to concentrate on my studies.

The student used 'work' but context asks about walking. Using the correct verb 'walk' matches the present habitual action. Also maintain simple present for routines. Suggestion: use verbs that match the activity asked and use simple present for habits.

× The environment is fresh and everywhere is greenery so I like prefer to work in the morning.

✓ The environment is fresh and there is greenery everywhere, so I prefer to walk in the morning.

Problems: word order and redundant verbs 'like prefer'. Use 'there is' for existence and place the adverb 'everywhere' after 'greenery'. Use single verb 'prefer' not 'like prefer'. Also change 'work' to 'walk' to match the question.

× Well, when I was child I work with my father early in the morning and this is a good habit and it also helps to stay healthy and mentally fit.

✓ Well, when I was a child I used to walk with my father early in the morning; it was a good habit and it helped me stay healthy and mentally fit.

Missing article 'a' before 'child' and wrong tense/verb 'work' for past habitual action. Use 'used to' or simple past 'walked' to describe repeated past action. Also match past tense for resulting state ('helped'). Suggestion: include articles and consistent past tense for childhood habits.

× We do also medi meditation at that time.

✓ We also did meditation at that time.

Word order and spelling: 'do also medi meditation' is incorrect. Use 'also' before the verb or after subject ('We also did') and correct 'medi' to 'meditation'. Use past tense 'did' to match 'when I was a child' context.

× In my perspective, people like to walk in parks because in parks we do meditation or do exercises, which helps to stay fit our body and concentrate on our work and studies.

✓ In my opinion, people like to walk in parks because they can meditate or exercise there, which helps keep their bodies fit and helps them concentrate on work and studies.

Phrases: 'In my perspective' is better as 'In my opinion'. Pronoun reference and word order: use 'they' instead of 'we' to generalize. 'Do meditation or do exercises' is repetitive; use 'meditate or exercise'. Use 'helps keep their bodies fit' rather than 'helps to stay fit our body'. Maintain simple present for general truths.

× That's why mostly people like to walk in parks.

✓ That's why most people like to walk in parks.

Word choice: 'mostly people' is awkward; use 'most people'. Keep simple present for general statements.

× Well if I get a chance in future so I would like to take a long walk with my friend on the international park which is located to around 7 to 8 kilometers away from my house.

✓ Well, if I get a chance in the future, I would like to take a long walk with my friend in the international park, which is located about 7 to 8 kilometers from my house.

Several issues: add article 'the' before 'future', remove unnecessary 'so', use preposition 'in' the park (not 'on'), use 'about' rather than 'to around', and 'kilometers from' instead of 'away from'. Use conditional structure correctly.

× There are many different type of trees so it's my.

✓ There are many different types of trees, so it's my favorite place to walk.

Incorrect noun number: 'type' should be plural 'types'. Sentence fragment 'so it's my.' is incomplete; add 'favorite place to walk' or similar to complete meaning. Maintain coherence.

× Few days ago I went a walk with my friend lately round 10:00 in the evening in the night because I came from work late so I feel so stressed so I go for a walk at that time.

✓ A few days ago I went for a walk with my friend at around 10:00 in the evening because I had come home from work late and felt stressed, so I went for a walk then.

Multiple tense and article errors: add article 'A' before 'few days ago', correct phrase 'went a walk' to 'went for a walk', use 'at around 10:00 in the evening' (not 'in the night' or 'lately'), use past perfect 'had come' or simple past 'came' consistently, and maintain past tense 'felt' and 'went' for completed actions. Improve sentence flow by removing redundant 'so' and clarifying sequence.