Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Correct factual errors and grammar, be concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid exaggerated or unclear numbers ("10s thousand").

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually do around 10,000 steps a day as part of my routine, and this helps me stay fit and clear my mind after work.

Gợi ý: Fix repetition and tense errors, give a direct topic sentence then a specific supporting detail. Use simple past consistently and add a brief reason or example.

Ví dụ: Not really. I was quite shy as a child, so I usually stayed at home and only walked around the house or played with neighbours who lived nearby.

Gợi ý: Clarify unclear words and correct vocabulary mistakes ("pitiful", "unlike"). Give a clear topic sentence, then two specific reasons connected with linking words. Keep sentences natural and concise.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because it helps them relax and escape city noise. For example, being surrounded by trees and fresh air reduces stress, and it lets you notice flowers, birds and the scenery.

Gợi ý: Use correct conditional form and grammar, avoid awkward phrases ("have a charge", "peaceful chills"). Start with a conditional clause, then give two specific and relevant reasons and an activity you would do.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in Switzerland. I would love to hike around the mountains and clear lakes because the scenery is beautiful, and I would spend time taking landscape photographs.

Gợi ý: Correct word choice and sentence endings, use past simple for the recent action and present for habits. Replace unclear words ("breeze walk", "quiet St"). Provide one clear detail about place or time.

Ví dụ: Recently I went for a walk around my village in the morning. I often run or take a short, brisk walk along the main lane because I enjoy the fresh air and quiet streets.

× Yes, I walk a lot, about 10s thousand steps every day as part of my daily routine.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot, about ten thousand steps every day as part of my daily routine.

The original used '10s thousand' which is not a correct plural or number expression. Use 'ten thousand' to express the quantity in words or '10,000' in digits. This fixes singular/plural formatting and makes the noun 'steps' correctly plural to match the number.

× I'm enjoy walking because it helped me stay fit and clear my mind after work.

✓ I enjoy walking because it helps me stay fit and clear my mind after work.

Mixed tenses are used: 'I'm enjoy' is incorrect (present continuous with stative verb) and 'helped' is past tense but the sentence describes a habitual present. Use simple present 'I enjoy' and 'helps' to show habitual action.

× I was quite shy as a shy, so I did not often go outside for walks.

✓ I was quite shy, so I did not often go outside for walks.

The phrase 'as a shy' is ungrammatical and redundant because 'quite shy' already expresses the idea. Remove the extra words to form a correct adjective phrase describing the subject in the past.

× I mostly stay at home walking around the house and play with friends who live nearby.

✓ I mostly stayed at home, walking around the house and playing with friends who lived nearby.

The question asked about childhood (past), so verbs should be in the past tense. Change 'stay' to 'stayed', and use gerund forms 'walking' and 'playing' consistently. Also change 'live' to 'lived' for past reference.

× For me, walking in a park is a great way to relax at the weekend.

✓ For me, walking in a park is a great way to relax at the weekend.

This sentence is acceptable, but note that 'at the weekend' is British English; 'on the weekend' is used in American English. No grammatical correction needed.

× I enjoy being surrounded by nature and fresh air and it's pitiful so I can unlike and notice the scenery around me.

✓ I enjoy being surrounded by nature and fresh air, and it helps me relax so I can look at and notice the scenery around me.

Several incorrect words were used: 'pitiful' is wrong in this context, 'unlike' is incorrect. The intended meaning is that walking relaxes the speaker, so use 'helps me relax' and 'look at' or 'notice' to describe observing scenery.

× If I have a charge, I would take a long walks in Switzerland because the mountain and Clear Lake are incredible beautiful, I would enjoy the fresh air and peaceful chills and I would spend time taking photograph optionally.

✓ If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in Switzerland because the mountains and Clear Lake are incredibly beautiful. I would enjoy the fresh air and peaceful atmosphere and I would spend time taking photographs.

Multiple errors: 'If I have a charge' is incorrect conditional; use past subjunctive 'If I had the chance' for hypothetical. 'a long walks' mixes singular and plural—use 'a long walk' or 'long walks'. 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains'. 'incredible beautiful' needs adverb 'incredibly'. 'peaceful chills' is unnatural; use 'peaceful atmosphere'. 'taking photograph optionally' should be 'taking photographs' or 'taking photographs optionally' but better to remove 'optionally'.

× Recently I went to walk around my village in the morning.

✓ Recently I went for a walk around my village in the morning.

Verb phrase 'went to walk' is awkward. Use 'went for a walk' or 'walked around my village'. Both are past tense and appropriate for a recent action.

× I usually go for a run or a breeze walk along the main lane because I enjoy the fresh air and quiet St.

✓ I usually go for a run or a brisk walk along the main lane because I enjoy the fresh air and quiet street.

'breeze walk' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'brisk walk'. 'quiet St.' is an abbreviation and unclear; expand to 'quiet street'. Ensure adjective 'brisk' correctly modifies 'walk' and use full noun 'street'.