Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接、简洁并注意句子结构与时态。避免重复信息（如“about 10 minutes”出现两次）并使用连接词使语句更流畅。此外，注意单词选择（“work every day”不符合上下文，应为“walk every day”）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk quite a lot. Although I usually take the bus to school, I have to walk about ten minutes to the bus stop each way, so I end up walking every day.

Gợi ý: 使用过去时回答过去的事情，减少停顿词（uh）并修正语法错误。说明具体活动或场景来丰富内容。使用连接词如“because”或“so”来保持连贯，但避免冗长重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. Before I started kindergarten I often went outside because I felt bored at home, so my grandmother would take me out. I played games with my friends, we ran around and chatted together.

Gợi ý: 回答时保持条理，先给出主题句然后用两到三点支持。注意名词复数和词序（e.g. 'fresh air', 'deer'不用复数形式变化）。用恰当连接词（for example, also）并避免重复词。

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks mainly because the air is fresher, especially in the morning. In addition, parks are peaceful and often have wildlife like fish and deer to enjoy. Finally, parks are safer than streets since there are fewer cars, so people can walk or jog comfortably.

Gợi ý: 问题是假设语气，应使用条件句并简洁说明原因。避免不相关或混乱的时间细节（'about us three years ago'）除非在比较经历。描述时用准确表达（e.g. 'the sky was very blue', 'daisies all around').

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the streets of Auckland, New Zealand. When I visited a few years ago I remember the air was very fresh, the sky was blue, and there were daisies along the paths, which made walking very pleasant.

Gợi ý: 使用过去时回答最近发生的事情，句子要简洁并按时间顺序排列细节。避免填充词（uh）并用具体表达说明活动目的（e.g. 'practise speaking English')。注意搭配（'breathe fresh air', 'appreciate the flowers'）。

Ví dụ: Recently I went for a walk in the main park near my home at around seven in the morning. I went with my father and we practised speaking English while walking along the river. There were many dogs and geese, and we enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful flowers.

× Yes I do because my home from school the distance is a little far, so even though I go to school by bus, but I also need to walk about 10 minutes from my home to the bus stop about 10 minutes.

✓ Yes, I do because the distance from my home to school is a little far. Even though I go to school by bus, I still need to walk about 10 minutes from my home to the bus stop.

句子结构混乱，有重复和多余连词。原句把主语、地点成分和谓语顺序打乱（“my home from school the distance”不符合英语语序）；同时使用了“even though... but...”的重复对比连词（英语中不能同时用even though和but）。建议将地点短语按英语正常顺序（the distance from my home to school）排列，并删除多余的连词和重复短语，分成两句更清晰。

× Yes, I do, especially before I go to the kindergarten because I uh, always feel very boring in the at home stay at home.

✓ Yes, I did, especially before I went to kindergarten because I always felt very bored staying at home.

谈及过去的习惯或经历时应使用过去时态。原句使用现在时（do/go/feel）不符合时间背景；此外，形容词/分词用法错误（feel boring应为feel bored），短语顺序错误（stay at home应为staying at home或stay at home作为动名词短语）。建议将动词改为过去时，并将形容词及动名词形式修正。

× So you only asked my grandmother to to take me to go outside and chatting with my friends and we'll run after each other or walking.

✓ So my parents only asked my grandmother to take me outside to chat with my friends, and we would run after each other or walk.

原句人称和指代混乱（you only asked我的说法不合语境，应为my parents或they）；不定式和动名词混用（to take me to go outside应为to take me outside；chatting应该与句子结构保持一致）；并且时态和情态动词应与过去情境一致（will→would）。建议使用恰当的代词并统一动词形式。

× Umm, I think maybe especially in the morning, the park has so many fresh air of, uh, fresh air.

✓ Umm, I think maybe especially in the morning, the park has a lot of fresh air.

fresh air是不可数名词，不能用so many修饰，应使用a lot of或much；重复使用“fresh air”冗余。建议改为a lot of fresh air以符合不可数名词的修饰规则。

× And there are also some animals like fish or some deers and they can also appreciate the some flowers.

✓ And there are also some animals like fish or some deer, and they can also appreciate the flowers.

deer这个名词单复同形，复数不能用deers；fish作为集合可以不加复数或用fishes（在指不同种类时）。另外，the some flowers是错误搭配，应为the flowers或some flowers。建议使用deer和the flowers。

× But the most important thing maybe is the, uh, parks don't have too much. Uh, don't have cars or the electricity bike.

✓ But the most important thing may be that the parks don't have many cars or electric bikes.

语法错误包括may be写错为maybe（此处用动词短语may be），句子结构缺少连接词（is that）；不可数/可数量词使用错误（too much用于不可数，cars是可数，应用many）；electricity bike不是常用表达，正确为electric bike或electric bicycles。建议调整为：may be that the parks don't have many cars or electric bikes。

× It's very safe and people can, uh, running or the run or walking in the park.

✓ It's very safe and people can run or walk in the park.

情态动词can后应接动词原形，不能用running或the run；同时存在多余词。建议将动词统一为原形（run, walk）。

× If I have a chance, I'd like to walk in the street in walk on the street in New Zealand, Auckland, about us three years ago.

✓ If I have a chance, I'd like to walk in the streets of Auckland, New Zealand. I went there about three years ago.

原句时态和时间状语混合不清：If I have a chance (现在/将来) 与 about three years ago（过去）要分开表达。另外，短语重复（walk in the street in walk on the street）需要简化，地名表达应为in Auckland, New Zealand。建议将愿望句与过去经历分为两句，分别使用现在/虚拟和过去时。

× And I went there about 9:00 in the morning and I went on the street with my mother on the way to the pack and save at the supermarket.

✓ I went there at about 9:00 in the morning and walked on the street with my mother on the way to Pack'n Save supermarket.

重复使用went表意不准确，应用不同动词（walked）描述行走；时间状语用at about 9:00更地道；超市名应为Pack'n Save（或保持首字母大写）。建议用went（到达）与walked（行走）区分行为。

× And I think the air is very fresh and that they are in the sky is very, very. Feel blue and there are also so many daisies in my around my body, so I think that's fascinating.

✓ I think the air was very fresh and the sky looked very blue. There were also many daisies around me, so I thought it was fascinating.

时态应为过去（went there three years ago），形容词/动词顺序错误（the sky is very, very. Feel blue无意义），短语around my body用法不当，应为around me；many daisies更合适。建议使用过去时和自然表达（the sky looked very blue; daisies around me）。

× I went to the main park is just near my home and about 7:00 after I get up and I went there with my, uh, father and we, uh, practice our English communication skill and then walk along the river in the park.

✓ I went to the main park near my home at about 7:00 after I got up. I went there with my father, and we practiced our English communication skills and then walked along the river in the park.

时态混用（get up应为got up），句子过长且缺少标点导致结构混乱；名词复数和单复数错误（skill应为skills）；动词时态要统一为过去时（practiced, walked）。建议拆成两句并统一过去时。

× There were so many dogs and geese. I think that's interesting. And I can also, uh, I know we also fresh. Pressed the fresh air and appreciated of some beautiful flowers.

✓ There were so many dogs and geese. I thought that was interesting. We also enjoyed the fresh air and appreciated some beautiful flowers.

时态应为过去（thought）；句子中使用的短语“pressed the fresh air”错误，应为enjoyed the fresh air；appreciated of不需要介词of，应直接加宾语。建议使用enjoyed the fresh air并去掉多余词。