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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you walk a lot?

Thí sinh

No, because I went to school by car and the weather of Malaysia is not suitable with work so that I'm not work a lot.

Giám khảo

Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No because my parents are busy in their works and didn't have an attempt. Took me to go outside to have a walk when I was child so my childhood just play.

Giám khảo

Why do people like to walk in parks?

Thí sinh

I believe that people like to work in parks because it can't let them film, relax and feel more comfortable.

Giám khảo

Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?

Thí sinh

I want try to go to the KLCC to make a city walk because this is a good experience for me who was didn't have any work in daily.

Giám khảo

Where did you go for a walk lately?

Thí sinh

My latest walk was when she my neighbor house that is beside me because they invited me to enjoy dinner.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you walk a lot?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct, concise answer first, then add one or two clear reasons with correct grammar. Mention current habits and a brief reason about weather or transport. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: No, I don't walk much. I usually go to school by car, and the hot, humid weather in Malaysia makes walking uncomfortable, so I prefer motorized transport.

Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Start with a clear past-tense sentence, then give specific reasons and a short detail about childhood activities. Use correct past tense and linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't often go for walks as a child because my parents were busy with work and rarely had time to take me out, so I spent most of my childhood playing at home.

Why do people like to walk in parks?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give two clear, specific reasons using linking words. Use correct verbs and avoid unclear phrases. Mention benefits like fresh air, exercise, and relaxation.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because the fresh air and greenery help them relax, and walking is a simple form of exercise that improves mood and health.

Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?

Điểm: 28.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct conditional answer, then explain briefly why with clear grammar. State the place and one or two reasons (sightseeing, atmosphere). Use 'would' for hypothetical situations.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk around KLCC because I enjoy cityscapes and it would be a new experience for me since I don't often walk in urban areas.

Where did you go for a walk lately?

Điểm: 22.0

Gợi ý: Use past simple with a clear subject and verb, and give concise context. Mention who invited you and what you did briefly. Avoid confusing pronouns and add a linking phrase like 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: My most recent walk was to my neighbor's house next door; they invited me for dinner, so I walked over for the meal.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× No, because I went to school by car and the weather of Malaysia is not suitable with work so that I'm not work a lot.

No, because I went to school by car and the weather in Malaysia is not suitable for walking, so I don't walk a lot.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses and uses incorrect prepositions and verbs. 'The weather of Malaysia' should be 'the weather in Malaysia.' 'Not suitable with work' is incorrect; use 'not suitable for walking.' 'I'm not work a lot' is ungrammatical; use present simple 'I don't walk a lot' to match the general statement. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use correct prepositions ('in' and 'for') and the base verb 'walk' with appropriate auxiliary.

Past tense issue

× No because my parents are busy in their works and didn't have an attempt. Took me to go outside to have a walk when I was child so my childhood just play.

No, because my parents were busy with their work and could not take me outside to walk when I was a child, so my childhood was mostly play.

Multiple tense and article errors. 'Are busy' should be past 'were busy' to match 'when I was a child.' 'Their works' should be 'their work' or 'their jobs.' 'Didn't have an attempt' is unnatural; use 'could not' or 'did not have the opportunity.' 'Took me to go outside' is ungrammatical; subject should perform action: 'could not take me outside.' 'When I was child' needs article 'a child.' Suggestion: align past tense throughout and use natural verbs ('could not take' or 'didn't have the opportunity').

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I believe that people like to work in parks because it can't let them film, relax and feel more comfortable.

I believe that people like to walk in parks because it allows them to relax and feel more comfortable.

Wrong verb 'work' should be 'walk.' 'It can't let them film' is incorrect and unclear; use 'it allows them to relax.' Use 'allows' (singular subject 'it') instead of 'can't let.' Remove 'film' which seems unintended. Suggestion: choose correct verb and use 'allows' or 'helps' plus infinitive for purpose ('allows them to relax').

Verb + -ing form

× I want try to go to the KLCC to make a city walk because this is a good experience for me who was didn't have any work in daily.

I want to try to go to KLCC for a city walk because it would be a good experience for me since I don't usually have much to do during the day.

Missing 'to' after 'want' ('want to try'). 'Make a city walk' is unnatural; use 'for a city walk' or 'to take a walk.' 'Who was didn't have any work in daily' is ungrammatical: use 'since I don't usually have much to do during the day.' Keep conditional/modal 'would be' to indicate hypothetical benefit. Suggestion: use correct infinitive forms and natural phrases ('go to', 'for a city walk', 'don't usually have much to do').

Sentence structure errors

× My latest walk was when she my neighbor house that is beside me because they invited me to enjoy dinner.

My latest walk was to my neighbor's house next door because they invited me to dinner.

The original has word order and possessive errors. 'When she my neighbor house that is beside me' is ungrammatical. Use 'to my neighbor's house next door.' 'Enjoy dinner' is odd; use 'invited me to dinner.' Suggestion: use correct preposition 'to', possessive form 'neighbor's', and concise phrasing ('invited me to dinner').

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
ComfortablePleasant; Cozy; Loose; Leisurely
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
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