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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you walk a lot?

Thí sinh

No, I just go to work or go to school. I work and other time I didn't work because I am lazy.

Giám khảo

Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I'm I was young, I often go out to have a walk because. There is no faster travel and I just go walk to.

Giám khảo

Why do people like to walk in parks?

Thí sinh

I think go to work in parks is relaxing myself away and go to work can communicate with somebody or to relaxing yourself that is a way to relax.

Giám khảo

Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?

Thí sinh

No, I think I will refuse this, uh, chance because, uh, I didn't like sport and I like stay at home and I don't want to go along work.

Giám khảo

Where did you go for a walk lately?

Thí sinh

Oh I recently in not work go out because weather is very hot and I didn't like to go outside. I just stay at home to work.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you walk a lot?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够直接和自然,句子有语法错误,信息重复且缺乏具体细节。建议首先直接回答(Yes/No),接着用一到两句简短具体说明原因或频率,注意时态和主谓一致,避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: Not really. I usually only walk when I go to work or school, since I prefer to take public transport for longer journeys. I don’t walk much in my free time because I often feel too tired.

Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答包含正面信息但有多个语法和连贯性问题。建议使用正确的过去时,给出具体原因并用连接词(because/so)完整表达,并避免碎片句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often walked outside when I was a child because our family didn’t have a car, so walking was the easiest way to get around. I also enjoyed exploring the neighborhood with my friends.

Why do people like to walk in parks?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答不切题且表达混乱。应直接回答原因,使用清晰的句子并举例支持(例如放松、运动、社交),用连接词使逻辑连贯。注意用词准确(e.g. relax, socialize)。

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because it helps them relax and escape from daily stress. They can also exercise, enjoy nature, or meet friends, which makes a park a pleasant place to spend time.

Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 回答消极且含糊,语法和词汇使用有问题。建议先正面回答(给出地点),即使不想也可说明理由并提供替代选择,句子不超过五句,避免填充词。

Ví dụ: I probably wouldn’t choose a long hike because I’m not very fond of strenuous exercise. If I had to, I would prefer a gentle coastal walk where I can enjoy scenery without too much effort.

Where did you go for a walk lately?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答没有直接回应“最近去哪儿散步”,而是说自己没去。建议先直接说“No, I haven't,”然后简要说明原因并提供最近一次散步的具体时间和地点或计划。注意语法和时态。

Ví dụ: I haven’t been for a walk recently because the weather has been very hot, so I’ve stayed home to work. The last walk I took was a couple of weeks ago around the park near my house.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× No, I just go to work or go to school. I work and other time I didn't work because I am lazy.

No, I just go to work or go to school. I work, and other times I don't work because I am lazy.

句子中时态和主谓一致有问题。“other time” 应为复数“other times”;第二句应使用现在时“don't work”以与前文的现在习惯动作一致;并加逗号连接并列分句,使句子更通顺。建议将动词保持在现在时,表习惯动作。

Past tense issue

× Yes, when I'm I was young, I often go out to have a walk because. There is no faster travel and I just go walk to.

Yes, when I was young, I often went out for a walk because there was no faster way to travel and I just walked.

句中涉及过去的习惯动作,应使用一般过去时:'was'、'went'、'walked'。原句还包含多余或错误的词序与短语(例如 'I'm I was'、'go out to have a walk'、'go walk to'),应简化为常用表达 'went out for a walk' 和 'there was no faster way to travel'。建议把描述过去的动作统一用过去时并使用自然搭配。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think go to work in parks is relaxing myself away and go to work can communicate with somebody or to relaxing yourself that is a way to relax.

I think walking in parks is relaxing, and you can meet someone and relax there; it's a way to unwind.

原句中代词和动词形式混乱:'relaxing myself away' 和 'to relaxing yourself' 用法不当且人称不一致。应统一使用一般表达并保持人称一致(如使用 'you' 或 'people');同时将不定式或动名词换为正确形式,如 'walking'。建议用自然的短语 'walking in parks is relaxing' 和 'you can meet someone' 来表达。

Future tense issue

× No, I think I will refuse this, uh, chance because, uh, I didn't like sport and I like stay at home and I don't want to go along work.

No, I think I will refuse this chance because I don't like sports; I like staying at home and I don't want to go for a walk.

句子时态和动词形式混用:表示将来意向可用 'will refuse',但后文描述喜好应使用现在时 'don't like';'didn't like' 不符合语境。'like stay at home' 应改为动名词 'like staying at home';'go along work' 是错误搭配,应为 'go for a walk'。建议统一时态,使用正确的词组表达。

Present tense issue

× Oh I recently in not work go out because weather is very hot and I didn't like to go outside. I just stay at home to work.

Oh, I haven't gone out recently because the weather is very hot and I don't like going outside. I just stay at home to work.

句中时间状语 'recently' 常与现在完成时连用,应使用 'haven't gone out recently';'I didn't like to go outside' 应与当前状态一致改为现在时 'I don't like going outside';'stay at home to work' 可保留,但要注意动名词形式和时态一致。建议使用现在完成时表达最近的经历,并将喜欢/不喜欢用现在时。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

HotHeated; Very warm; Feverish; Spicy; Fierce
LazyIdle
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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