Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and clear. Start with a simple topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific details. Avoid repetition and unnecessary filler (e.g., "uh", "well").

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk quite a lot. I walk to and from work most days because my office is nearby, and I also walk during my lunch break to get some fresh air.

Gợi ý: Answer directly about childhood, use past tense and concise details. Use linking words (because, so) correctly and avoid confusion with present-day work. Give a clear reason and one specific example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often walked when I was a child. Because my home was quite far from school, I walked to school every day with my friends, which was a normal routine in my town.

Gợi ý: Structure the answer with a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons. Use correct collocations (reduce stress, keep fit) and linking words (for example, and, also) for coherence.

Ví dụ: People like to walk in parks because it reduces stress and helps them stay fit. For example, the peaceful surroundings make it easier to relax, and the open space is ideal for light exercise.

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and concise. Give a clear preference and add a specific reason or a short example. Avoid fillers and repeat words (natural environment, natural parks).

Ví dụ: I would like to take a long walk in a national park in the countryside because I enjoy fresh air and quiet scenery, and I could also see wildlife and peaceful landscapes.

Gợi ý: Use past simple and give a clear, coherent answer. State where you went and give one specific detail about the walk (who you were with, what you did). Avoid tense errors and unclear phrasing.

Ví dụ: I went for a walk yesterday to the park near my house with my two young sons. We walked along the lake and watched the ducks, which they enjoyed.

× Oh well, I work a lot on my daily basis because I have to work to work.

✓ Oh well, I work a lot on a daily basis because I have to work.

The phrase 'on my daily basis' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'on a daily basis' (article and collocation). There is a repeated phrase 'to work to work' which is redundant. Suggestion: use 'on a daily basis' and remove the repeated words to make the sentence clear.

× When I was a child I would say as I work a lot, same thing because I I because my house not very close to my school so I had to walk to school with my other friends which is quite common in Thailand.

✓ When I was a child I would say the same because my house was not very close to my school, so I had to walk to school with my friends, which was quite common in Thailand.

Multiple tense and structure problems: 'I would say as I work a lot' is confusing and mixes present and past. Use past tense 'was' for 'house was not' and 'which was quite common' to keep past narrative consistent. Remove duplicated words and unnecessary 'other'. Suggestion: keep verbs in past when describing childhood and simplify phrasing.

× I personally think that one of the reasons why people love walking in parks is its help them to relate stress and also keep them healthy and fit.

✓ I personally think that one of the reasons people love walking in parks is that it helps them relieve stress and also keeps them healthy and fit.

Pronoun and verb form errors: 'its help' is incorrect; use 'it helps' (third person singular). 'Relate stress' is wrong collocation; use 'relieve stress'. Also maintain subject-verb agreement with 'keeps them'. Suggestion: use 'it helps them relieve stress' and ensure verbs agree with singular subject 'it'.

× I'd love to take a long walk uh, especially umm in a natural environment like natural parks or evens umm in the rural areas. I enjoy the environment overall.

✓ I'd love to take a long walk, especially in a natural environment like national parks or even in rural areas. I enjoy the environment overall.

Use of 'evens' is incorrect; should be 'even'. 'Natural parks' is uncommon; 'national parks' or 'natural areas' are better. Remove filler words and ensure parallel structure. Suggestion: say 'especially in national parks or even in rural areas'.

× Uh, it just happened yesterday. I've been to work with my little sons and the parks near my house.

✓ Uh, it happened yesterday. I went to work with my little sons and visited the parks near my house.

Mixing 'just happened yesterday' with present perfect 'I've been' is inconsistent; use simple past 'I went' for a specific time in the past. 'I've been to work with my little sons' is odd; use 'I went to work with my sons' and add 'visited' for parks. Suggestion: use simple past when mentioning a specific past time like 'yesterday'.