Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并注意语法与连贯性。减少重复，去掉多余词语（例如“两次否定”或多余的定冠词），并使用连接词保证句子流畅。此外注意单复数和介词用法（public transportation, walk to short distances→walk short distances/to short destinations）。控制在最多五句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot because I'm not good at riding a bicycle, so I often walk short distances. Compared with public transportation, I prefer walking because it gives me time to think and I don't have to squeeze with other passengers.

Gợi ý: 回答需更自然并纠正语法错误（a activity→an activity, had walk→walked, which is belong→which belongs）。提供更具体细节并用连词使逻辑更清晰。避免罗嗦并控制句数。

Ví dụ: Yes, I went walking very often in primary school. My school often organized long walks; for example, we once walked about ten kilometres to a soldiers' cemetery, which was a memorable experience for everyone.

Gợi ý: 回答要简洁并避免口头填充词（uh, umm, MMM）。提高准确词汇（park's destination不合适；use 'location' or 'near residences'），并补充具体原因（fresh air, exercise, scenery）用连接词衔接观点。

Ví dụ: I think people like walking in parks because they are usually near where people live, so they are convenient. Also parks offer pleasant scenery and fresh air, which makes walking relaxing and healthy.

Gợi ý: 表达要更准确，纠正不恰当比喻（'smell is like a sand'不通顺），注意时态和主谓一致（gives me）。给出更具体的感受和理由，使用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: I'd like to walk along a river because the gentle smell of the water and the flowing scenery calm me down. It helps me forget the pressures of my fast-paced daily life and I enjoy watching fish swim by.

Gợi ý: 答案时态不一致（混用现在时和过去时），并有词汇错误（lead exercise? should be light exercise; 'helps the air conditioner'不通）。要把信息组织好，句子少于五句，避免重复并用正确词汇表达原因和感受。

Ví dụ: Recently I walked to the supermarket just for light exercise, but I didn't buy anything. I also enjoyed being inside because the air conditioning was pleasant on a hot day.

× Yes, of course, because I'm not good at riding bicycles, so the for the short distance of the destination I often walk there.

✓ Yes, of course. Because I'm not good at riding a bicycle, I often walk short distances to my destinations.

句子结构混乱，存在多余词语（“the for the short distance of the destination”）和冠词、单复数错误。建议把句子拆成两句，删去多余部分，并将“riding bicycles”改为“riding a bicycle”或“riding bicycles”（统一形式）；将“short distance”改为复数或用短语“short distances”。保持表达简洁。

× And compared to the public transportations I prefer walking because I can have the time to think about myself and I don't too don't need to squash by some others.

✓ Compared to public transport, I prefer walking because I have time to think, and I don't need to be squashed by other people.

“the public transportations”用法错误，应为“public transport”或“public transportation”（不可数）；“I don't too don't need to”有重复；“squash by some others”被动结构和代词使用不当，应为“be squashed by other people”。建议去掉重复，使用正确的不可数名词和被动短语。

× Yes, and it was very, very often in my primary school.

✓ Yes, I did, and it happened very often when I was in primary school.

原句时态和词序不自然。应使用过去时“did”或“happened”，并用“when I was in primary school”表明时间。建议把“it was very, very often”改为更自然的过去时表达。

× Our school often organized a activity for students to walk for a long distance to the destinations.

✓ Our school often organised an activity for students to walk long distances to destinations.

“a activity”冠词错误，元音前应用“an”；“organised”英式拼写或“organized”美式均可；“for a long distance to the destinations”冗长且冠词不当，改为“walk long distances to destinations”更自然。

× For instance, we had walk for 10 kilometers to the cemetery which is belong to the soldiers.

✓ For instance, we walked 10 kilometres to the cemetery that belongs to the soldiers.

“had walk”是错误的动词形式，应为过去式“walked”；“which is belong to”结构错误，应为“that belongs to”。建议使用正确的过去式并用关系代词+动词单数形式。

× MMM. I guess that's because the park's, uh, destination.

✓ I guess that's because of the park's location.

“the park's, uh, destination”表达不明确且结构错误。应使用“because of the park's location”或“because of where the park is located”。建议用明确名词说明原因。

× Most of the park is near the, umm, people's living, so it's very convenient for them to, uh, have a walk in the park and the scenery there is pretty good, so people can walk there and have.

✓ Most parks are near where people live, so it's very convenient for them to walk in the park. The scenery is pleasant, so people enjoy walking there.

“Most of the park”应为“Most parks”或“Most of the parks”；“people's living”表达不自然，应为“where people live”；句子冗长且结尾不完整（“and have.”）。建议分成两句，使用复数和更自然的表达。

× I think I'll just walk along the river because the special smell of the river is just like a sand for me which give me a sense of calm.

✓ I think I'd just walk along the river because the river's special smell is like sand to me and gives me a sense of calm.

“which give me”主谓不一致，应为“gives”；“is just like a sand for me”不自然，应为“is like sand to me”。时态“I'll”可以改为“I'd”表示假设，但“I'll”也可接受。建议修正主谓一致并使用自然比喻。

× I can forget the pressure which my fastest paid daily life gives me and I can just watch the fishes flow in the river.

✓ I can forget the pressure that my fast-paced daily life gives me, and I can just watch the fish swimming in the river.

“fastest paid”显然是拼写/词序错误，应为“fast-paced”；“fishes”在此一般用不可数“fish”或指多种鱼种才用“fishes”；“flow in the river”应为“swimming in the river”。建议改为“fast-paced”并用正确的动词和名词形式。

× I go to the supermarket for a walk, but I didn't buy anything because I went there.

✓ I went to the supermarket for a walk, but I didn't buy anything when I was there.

句子时态不一致，先用一般现在“I go”而后用过去“didn't buy”。应统一为过去时“I went”。另外“because I went there”语义重复，改为“when I was there”更自然。

× It's just for some lead exercise and I'm not, uh, in need of something.

✓ It was just for some light exercise, and I didn't need to buy anything.

“lead exercise”是拼写错误，应为“light exercise”；“I'm not in need of something”不自然且时态不一致，改为过去时并使用更自然表达“didn't need to buy anything”。建议改正拼写并保持时态一致。

× And it helps the air conditioner so it's pretty cool to work.

✓ And the air conditioning helped, so it was pretty cool inside.

原句中“it helps the air conditioner”含义不清且时态混乱。应明确主语并用过去时“helped”，以及用“air conditioning”不可数形式，句尾“to work”上下文不符，改为“inside”。建议使句子清晰并使用正确名词形式和时态。