Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you walk a lot?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I walk a lot and I'm walking in two time morning walk and evening walk and I always walk and enjoying nature and and clear atmosphere.
Giám khảo
Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?
Thí sinh
When I am child but then I walk in my near park with my grandmother and and I'm playing in the park and and doing more activities.
Giám khảo
Why do people like to walk in parks?
Thí sinh
Because park is very safe and clean. So then people walk in park and doing walking and captured some areas and see clarity and.
Giám khảo
Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?
Thí sinh
Yeah, actually I want like go to for long walk with my partner and enjoying atmosphere and enjoying natures and long time spent with my partner in long walk.
Giám khảo
Where did you go for a walk lately?
Thí sinh
I go for a walk recently in near my park and long and doing long walk and and relieve myself for Peace of Mind.
Đánh giá
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Part 1
Do you walk a lot?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct tense, and limit to 2–3 supportive details. Use linking words like “usually” or “often” and correct collocations (e.g., “morning and evening”).
Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually go for a walk in the morning and again in the evening to enjoy the fresh air and the scenery.
Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently and give a clear topic sentence followed by specific details. Use linking words such as “when” or “and” sparingly and correctly. Mention specific activities to make the description vivid.
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often walked to the nearby park with my grandmother, where I played on the swings and joined other children in games.
Why do people like to walk in parks?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons, connected with linking words like “because” and “also”. Avoid vague phrases and improve grammar and word choice (e.g., “parks are safe and well maintained,” “enjoy the scenery”).
Ví dụ: People often walk in parks because they are safe and well maintained, and also because parks offer pleasant scenery and fresh air which helps people relax.
Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: Give one clear location and two specific reasons. Use conditional phrasing correctly and avoid repetition. Use linking words like “because” or “so that” to explain reasons.
Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk along the coast with my partner because the sea breeze is refreshing and the scenery makes it a romantic, relaxing experience.
Where did you go for a walk lately?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: Use past tense for recent actions and be concise. Start with a clear topic sentence saying where you went, then add specific details about duration and purpose using linking words like “to” or “so that”.
Ví dụ: Recently, I went for a long walk in the park near my home to clear my mind and relax; I walked for about an hour and enjoyed the peaceful surroundings.
Ngữ pháp
× Yeah, I walk a lot and I'm walking in two time morning walk and evening walk and I always walk and enjoying nature and and clear atmosphere.
✓ Yeah, I walk a lot; I take two walks, a morning walk and an evening walk, and I always enjoy nature and the clear atmosphere.
The sentence incorrectly mixes simple present and present continuous ('I walk' and 'I'm walking') and misuses the verb + -ing form 'enjoying' without an auxiliary. Use consistent tense (simple present for habits) and the correct verb forms: 'take walks' and 'enjoy' (base form) for habitual actions. Also add articles for 'the clear atmosphere' and remove repetition.' '},{
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