Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid repetition; organize into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Use linking words and correct minor grammar errors (e.g., remove repeated 'because', complete the final phrase). Also vary vocabulary (e.g., 'go for a walk', 'light workout') and keep to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk regularly, especially in the mornings. I usually go for a three- to four-kilometre walk and sometimes do a short light workout afterwards. This routine helps me feel more energetic and ready for the day.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words (uh) and correct grammar issues (word order, extra words). Use linking words like 'and' or 'also' to connect ideas and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I spent most of my free time outdoors with friends when I was a child. We played games and rode bicycles, and because there were no smartphones then, we often stayed outside for hours.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and follow with specific reasons linked logically. Fix vocabulary mistakes ('bars' → 'parks') and grammar (remove duplicated words, correct 'recharge their emotionally' to 'recharge emotionally' or 'recharge their energy'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because they offer fresh air and a peaceful atmosphere. As a result, walking there helps reduce stress and allows people to recharge emotionally.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference sentence and then one concrete reason. Correct grammar (e.g., 'a botanical garden', 'nature gives you') and avoid fillers like 'uh'. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would like to walk in a botanical garden surrounded by flowers and trees because the natural scenery is calming and makes walking more enjoyable and relaxing.

Gợi ý: Answer with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details (distance, features). Fix grammar and word choice ('a bridge near my house', 'it's a four- or five-kilometre route', 'it gives me peace', 'the view is beautiful'). Avoid redundancy and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Recently I've been walking on a bridge near my house, which is about four to five kilometres long. I enjoy it because the route is peaceful and offers beautiful views.

× I walk quite a lot because especially in the morning because I like to get up earlier and get outside and walk for around 3 or 4 kilometers.

✓ I walk quite a lot, especially in the morning, because I like to get up early and go outside and walk around 3 or 4 kilometers.

Redundant 'because' and awkward phrasing. Use 'especially' once, 'get up early' is the correct collocation, and 'go outside and walk around' is more natural. Remove repetition to improve clarity.

× Sometimes I even do some light exercise for my body and it makes me feel more energetic and feel.

✓ Sometimes I even do some light exercise, and it makes me feel more energetic.

The final 'and feel' is incomplete and redundant. Remove the extra word and join clauses with a comma and 'and'. Use concise expression: 'feel more energetic.'

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside for a walk when you were a child?

The phrase 'have a walk' is nonstandard in this context. Use 'for a walk' or 'go for a walk.' The rest is correct in past question form.

× We used to play games, ride bicycles and a lot of entertainment times, uh outdoors back then, people children didn't spend a lot of time in in on phones that than they do now.

✓ We used to play games, ride bicycles and enjoy many outdoor pastimes. Back then, children didn't spend as much time on phones as they do now.

Multiple issues: awkward noun phrase 'a lot of entertainment times' should be 'many outdoor pastimes' or 'many outdoor activities.' Redundant filler 'uh' removed. Word order and comparison fixed: use 'didn't spend as much time on phones as they do now.'

× I think people like to walk in bars because they help, they can relax and breathe fresh air there.

✓ I think people like to walk in parks because there they can relax and breathe fresh air.

'bars' is likely a typo for 'parks.' Preposition: use 'in parks' or 'in the park'; 'there they can' or 'they can there' — better 'there they can.' Removed comma splice and corrected noun.

× Parks usually have a calm atmosphere so they they can reduce people's stress and recharge their emotionally.

✓ Parks usually have a calm atmosphere, so they can reduce people's stress and help them recharge emotionally.

Duplicate 'they' removed. 'Recharge their emotionally' is incorrect; use 'help them recharge emotionally.' Added comma before 'so' and clarified object 'them.'

× If I had a chance, I would like to walk surrounded by nature or Botanical Garden full of flowers and trees.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to walk surrounded by nature or in a botanical garden full of flowers and trees.

Use 'the chance' (common expression) and include preposition 'in' before 'a botanical garden.' 'Botanical Garden' should be lowercase as a common noun and needs an article 'a.'

× I think it's uh, nature give you more enjoyable and relaxing walking.

✓ I think nature gives you a more enjoyable and relaxing walk.

Remove filler 'uh.' Subject-verb agreement: 'nature gives' (singular). Use noun phrases correctly: 'a more enjoyable and relaxing walk' instead of 'more enjoyable and relaxing walking.'

× Recently I have been going to bridge near my house, it's around 4 or 5 kilometers so it's perfect for a long time.

✓ Recently I have been going to the bridge near my house; it's around 4 or 5 kilometers, so it's perfect for a long walk.

Missing article 'the' before 'bridge.' Use semicolon or period to separate clauses. 'Perfect for a long time' is wrong — should be 'perfect for a long walk.'

× I really enjoy that walk because they give me some peaceful a long time and also there's a view is so beautiful and attractive.

✓ I really enjoy that walk because it gives me some peaceful time, and the view is very beautiful and attractive.

Pronoun agreement: 'that walk' is singular, so use 'it gives.' Remove awkward 'a long time' and replace with 'peaceful time.' Fix 'there's a view is' to 'the view is.' Use 'very' instead of redundant phrasing.