Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 発音と文法の誤り（"work"と"walk"の混同、不要な繰り返し）、文の構造が不明瞭です。まず直接的なトピック文を作り、その後に具体的な頻度と理由を示してください。短く自然な文にし、不要な語の繰り返しを避け、接続詞（because, soなど）を正しく使いましょう。例：主文→頻度→理由の順で。

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk quite often. I usually walk to the supermarket, which takes about 15 minutes, and I do this at least once a week because I enjoy the fresh air and exercise.

Gợi ý: 繰り返しや語順の誤りが多く、文が途中で切れています。過去習慣を表す簡潔な主文（"Yes, I often..."）の後に理由や例を一つ加え、文を完結させてください。語の繰り返しを避け、終わりまで言い切ることが重要です。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went for walks as a child. I preferred being active outdoors to sitting inside, so my mother usually took me to the nearby park on weekends.

Gợi ý: "natures"の誤用や語順の不自然さ、冗長な表現があります。理由を二つに絞り、それぞれを明確に述べると良いです。接続に"and"や"also"を自然に使い、名詞の単複や冠詞に注意してください。

Ví dụ: I think people enjoy walking in parks because they can appreciate nature, such as flowers and ponds, and because it's a peaceful place to chat with friends or family while exercising.

Gợi ý: 時制と表現の誤り（"like to" vs "would like to"、"working"→"walking"など）があります。仮定法の質問には"would like to"を使い、理由は自然で簡潔に述べてください。箇条的に見所を述べる際は語の並びに注意。

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk in the mountains because walking there sounds enjoyable. I would love to see birds, wildflowers and different kinds of trees along the trails.

Gợi ý: 時制の不一致（"went"と"walk"）が目立ちます。過去の出来事を述べるときは全体を過去形に揃えてください。細部（どのくらいの時間、どんな活動をしたか）を付け加えると自然さが増します。

Ví dụ: I went to the park with a friend recently. There were a lot of cherry blossoms, so we walked around the park and took some photos while enjoying the scenery.

× Yes, I work a lot I because I like walking and I often walk to the supermarket. It's about 15 minutes on foot at least once a week.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot because I like walking, and I often walk to the supermarket. It takes about 15 minutes on foot, and I go at least once a week.

The student used 'work' instead of 'walk' and has sentence run-on and awkward tense/word choice. Use simple present 'walk' for habitual actions. Add conjunctions and commas to separate ideas and use 'takes' to describe duration. Improve: replace incorrect word, split into clear clauses, and use 'go' for frequency. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yes, I I often went to went outside to have a walk when I was a child because I I preferred working and learning to to stay inside. So my mother.

✓ Yes, I often went outside to have a walk when I was a child because I preferred working and learning to staying inside.

Repeated words and incorrect infinitive/gerund form: after 'preferred' we need a gerund ('staying'), not an infinitive. Remove duplicates and the incomplete sentence at the end. Keep simple past 'went' and 'preferred' for past habits. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× MMM I think people like to walk in parks because they can enjoy seeing natures like a flower or pond and also they during walking they can chat with their friend or family.

✓ I think people like to walk in parks because they can enjoy seeing nature, such as flowers or ponds, and while walking they can chat with their friends or family.

'natures' is incorrect; use uncountable 'nature'. 'a flower or pond' should be plural or general 'flowers or ponds' and 'such as' is better. 'During walking' is unnatural; use 'while walking'. 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match general reference. These are article and pluralization issues and adverb placement. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I like to take a long walk to the mountain if I had a chance. This is because working in the mountain sounds so fun. I want to see a lot of birds, flowers and trees during my walking.

✓ I would like to take a long walk in the mountains if I had the chance. This is because walking in the mountains sounds fun. I want to see lots of birds, flowers, and trees during the walk.

When expressing a hypothetical desire use 'would like' with the past conditional 'if I had the chance'. Use 'in the mountains' (natural collocation) and plural 'mountains'. 'Working in the mountain' is incorrect; use gerund 'walking'. 'Lots of' or 'many' better than 'a lot of' in this context. Also use 'during the walk' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 7

× I went to the park with my friend. There was a lot of cherry blossom, so we walk around the park.

✓ I went to the park with my friend. There were a lot of cherry blossoms, so we walked around the park.

Narration is in past tense, so use past forms consistently: 'walk' should be 'walked'. 'Cherry blossom' as a countable plural should be 'cherry blossoms' or use uncountable 'cherry blossom trees'; 'there was' should be 'there were' to agree with plural noun. Ensure subject-verb agreement and past tense consistency.