Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 句子混乱，词汇和语法错误多，表达不清。回答未直接、简洁地回应问题，也缺少连贯的支持细节。建议先给出明确的主题句（Yes/No + 简短理由），然后用1-2句具体细节支持，并注意语法与常用搭配（e.g. “I walk a lot”, “on holidays”, “when I go to school”）。练习时可先写出要点再口头练习，避免填充词和重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot. As a student I often walk to and from school and around campus, especially during breaks. For example, on weekends I usually walk for 30–40 minutes to clear my mind and get some exercise.

Gợi ý: 回答缺乏逻辑，句子碎裂且重复太多，内容不够具体。建议先用一句主题句回答（Yes/No + short reason），然后用1-2个具体例子（谁、什么时候、做什么），并使用连词如“because”或“when”连接信息。注意代词和时态的准确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went for walks as a child. I usually walked with my mother after school to get some fresh air, and sometimes we walked to the local pool together on weekends. Those walks helped me relax after a busy day.

Gợi ý: 回答中有想法但表达混乱，词汇使用不准确（例如“parkour”与“park”混淆）。建议先给出一到两条清晰理由（e.g. fresh air, scenery, exercise），用连接词（for example, because）展开，并举短具体例子。避免不相关或错误词汇。

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because the air is fresher and the scenery is pleasant. For example, parks have trees and flowers which make walks relaxing, and many people take photos there to share on social media.

Gợi ý: 回答含糊且句子结构混乱，信息重复。建议先明确地点（e.g. a big park by the river），然后说明原因和具体活动（taking photos, jogging），使用连接词（because, so）组织句子，控制在3–4句内。

Ví dụ: I would like to take a long walk in a large city park by the river because it is peaceful and scenic. I could jog along the path, enjoy the flowers and trees, and take photos to remember the trip.

Gợi ý: 回答比较接近可懂但有语法和词汇错误（例如“Dublin Street”, “commercials”用法不当，“warranty issues”完全不相关）。建议先用一句话说明地点和同伴，然后用一两句具体活动和感受，用正确词汇（shops, restaurants, relaxed）并避免不相关的信息。

Ví dụ: I went for a walk on Dublin Street with a friend recently. There are many shops and restaurants there, so we walked around and bought some food and drinks; it was a very relaxed afternoon.

× Only established I watch a lot because you know I'm a student so I must talk mute holidays also I would a lot especially when I went to schools. I need work in a a subway stations all day so I would allowed.

✓ I only walk a lot. Because I'm a student, I usually walk during holidays, especially when I was going to school. I used to walk a lot to and from the subway station for work.

句子结构混乱，多个子句未正确连接或分开，导致意思不清。应把独立信息分成几句并按时间顺序组织（现在习惯、过去经历、原因）。同时将不合适的词如“established”“talk mute”“would allowed”替换为正确表达。建议用短句清晰表达：主句（我走路很多）+ 原因/时间状语（因为我是学生/上学时）+ 具体情况（上下班走路）。

× Yes, family swimming with a child. I usually go outside to her work, especially when I after school and eat dinners. I usually uh what what outside with my mom and my mom told me it's oh oh work a lot. It's very it's a great way to help me have a great.

✓ Yes. I often went out with my family when I was a child. I usually went out with my mom after school, especially before dinner. My mom told me walking a lot was good. It's a great way to stay healthy.

原句句子碎片化且人称、时态混用（现在/过去）。应统一为过去时表述童年经历，并把不完整的片段合并为完整句子。删除无意义的填充词并使用清晰的主谓结构。建议先说明频率和伴随人（过去常做），再给出原因或评价。

× I think, uh, parkour, fresh yard and they have a lot of drinks and flowers so people went to were working part and posted us some pictures on the social media.

✓ I think parks are fresh and beautiful, and they have many plants and flowers. People go to parks and post pictures on social media.

原句中“parkour”用错（应为park），“fresh yard”词序和词汇不当，且“drinks”误用为植物。应改用形容词修饰名词并用正确名词（plants/flowers）。同时时态要一致，用一般现在时描述普遍事实。建议学习形容词修饰名词的正确顺序和常见搭配（e.g., beautiful parks, many plants）。

× Almost is established in a park because warehouse bar time I like went to the party and because they are with gorgeous and when I can take some pictures of flowers in the trees and post them on my social media and how was a jogging in the park?

✓ I would mostly choose a park because it's beautiful and I can take pictures of the flowers and trees to post on social media. I also like jogging in the park.

原句冗长且逻辑混乱，包含不相关词（warehouse bar time）和错误结构。应拆分为两句：提出偏好及理由，和关于慢跑的补充。保持时态一致（虚拟语气或一般条件句可用would/if，但此处回答假设性问题可用“would”）。建议用简洁句子分点说明原因与活动。

× Is Dublin street I with my friend went to because they have a lot of umm commercials, restaurant, shop and we went to the street and buy some food and drinks together. I think it's very relaxed and their food is warranty issues.

✓ I went to Dublin Street with my friend because there are many shops, restaurants, and advertisements. We walked along the street and bought some food and drinks together. I think it's very relaxing, and the food there is quite good.

原句时态和语序混乱，人称和动词形式错误（Is Dublin street I with my friend went to…）。应用过去时描述最近的出去活动，并按照时间顺序叙述发生的事。删除无意义词并改正“warranty issues”为合适评价（quite good/quite affordable）。建议练习把地点、人物、原因和经历按顺序用完整句表达。