Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并减少冗余；注意时态和语法错误（例如"working outside"应为"being outside"或"spending time outside"；"share the lecture time"不自然；"to breath"应为"to breathe"）。把信息组织成主题句＋一到两条具体细节，用连接词使逻辑更清楚。尝试用更恰当的词汇表达如"take a walk"、"unwind"、"catch up"。

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk quite often. I usually take a short walk after lunch or dinner to catch up with my parents or friends and enjoy some fresh air. Walking also helps me unwind and reduce stress after a busy day.

Gợi ý: 回答语序和语法混乱（例如"run it together"、"I don't have had spent"不正确）。应先给出主题句，然后用一两个具体例子说明童年活动，避免否定和双重时态错误。使用更自然的表达如"play outside"、"ride bikes"、"climb trees"。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. As a child I often played outside with my friends — we would run around, play football and ride our bikes. I preferred outdoor games to indoor video games because they kept me active and social.

Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但有重复和措辞问题（如"that are surrounding us"多余；"when working in parks"意义不明）。可用一至两句更简洁、有条理地列出主要原因并举例说明，如放松、锻炼、亲近自然。用连接词如"because"、"so"、"also"来增强连贯性。

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because they offer green space and fresh air, which helps them relax. Also, parks are ideal for light exercise and socialising with friends, away from the noise and stress of the city.

Gợi ý: 注意句子结构与流畅性（例如"That is a new experience that walk in the mountain"不通顺）。应先回答地点，再给出两三个具体原因，句子简洁并正确使用不定式或动名词。词汇可用"hiking"、"scenery"、"escape the city"等更地道表达。

Ví dụ: I'd like to take a long walk in the mountains. Hiking there would let me enjoy spectacular scenery, breathe fresh air and escape city noise, which would be a refreshing new experience.

Gợi ý: 存在语法和搭配问题（如"a lake that near my house"应为"a lake near my house"；"new build artificial lake"不自然；"hush and bust"应为"hustle and bustle"；"breathe in the wind"可改为"feel the breeze"）。回答应更简洁：地点+时间+两点具体描述。

Ví dụ: Recently I walked to a lake near my house, about a ten-minute walk away. It's an artificial lake with pleasant paths, and walking there helps me escape the hustle and bustle of the city and enjoy the fresh breeze.

× I often walk after lunch or dinner with my parents or my friends that we can share the lecture time together and talk about what happened currently.

✓ I often walk after lunch or dinner with my parents or my friends so that we can share our free time together and talk about what happened recently.

原句时态和词语选择不当："that" 用法不合适，应该用表示目的的连词"so that"；"lecture time"（讲座时间）与语境不符，应为"free time"（空闲时间）；"currently" 一般用在进行时或描述当前状态，句中更合适用"recently"（最近）。建议使用正确的连词和表达以符合现在时描述习惯。

× it is a good way to release stress and feel relaxed to breath some new fresh air.

✓ It is a good way to relieve stress and feel relaxed to breathe some fresh air.

错误类型为动词形式和拼写："release stress" 不如固定搭配"relieve stress"；"breath" 写错，名词为"breath"，动词为"breathe"，此处需动词形式；"some new fresh air" 冗余且措辞不自然，改为"some fresh air"。建议记住常用搭配并注意动词/名词拼写区别。

× Yes, I really enjoy outdoor activities, especially when I was young I always went out to find my friends and play and run it together.

✓ Yes, I really enjoyed outdoor activities. Especially when I was young, I always went out to find my friends and played and ran with them together.

时态和动词形式错误：主句描述过去应使用过去时("enjoyed")；并列动作要用相同的过去式形式（"played"、"ran"）；"run it together" 不合语法，应为"ran with them" 或"ran together"。建议在一句话中保持时态一致，并使用正确的过去式及搭配。

× I don't have had spent a lot of time on playing games rather than go outside.

✓ I didn't spend a lot of time playing games; instead, I went outside.

原句中时态和助动词混用错误："don't have had spent" 是错误结构。若表达过去未做某事，应使用过去时"didn't" + 动词原形或简单过去"didn't spend"。另外，"spend time on playing" 冗长，惯用说法是 "spend time playing"；"rather than go outside" 逻辑混乱，改为对比连接词"instead"并保持过去时。建议理清时态，避免不必要的完成时混合。

× parks are the perfect place for us to unwind because the scenery is good and there are green spaces that are surrounding us.

✓ Parks are the perfect place for us to unwind because the scenery is nice and there are green spaces surrounding us.

介词和非限定性定语使用问题："that are surrounding us" 冗长且不自然，直接用分词短语"surrounding us" 更简洁；"scenery is good" 更自然的表达是"scenery is nice" 或 "the scenery is beautiful"。建议使用分词短语替代冗长的定语从句。

× In addition, I feel that people can really enjoy the sunshine and get away from work stress when working in parks.

✓ In addition, I think people can really enjoy the sunshine and get away from work stress by spending time in parks.

时态与动词搭配问题：原句中"when working in parks" 表达模糊，改善为"by spending time in parks" 更清楚地表示方式；"I feel that" 可改为更常用的"I think"。建议用更自然的介词短语说明方式。

× Well, I would prefer to go to the mountain to take a long walk because there's no big mountain beside my house, which means I need to travel around and find a new place.

✓ Well, I would prefer to go to the mountains to take a long walk because there is no big mountain near my house, so I need to travel to find a new place.

存在数与固定搭配问题：通常说"go to the mountains" 而非单数"the mountain" 表示去徒步；"beside my house" 更常用的是"near my house"；定语从句"which means" 可用更自然的连接词"so"。建议注意可数名词的单复数搭配和常用介词。

× That is a new experience that walk in the mountain, breathing the fresh air to release stress.

✓ That would be a new experience: walking in the mountains and breathing fresh air to relieve stress.

句子结构混乱："That is a new experience that walk in the mountain" 语法不通，应使用动名词短语做补充说明（walking...）。"breathing the fresh air to release stress" 中"the"冗余且搭配不当，改为"breathing fresh air to relieve stress" 更自然。建议用动名词短语并保持词汇搭配一致。

× I went to a lake that near my house, it's about 10 minutes walk and it is a beautiful place because it's a new build artificial lake and it can help me avoid from the hush and bust of city life and release stress because I can breathe in the wind.

✓ I went to a lake near my house. It's about a 10-minute walk and a beautiful place because it's a newly built artificial lake. It helps me escape the hustle and bustle of city life and relieve stress because I can breathe in the fresh air.

多个问题："that near my house" 需用定语从句或简化为"near my house"；"10 minutes walk" 应为 "a 10-minute walk"；"new build" 需改为形容词短语"newly built"；"avoid from the hush and bust" 用词错误，应为"escape the hustle and bustle"；"release stress" 应为"relieve stress"；"breathe in the wind" 不自然，改为"breathe in the fresh air"。建议注意定语用法、复合形容词、固定搭配和词序。