Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like reading?

Thí sinh

Well, I used to love reading when I was a child because I was so amazed by the adventurous books at that time. But now I don't like reading because I have a lot of methods to entertain myself.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?

Thí sinh

Well, I prefer to read on a screen because is much more convenient for us to carry a laptop or an ebook everywhere. Besides, it makes reading a book affordable. Everyone can find some resources on the Internet.

Giám khảo

When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

Thí sinh

Well, I have to read carefully when I write an essay or a dissertation because I have to be so cautious about the figures and data in research paper. But when I read some books just out of interest. I don't have to read carefully. I just mindlessly browse about the content.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

Thí sinh

Actually I prefer detailed reading because it gives me the opportunity to relate to the author. I value every line of the text and after reading it I can also have a feeling of achievement.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like reading?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答有清晰的对比结构,也给出了原因,但“adventurous books”和“a lot of methods to entertain myself”不够自然,建议改为“adventure novels”和“many other ways to entertain myself”。此外,最后的观点略显绝对,可以说明现在仍然会在特定情况下阅读,使答案更自然、更有细节。

Ví dụ: I used to love reading when I was a child, especially adventure novels, because I found them really exciting. However, I read less nowadays because I have many other ways to entertain myself, such as watching films and listening to podcasts. I still read occasionally when I want to learn something new.

Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,并使用了“Besides”进行补充,但存在语法错误:“because is”应为“because it is”。“carry a laptop or an ebook everywhere”表达不准确,电子书本身不能被携带,建议说“access e-books on my phone”。另外,“makes reading a book affordable”可以具体解释为许多电子资源免费或价格较低。

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient. I can access e-books on my phone or tablet wherever I go, so I do not need to carry a heavy book. Besides, many digital books are free or relatively inexpensive, and I can easily find them online.

When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容相关,也进行了场景对比,但有几处语法和搭配问题:“in research paper”应为“in a research paper”,“when I read...”不能单独作为完整句子,“browse about the content”不自然。建议使用“skim the text”或“read it casually”,并说明非正式阅读时主要关注主题或情节,而不是每个细节。

Ví dụ: I need to read very carefully when I am writing an essay or a dissertation because I have to check the figures, data, and sources accurately. In contrast, when I read a novel for pleasure, I usually skim some parts and focus on the main plot. I do not need to understand every single word.

Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,理由也比较充分,整体表达自然。不过,“relate to the author”语义略模糊,可以改为“understand the author’s ideas and emotions”;“have a feeling of achievement”建议改为更自然的“feel a sense of achievement”。还可以加入具体场景,说明扫描阅读适合快速查找信息。

Ví dụ: I generally prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the author’s ideas and emotions more deeply. I like paying attention to the language and reflecting on the meaning of each paragraph, which gives me a sense of achievement. However, I use scanning when I only need to find a specific piece of information quickly.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误,ID 26)

× Well, I prefer to read on a screen because is much more convenient for us to carry a laptop or an ebook everywhere.

✓ Well, I prefer to read on a screen because it is much more convenient for us to carry a laptop or an ebook everywhere.

because 引导的从句中缺少主语。这里需要用 it 指代在屏幕上阅读这件事,因此应说 because it is much more convenient。

Article errors(冠词错误,ID 22)

× Well, I have to read carefully when I write an essay or a dissertation because I have to be so cautious about the figures and data in research paper.

✓ Well, I have to read carefully when I write an essay or a dissertation because I have to be so cautious about the figures and data in a research paper.

research paper 是可数名词单数,前面需要冠词。这里指一篇研究论文,因此使用不定冠词 a。

Sentence without a verb(无完整谓语的句子,ID 23)

× But when I read some books just out of interest.

✓ But when I read some books just out of interest, I don't have to read carefully.

But when 引导的是时间状语从句,不能单独构成完整句子;它后面必须连接一个主句。应将该从句与 I don't have to read carefully 合并。

Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误,ID 11)

× I just mindlessly browse about the content.

✓ I just mindlessly browse through the content.

表示“浏览内容”时,browse 通常与 through 连用,表示从头到尾浏览某个内容。about 在这里不是合适的介词。

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