Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), correct tense and grammar, and add one specific detail using a linking word. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot, especially when I go hiking with friends. For example, last year we hiked several trails in a nearby jungle, which was very peaceful and relaxing. I really enjoy walking because it helps me stay fit and spend time with friends.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer, fix grammar (tense and pronouns), remove repetition, and give one specific memory with a linking word to illustrate.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often walked and played with friends for hours; for instance, we used to go swimming and have picnics near the river on weekends.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and two coherent reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and irrelevant words (e.g., headphones, airboard) unless explained. Be specific about benefits.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because the environment is peaceful and natural. Additionally, parks offer space for exercise and relaxation, so many people go there to concentrate, chat with friends, or enjoy fresh air.

Gợi ý: Answer directly naming the place, correct location facts and grammar, and give one specific reason and a brief plan using linking words. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I would like to take a long walk in the Himalayas near Kathmandu in Nepal. For example, I dream of hiking with friends on the mountain trails because the scenery is spectacular and it would be a great challenge.

Gợi ý: Give a concise past-tense answer with one clear location and a specific detail; remove fillers and correct grammar. Use a linking word to add who you went with or how often.

Ví dụ: Lately I went for a walk near a small river and wooded area close to my home. I usually go there with my friends or cousin because the place is calm and peaceful, which helps me relax.

× Uh yes, uh, I definitely prefer walking a lot, especially with my friends and we went hiking in this last year and we walked a lot and enjoyed the times and the like.

✓ I definitely prefer walking a lot, especially with my friends. Last year we went hiking; we walked a lot and had a great time.

The original mixes present preference with past events awkwardly and uses incorrect tense forms and filler phrases. Use present simple 'I prefer' for current habits, and simple past 'we went' and 'we walked' for past events. Remove vague fillers like 'the like' and replace 'enjoyed the times' with 'had a great time' for natural English.

× Jungles there were very peace and the calm place.

✓ The jungles there were very peaceful and calm.

'Peace' is a noun; the adjective 'peaceful' is needed. Article and word order improved: 'The jungles there were very peaceful and calm.' This matches adjective use and adjective order.

× So I prefer walking a lot *****.

✓ So I prefer walking a lot.

Remove the asterisks and keep present simple 'I prefer' for current habit. Ensure sentence is complete and natural.

× Definitely when I was styled I I used to walk a lot around here and they're like playing with friends for hours and swimming and we used to go or to play picnic with friends and enjoy a lot.

✓ Definitely when I was a child I used to walk a lot around here; we used to play with friends for hours, go swimming, and have picnics.

'Styled' is incorrect; 'a child' is intended. Remove repetitions and correct verb forms: 'used to' expresses past habits. Use parallel structure for list of activities and correct 'play picnic' to 'have picnics'.

× Uh, from my perspective, uh, in the parks on there, like many people's are gathering for walking and the peace are, are very natural.

✓ From my perspective, in parks many people gather to walk and the atmosphere is very natural and peaceful.

Incorrect preposition 'on there' should be 'in parks'. 'People's' is wrong possessive; use 'people'. 'Are gathering' is okay but simple present 'gather' fits general statement. 'The peace are' is ungrammatical; use 'the atmosphere is very natural and peaceful.'

× All peoples are youth headphones, airboard and work for themselves and they give, they give concentrate.

✓ People of all ages come: young people listen to headphones, use airboards, and exercise for themselves; they can concentrate better.

Original misuses plurals and nouns. 'All peoples' is incorrect for 'people of all ages'. Clarify intended meaning: list activities with verbs and correct noun forms. 'Give concentrate' is incorrect; use 'concentrate' or 'concentrate better'.

× So I think like that.

✓ So I think that way.

'Think like that' is a non-native structure. Use 'think that way' to express opinion about previously stated idea.

× Uh, so in my country theories on name is Kathmandu, uh, eastern part of Nepal, there is like very big mountains and many people's, uh, and tourists love to go there for hiking and walking.

✓ In my country, the city is Kathmandu, in the eastern part of Nepal; there are very big mountains and many people and tourists love to go there for hiking and walking.

Original 'theories on name' is incorrect; rephrase to 'the city is Kathmandu'. Use 'there are' for plural 'mountains'. 'Many people's' is incorrect possessive; use 'many people'. Maintain proper sentence structure and subject-verb agreement.

× And so I also have a dreams to go there and go for a walking, my friends.

✓ I also have a dream to go there and go walking with my friends.

Use singular 'a dream' or plural 'dreams' correctly; here 'a dream' fits. 'Go for a walking' is incorrect; use 'go walking' or 'go for a walk'. Place 'with my friends' to show companionship.

× Uh, in the beginning, I just, uh, go in my area, like there is also a cozy river and jungles, uh, it's give like very peace and the very, uh, calm weather and uh, usually go with my friends and cousin for walk in there lately.

✓ Recently I went for a walk in my area; there is a cozy river and some woods. It is peaceful and the weather is calm, and I usually go there with my friends and my cousin.

Tense consistency: use past 'went' or present 'I usually go'; 'lately' suggests recent past so 'went' or 'have gone recently' fits. Replace 'jungles' with 'woods' or 'some woods' for natural English. 'It's give like very peace' is ungrammatical; use 'it is peaceful'. Fix word order and include 'my cousin'.