Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two concise supporting points with specific examples, and avoid repeating the same idea. Use correct verb forms (e.g., “it relaxes”, “it takes me”) and shorter sentences (maximum 4–5).

Ví dụ: Yes, I love reading because it relaxes me and helps me escape into different worlds. For example, science fiction books let me explore imaginative ideas, while novels help me understand characters’ emotions. Overall, reading improves my mood and broadens my perspective.

Gợi ý: Be concise and clear: state preference once, give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid filler words like “actually” repeatedly. Clarify unclear phrases (e.g., “read for being a vote from the screen” is not meaningful).

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because holding a book makes the experience more immersive and reduces eye strain. When I read on a screen, I tend to lose focus and feel distracted, so paper helps me concentrate better.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and then contrast with specific examples. Use correct tenses and clearer linking words (e.g., “However,” “On the other hand”). Avoid trailing off and finish your thought. Be specific about what requires careful reading (technical details, instructions).

Ví dụ: I read carefully when the material contains important information, such as academic articles or instructions, because I need to understand details and avoid mistakes. On the other hand, I read novels and light fiction more casually to enjoy the story without analyzing every sentence.

Gợi ý: State your preference clearly, give one or two concise reasons with examples, and use linking words (“because”, “for example”). Fix grammar (e.g., “I prefer detailed reading” not “A preferred”). Avoid vague phrases and complete your ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because I believe every sentence can carry subtle meanings that contribute to the overall theme. For example, when I read a novel slowly and reflect on each paragraph, I often notice symbolism and character development I would miss if I skimmed.

× Yes, I do love reading actually, because it's relaxes my mind a lot and it's also takes me to really different universes rather than mine.

✓ Yes, I do love reading actually, because it relaxes my mind a lot and it also takes me to really different universes from my own.

Errors: 'it's relaxes' and 'it's also takes' combine contraction 'it's' (it is) with a verb, causing subject-verb redundancy and incorrect agreement. Use the simple present 'it relaxes' and 'it also takes' with 'it' as the subject. Also 'rather than mine' is unnatural here; 'from my own' or 'from my own life' is clearer. Suggestion: Remove the contraction 'it's' before verbs and use correct present tense verbs matching the singular subject 'it'.

× And I think that clears my mind a lot.

✓ And I think that clears my mind a lot.

This sentence is correct grammatically; 'that clears' correctly uses third-person singular present tense. No change needed. Explanation provided to follow instructions requiring identification.

× And actually I think it's have a lot of effects on my psychology as well.

✓ And actually I think it has a lot of effects on my psychology as well.

Error: 'it's have' mixes contraction 'it's' (it is) with base verb 'have' causing incorrect verb form and subject-verb agreement. Use 'it has' for third-person singular present. Suggestion: Use 'it has' or 'it affects my psychology a lot' to be more natural.

× I actually prefer to read on a paper because it's actually make me feel I'm reading.

✓ I actually prefer to read on paper because it actually makes me feel like I'm reading.

Errors: 'on a paper' is incorrect; use 'on paper' for the general medium. 'it's actually make' incorrectly combines contraction with base verb and wrong verb form; use 'it makes'. Also add 'like' after 'feel' for natural expression. Suggestion: Use 'on paper' and ensure subject-verb agreement 'it makes'.

× While I was reading on an screen, I don't feel like I'm reading something I'm actually.

✓ While I read on a screen, I don't feel like I'm actually reading anything.

Errors: 'an screen' wrong article; use 'a screen'. Tense inconsistency: mix of past 'was reading' and present 'don't feel'; change to present 'read' to match habitual preference. Word order and extra 'something I'm actually' is awkward; use 'actually reading anything' for clarity. Suggestion: Keep consistent tense and correct article 'a screen'.

× Sometimes I read for being a vote from the screen.

✓ Sometimes I get a headache from reading on a screen.

Original sentence is unclear and likely word choice error ('a vote' is incorrect). I propose a clear, grammatical version that fits context: 'get a headache' or 'get tired' from screen reading. Suggestion: Use precise vocabulary and simple structure: 'I sometimes get tired when I read from a screen.'

× That's why actually that's one of my reasons to read.

✓ That's actually one of my reasons for preferring paper.

Errors: Redundant 'that's why actually that's' and awkward 'reasons to read'. Use 'one of my reasons for preferring paper' to state motivation clearly. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and use 'for preferring' to link reason and preference.

× That's why when there is that screen, it's actually.

✓ That's why when there is a screen, I prefer not to read on it.

Original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Provide a complete sentence that conveys the intended meaning: screens discourage reading. Suggestion: Complete the thought and avoid dangling 'it's actually'. Use explicit subject and verb.

× If I read some article, I just like fully pay attention for that.

✓ If I read an article, I fully pay attention to it.

Errors: 'some article' unnatural; use 'an article'. 'pay attention for' is incorrect preposition; correct is 'pay attention to'. Word order 'just like fully pay attention' is awkward; use 'I fully pay attention'. Suggestion: Use 'pay attention to' and natural word order.

× But if I read some love novels or something more basic, I didn't pay attention a lot, but I also do care about that.

✓ But if I read romantic novels or something lighter, I don't pay much attention, though I still care about them.

Errors: Tense inconsistency: 'I didn't pay attention' (past) versus habitual context; use present 'I don't pay'. 'love novels' should be 'romantic novels'; 'a lot' placement awkward; use 'don't pay much attention'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent for habits and use natural vocabulary.

× That's not doesn't mean that I didn't care about love novels or some science fiction things.

✓ That doesn't mean that I don't care about romantic novels or science fiction.

Errors: Double negative 'that's not doesn't' and tense mismatch. Use 'That doesn't mean' and present tense 'I don't care'. Use standard genre terms 'romantic novels' and 'science fiction'. Suggestion: Avoid double negatives and keep tense consistent.

× I think the.

✓ I think so.

Original is incomplete fragment. Complete it to 'I think so' which fits conversational response. Suggestion: Ensure sentences are complete with subject and verb when possible.

× A preferred detailed reading because I don't know I think every sentence in the book has a different meaning than we understand and when we first read and we didn't think about it we just skip it that part really easily.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I think every sentence in a book can have a different meaning, and when we first read without thinking about it, we easily skip those parts.

Errors: 'A preferred' incorrect article and verb form; should be 'I prefer'. Tense inconsistencies: mix of present and past 'we didn't think' should be 'without thinking'. Wordiness and awkward clauses fixed. 'skip it that part' is incorrect order; use 'skip those parts'. Suggestion: Use simple present for preferences and maintain parallel structure in compound sentences.

× I think we don't really understand that what book really wants to understand there are so different kind of things that.

✓ I think we don't really understand what the book really wants to say; there are so many different ideas in it.

Errors: Incorrect pronoun/clause structure: 'that what book really wants to understand' is ungrammatical. Should be 'what the book wants to say'. 'different kind of things' should be 'so many different ideas'. Also sentence was incomplete; provide a clear, grammatical completion. Suggestion: Use 'what + subject + verb' for content clauses and correct noun phrases like 'different ideas'.