Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Keep your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Correct small grammar errors (e.g. “wake up early” not “wake up in early”). Remove phrases like “and thank you.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot because it helps clear my mind. For example, I usually walk alone early in the morning in a nearby park where I can enjoy fresh air and avoid my phone, which helps me focus on my thoughts.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct tense/grammar to match past habits (use past simple or 'used to'). Avoid repeating the same idea twice. Add one specific memory or detail to make the answer more vivid and use linking words like “for example” or “often”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to go outside a lot when I was a child, especially with my friends. For example, we often walked to the local park in the mornings to play football and climb trees, which was fun and refreshing.

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid filler words. Use accurate noun-verb agreement (e.g. “trees are”) and give one or two clear reasons with linking words (e.g. “because” / “for example”). Use vocabulary appropriate to the context rather than vague phrases like “presence of nature.”

Ví dụ: People enjoy walking in parks because they offer fresh air and natural surroundings. For example, in the morning you can appreciate trees, flowers and open space, which makes walking relaxing and pleasant.

Gợi ý: Use conditional grammar correctly (e.g. “I would prefer to walk in a park”). Keep sentences concise and avoid hesitation sounds. Give one specific reason and an example of what you would enjoy during the walk.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would prefer to take a long walk in a large park because I enjoy being surrounded by trees and flowers. For instance, I would walk along a lakeside path and watch children playing, which always makes me feel happy.

Gợi ý: Use clear past tense and avoid unclear phrases (“rush” and “around the sink” are confusing). Provide one clear specific detail (e.g. size, features, activities) and use linking words to connect ideas. Correct minor grammar and word choice issues.

Ví dụ: Yesterday I went for a walk in the park near my house. It is about 15 acres with tall trees and well-kept flowerbeds, and I saw many people and children playing football on the open field.

× Yeah, I usually like to walk a lot because it freshens my mind.

✓ Yeah, I usually like to walk a lot because it freshens my mind.

No correction needed: verb tense and subject-verb agreement are correct (present simple 'freshens' matches singular noun 'it').

× I especially like to wake up in early in the morning and go for a walk in the nice weather, in nature alone, without any phones or stuff, so that I can be with myself and my thoughts.

✓ I especially like to wake up early in the morning and go for a walk in nice weather, alone in nature, without any phones or other things, so that I can be with myself and my thoughts.

Errors: unnecessary preposition 'in' before 'early', awkward word order 'in the nice weather, in nature alone' and informal 'stuff'. Suggestions: remove extra 'in', place 'alone in nature' for natural word order, and replace 'stuff' with 'other things' for clarity.

× Yeah, I often went outside to go for a walk when I was a child, especially with my friends.

✓ Yeah, I often went outside to walk when I was a child, especially with my friends.

Redundancy: 'went outside to go for a walk' repeats motion verbs. Use 'went outside to walk' or 'went out for a walk'. This keeps past tense consistent.

× I when I went to play with them in the morning, I usually go to park and play with them.

✓ When I went to play with them in the morning, I usually went to the park and played with them.

Tense inconsistency: sentence starts in past ('went') but switches to present ('go', 'play'). Make all verbs past ('went', 'played'). Also add definite article 'the' before 'park'.

× It freshens my mind and cleans my mind.

✓ It freshened my mind and cleared my mind.

Tense and word choice: in context of childhood, use past tense ('freshened', 'cleared'). 'Cleans my mind' is unnatural; use 'cleared my mind'.

× People like to walk in parks because of the presence of nature, of fresh oxygen.

✓ People like to walk in parks because of the presence of nature and fresh air.

'Fresh oxygen' is unnatural in this context; 'fresh air' is the usual collocation. Replace comma+of with 'and' for smooth coordination.

× During the morning, the tree are surrounded by nature, the trees, the plants and many other humans along walking and playing in parks.

✓ During the morning, the trees are surrounded by nature: plants and many other people walking and playing in parks.

Subject-verb agreement: 'tree are' should be 'trees are'. Word choice: use 'people' instead of 'humans'. Reorder phrase to 'people walking and playing' for clarity.

× And there's a beauty in parks, uh, enhanced by flowers.

✓ And there's a beauty in parks, enhanced by flowers.

No major grammatical error apart from filler 'uh'. Remove filler for clearer speech transcription.

× If I had a chance to take a long walk, I'll prefer it to take the walk in park because I like to be be surrounded by nature, plants, trees, flowers, the beauty of nature and the other children's playing around me.

✓ If I had a chance to take a long walk, I would prefer to take it in a park because I like to be surrounded by nature: plants, trees, and flowers, and to hear other children playing around me.

Conditional form: use 'would' (second conditional) after 'If I had a chance'. Fix word order 'prefer to take it in a park'. Remove duplicate 'be'. Use 'a park' as nonspecific, and change 'children's playing' to 'children playing' or 'to hear other children playing' for grammaticality.

× It just gives me a Jo, a sense of happiness.

✓ It just gives me a sense of happiness.

Typo 'Jo' is extraneous. Remove it. Use 'a sense of happiness' (correct quantifier/article usage).

× Lately, yesterday I went for a walk in my park, which is near my house.

✓ Yesterday I went for a walk in the park near my house.

Redundancy and adverb placement: 'Lately, yesterday' is redundant; choose one ('yesterday'). Use 'the park' as it's a specific nearby park. Reorder for natural English.

× It's a 15 acre park filled with beautiful strong trees, plants and there's a lot of rush and children every time playing around the sink, some playing football.

✓ It's a 15-acre park filled with beautiful, sturdy trees and plants, and there are always many people and children playing around, some playing football.

Hyphenate '15-acre'. 'Strong trees' is better as 'sturdy trees'. 'There's a lot of rush' is unnatural — use 'there are always many people' or 'it is always busy'. 'Around the sink' is likely incorrect word choice; remove or replace with 'around the park'. Ensure subject-verb agreement ('there are').