Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and fix fluency errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repetitions and hesitations.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk quite a lot. I usually go for walks in the evening because it helps me relax, and I often walk with friends to catch up after work.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence, correct tense and fewer fillers, then add a specific example. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Not really; I rarely went out as a child. However, my family would take trips during summer to escape the city heat, for example to visit a nearby lake once a year.

Gợi ý: Organize the answer with one clear reason sentence and two supporting points. Use linking words (not only... but also, because) and correct word choice (e.g. 'relax' instead of 'surreal').

Ví dụ: People enjoy walking in parks because they can relax and unwind. In addition, parks are social spaces where you can spend time with family, and they offer fresh air and greenery which reduce stress after long workdays.

Gợi ý: Keep the conditional structure but make it more natural and add specific details about the location and reasons. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your preference.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along a quiet historical trail, such as an old town by the river, because I enjoy peaceful scenery and the atmosphere of rain enhances the mood.

Gợi ý: Answer the past question directly using a past tense topic sentence. Avoid repeating a hypothetical response. Give a brief specific detail about where and when you walked and why.

Ví dụ: Recently I walked in the city park last Saturday. I went there after work because I needed fresh air, and I spent about forty minutes walking around the lake.

× Yes I do as soon as I get time I I'm really into walking and I get a real kick out of walking, especially during the evening with my friends and.

✓ Yes, I do. As soon as I get time, I'm really into walking and I get a real kick out of it, especially in the evenings with my friends.

Run-on sentence and incorrect phrase 'during the evening' and dangling 'and' at end. Break into clauses, add commas and periods, use 'in the evenings' for habitual time, and replace repeated 'walking' with pronoun 'it' to avoid redundancy. Suggested improvement: separate ideas into sentences, use punctuation, and replace repeated nouns with pronouns.

× To be quite honest, I didn't have an opportunity to go out as a child. Uh, but uh, as a family we attempt to go somewhere, especially during the summer when the weather was boiling, to get out of cities.

✓ To be quite honest, I didn't have an opportunity to go out as a child. But as a family we attempted to go somewhere, especially during the summer when the weather was boiling, to get out of the cities.

Tense inconsistency: 'attempt' is present while context is past. Change to past tense 'attempted' to match 'didn't have' and 'as a child'. Also add article 'the' before 'cities' to indicate specific places. Suggested improvement: keep past events in past tense throughout and use articles where needed.

× People like to walk in the parks not only to rest but also to hang out with their loved ones and surreal really a great chance to get rid of your stress and after working for so long hours, it can be great choice to do.

✓ People like to walk in parks not only to rest but also to hang out with their loved ones; it is also a great chance to get rid of stress after working long hours, and it can be a great choice to do so.

Multiple problems: unnecessary article 'the' before 'parks', wrong word 'surreal' used instead of a linking phrase, awkward word order 'your stress' (use 'stress' generally), and 'for so long hours' is incorrect — use 'long hours'. Also missing article 'a' before 'great choice' and missing 'to do so'. Suggested improvement: remove unnecessary articles, replace incorrect words with appropriate linking phrases, and use natural collocations like 'long hours' and 'get rid of stress'.

× If I had the chance for taking a long walk, I would probably choose a place where it's calm and empty, with a great historical view and in a rainy weather.

✓ If I had the chance to take a long walk, I would probably choose a place that is calm and empty, with great historical views and in rainy weather.

Incorrect preposition/verb pattern: use 'to take' not 'for taking' after 'chance'. 'Where it's calm' is acceptable but 'that is calm' is clearer. 'A great historical view' is odd; use 'great historical views' or 'a great historical setting'. Also 'in a rainy weather' should be 'in rainy weather' without article. Suggested improvement: use correct infinitive after 'chance', choose appropriate noun forms, and drop unnecessary articles.

× If I had the chance for taking a long walk, I would probably choose a place where it's calm and empty, with a great historical view and in a rainy weather.

✓ (See previous correction) If I had the chance to take a long walk, I would probably choose a place that is calm and empty, with great historical views and in rainy weather.

This sentence is repeated for the 'Where did you go for a walk lately?' response, which is inappropriate. The tense is conditional and does not answer the question about a recent walk. For the 'lately' question, use past tense: e.g., 'Lately I went for a walk to the nearby park, which is calm and has some historical buildings.' Suggested improvement: avoid repeating the same conditional answer; answer the question using appropriate tense.