Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and natural: state whether you like reading and give a brief reason or example. Avoid unclear phrases ("favorite impact"). Keep it to 1–2 sentences and use simple vocabulary if unsure.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read novels and short stories in my free time because they help me relax and improve my English.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer: give a clear preference or say you like both, then support it with two concise reasons using linking words (however, because). Reduce filler words ("umm"). Use correct collocations ("cheaper", "buy books").

Ví dụ: I like both, but I prefer reading on a screen because it is cheaper and more accessible. However, I sometimes choose paper books because they feel nicer to hold and are easier to annotate.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence: when you read carefully vs. when you do not. Use specific examples (e.g., work reports, news articles) and linking words ("because", "whereas"). Avoid vague phrases and grammar mistakes ("when the IT depends"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I read carefully when the material contains important facts, for example work reports or news articles, because I need to remember details. In contrast, I skim light fiction or blogs for entertainment when I just want to relax.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference and explain with a specific condition using linking words ("when", "because"). Reduce hesitations and correct grammar ("I prefer detailed reading when the information is important and I need to remember facts"). Keep answer within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading when the information is important because I need to understand and remember facts, such as in study materials or technical instructions. For less important texts, I quickly scan for the main ideas.

× Yes, my favorite impact is one of my hobbies.

✓ Yes, reading is one of my favorite hobbies.

Student used 'impact' incorrectly; context asks about reading. This is a vocabulary/structure error and leads to a sentence that is ungrammatical. Use the noun 'reading' and the phrase 'one of my favorite hobbies' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: choose the correct noun and a natural word order ('reading is one of my favorite hobbies').

× Umm uh, I prefer both, but I would say that the difference between the two is that reading on paper is very expensive since you have to buy for your book, but umm on the other hand already on a screen is a lot more cheaper and at the same time very accessible.

✓ Umm, I prefer both, but I would say that the difference between the two is that reading on paper is more expensive since you have to buy books, whereas reading on a screen is much cheaper and more accessible.

Multiple issues: 'very expensive' contrasted with 'a lot more cheaper' (comparative redundancy) and wrong article/use ('buy for your book'). Also 'already on a screen' is incorrect. Corrections: use 'more expensive' and 'much cheaper' (avoid 'more' + 'cheaper'), remove unnecessary words, use plural 'books' and 'reading on a screen' for clarity. Use 'whereas' to contrast. Grammar problem types applied: 22 (Article errors) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). According to instruction, corrected only issues that match list — main fixes target article/word choice and structure.

× Well, umm, I read carefully when the IT depends on the content.

✓ Well, I read carefully when it depends on the content.

Student wrote 'the IT depends' which is incorrect word order and article usage. Use the pronoun 'it' without 'the'. This is a sentence structure/word choice error. Suggestion: keep subject 'I' and use 'when it depends on the content' to express conditional reading behavior.

× Actually, I read it carefully when I read about facts, what articles are very important information.

✓ Actually, I read carefully when I read factual articles that contain important information.

Original sentence has awkward sequence 'what articles are very important information' and unnecessary 'it'. This is a sentence structure and word choice problem. Correct by using 'factual articles' and 'that contain important information' to make the clause clear and grammatical. Also remove redundant 'it'.

× But when if it is only to pass time, I just read it like you're bored.

✓ But if it is just to pass the time, I read casually when I'm bored.

Multiple problems: 'when if' is redundant, 'pass time' needs article 'the time', 'read it like you're bored' mixes pronouns and tenses. This is a sentence structure and pronoun/tense error. Correction: use 'if' (not 'when if'), 'pass the time', and match person/tense: 'I read casually when I'm bored.' Suggestion: simplify conditional and keep pronouns consistent.

× Well, sometimes it depends on the importance. OK, I read umm, very a very detailed reading.

✓ Well, sometimes it depends on the importance. OK, I read in very great detail.

'Very a very detailed reading' is ungrammatical. Use an adverbial phrase 'in very great detail' or 'very carefully' instead of a noun phrase 'a very detailed reading'. This fixes incorrect noun/adverb usage and word order. Suggestion: use 'read in detail' or 'read very carefully'.

× I do this one umm, when the information that I needed to acquire is very important and have a factual meaning that I needed to remember and.

✓ I do this when the information I need to acquire is very important and factual and I need to remember it.

Errors: mixed tenses ('needed' vs present context), extra word 'one', missing object at end, and agreement 'have' should match singular 'information'. This is sentence structure and tense consistency. Correction: use present tense 'need' to match general habit, make 'information' followed by singular verb 'is factual', and include object 'it'. Suggestion: keep consistent tense for habits and ensure subject-verb agreement and complete clauses.