Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally relevant but has some grammar issues and redundancy. Make the response more concise, use correct verb forms and articles, and avoid repetition. Add a linking phrase to connect morning and evening routines. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually go for a brisk walk every morning and often walk with friends in the evening, which keeps me active and helps us socialize.

Gợi ý: The content answers the question but is wordy and has grammar errors (articles, verb forms, word order). Be specific about activities and use a clear linking word to explain cause. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t walk much as a child because I spent most of my time playing cricket and football or studying. Therefore I rarely had time for evening walks.

Gợi ý: Good points but fix collocations and plural/singular forms (e.g., 'other people'), and avoid vague phrases like 'engaged with the environment.' Use specific benefits and a linking phrase to organize ideas.

Ví dụ: People enjoy walking in parks because of the fresh air and green surroundings, which reduce stress. In addition, parks offer activities like cycling and badminton that help people stay fit and meet others.

Gợi ý: Answer is understandable but contains many grammar mistakes and awkward phrases. Use a clear conditional structure, correct modal verbs, and be specific. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words for activities and reasons.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long morning walk with friends in a rose garden. We could play light games, enjoy the peaceful surroundings, and meet other walkers.

Gợi ý: This answer mixes present habit and recent action and has grammatical errors ('a evening', 'committed with me for the work'). Be specific about the most recent walk, use past tense, and explain briefly who you met. Keep it concise.

Ví dụ: Recently, I went for an evening walk in the park near my house. Many neighbours were there as well, so we chatted while walking.

× Yes, I walk a lot, especially whenever when I get up early in the morning, I prefer to go for a morning walk and in the evening I also compete with my friends to have a walk.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot. Especially when I get up early in the morning, I prefer to go for a morning walk, and in the evening I also compete with my friends to go for a walk.

The phrase 'whenever when' is redundant; use 'when' or 'whenever'. Also 'to have a walk' is unnatural; use 'to go for a walk'. Splitting into shorter sentences improves clarity. Grammar problem type ID:8

× No, because when I was a child I was especially involved in various kind of physical activities such as playing cricket or football or I was involved for my studies.

✓ No, when I was a child I was especially involved in various kinds of physical activities such as playing cricket or football, or I was busy with my studies.

Use plural 'kinds' for 'various kinds'. 'Involved for my studies' is incorrect; use 'busy with my studies'. Maintain past tense consistently. Grammar problem type ID:5

× So I was not able to get a time to get for a evening walk.

✓ So I was not able to find time to go for an evening walk.

Use 'find time' rather than 'get a time'. Use 'an evening walk' with the indefinite article 'an'. 'Get for' is incorrect; use 'go for'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× In my opinion, people generally like to visit parks because there they feel more engaged with the environment.

✓ In my opinion, people generally like to visit parks because they feel more connected with the environment there.

Word order and pronoun placement: 'there they feel' is awkward; place 'there' after the clause or use 'they feel... there'. 'Engaged with the environment' is acceptable but 'connected with the environment' is more natural here. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Along with this, there are more activities such as cycling or playing badminton with the other peoples which helps them to maintain their physique.

✓ In addition, there are many activities such as cycling or playing badminton with other people, which help them maintain their fitness.

Use 'many' instead of 'more' when not comparing. 'Peoples' is incorrect plural; use 'people'. 'Helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural 'activities'. 'Maintain their physique' is awkward; 'maintain their fitness' is more natural. Grammar problem type ID:14

× If I ever get a chance for have a long walk, I preferably go for a morning walk with my friends in a Rose Garden where we will able to play various kinds of games as well as have a near good environment so that we can talk other people.

✓ If I ever get a chance to have a long walk, I would prefer to go for a morning walk with my friends in a rose garden where we would be able to play various kinds of games and enjoy a pleasant environment so that we can talk to other people.

'Get a chance for have' is incorrect; use 'get a chance to have'. Use conditional 'would prefer' and 'would be able' for hypothetical situations. 'Rose Garden' should be lowercase unless a proper name. 'Have a near good environment' is ungrammatical; use 'enjoy a pleasant environment'. Add 'to' after 'talk'. Grammar problem type ID:4

× If I ever get a chance for have a long walk, I preferably go for a morning walk with my friends in a Rose Garden where we will able to play various kinds of games as well as have a near good environment so that we can talk other people.

✓ If I ever get a chance to have a long walk, I would prefer to go for a morning walk with my friends in a rose garden where we would be able to play various kinds of games and enjoy a pleasant environment so that we can talk to other people.

Missing articles and incorrect article usage: 'a Rose Garden' is fine only if it's a proper noun; otherwise use 'a rose garden'. Also ensure 'a' before 'pleasant environment' is not needed when using 'enjoy a pleasant environment' is correct; maintain consistency. Grammar problem type ID:22

× In the evening, I prefer to visit park for a evening walk, which is situated close to my house.

✓ In the evening, I prefer to visit the park for an evening walk, which is situated close to my house.

Use the definite article 'the' before 'park' when referring to a specific park. Use 'an evening walk' (indefinite article 'an' before vowel sound). 'Visit park' is incorrect without an article. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Uh, there are a lot of people who are also committed with me for the work.

✓ There are a lot of people who are also involved with me in the activity.

'Committed with me for the work' is awkward. Use 'involved with me in the activity' or 'who also come with me' depending on intended meaning. 'Committed with' is not standard English in this context. Grammar problem type ID:12