Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Work on clarity, grammar and vocabulary accuracy. Give a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms (read, reading), and avoid repetition. Keep response to 2–4 clear sentences: state whether you like reading, mention what you read, and give a brief reason or example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. I often read long novels, especially comic fiction, because they make me laugh and relax. For example, I recently finished a bestselling comedy novel that helped me unwind after a busy week.

Gợi ý: Improve word choice and sentence completion. Use correct words (read, screen) and give a clear contrast with linking words ('however', 'but'). Explain briefly why paper is better and when you accept screens. Keep sentences complete and avoid trailing off.

Ví dụ: I prefer to read on paper because it helps me concentrate and is gentler on my eyes. However, I read on a screen when I have no choice, such as for emails or online articles, but I try to limit this to avoid eye strain.

Gợi ý: Use correct grammar and structure: start with a clear topic sentence about when careful reading is necessary. Use specific examples (work emails, contracts) and contrast with casual reading (texts, social media). Use linking words ('for example', 'whereas').

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I'm doing work-related tasks, for example when checking emails, reports, or instructions, because mistakes can cause problems. In contrast, I don't read carefully when chatting with friends or browsing social media, since those messages are informal and low-risk.

Gợi ý: Clarify vocabulary and reduce repetition: use 'reading' not 'leading', and 'scanning' vs 'detailed reading'. Give a concise reason and an example. Use linking words ('because', 'so'). Aim for 2–3 sentences that directly answer the question.

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because I believe every piece of information can be important and scanning may cause mistakes. For example, when reviewing a work report I read every section carefully to avoid errors.

× Yes, I like reading really much.

✓ Yes, I really like reading.

The adverb 'really' should come before the verb 'like' to modify it correctly. 'Really much' is non-standard; use 'really like' or 'like very much'. Suggestion: Place adverbs before main verbs: 'I really like reading' or 'I like reading very much.'

× I usually lead Noble, a long comedy novel and and in person I try to leading English nowhere to practice my leading skills.

✓ I usually read 'Noble', a long comic novel, and in person I try to speak English everywhere to practice my reading and speaking skills.

Multiple issues: wrong verb 'lead' instead of 'read', repeated 'and', incorrect 'leading English nowhere' and wrong gerund forms. Replace with correct verbs and clearer structure. Suggestions: Use correct verbs ('read', 'speak'), separate ideas with commas, and use 'everywhere' instead of 'nowhere' if meaning to practice broadly.

× And I will enjoy leading because it's humid to be more personal.

✓ And I enjoy reading because it is helpful to be more personal.

'Will enjoy' unnecessary future; simple present fits habitual likes. 'Leading' should be 'reading'. 'Humid' is wrong word; likely 'helpful' or 'useful'. Use correct adjective 'helpful' and simple present 'I enjoy' for general statements.

× I prefer to lead on paper because paper can make me more concentrated and not have any effect to my eyes.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because it helps me concentrate and does not affect my eyes.

Use 'read' instead of 'lead'. 'Make me more concentrated' is awkward; 'helps me concentrate' is natural. Use 'does not affect my eyes' instead of 'not have any effect to my eyes.' Use correct subject 'it' for paper.

× But if I have to lead on a skin sometime I have a problem with my eyes and.

✓ But if I have to read on a screen sometimes, I have problems with my eyes.

'Lead' should be 'read'; 'skin' is wrong word for 'screen'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Remove trailing 'and'. Use plural 'problems' or 'a problem'.

× I have to lead carefully when I working and I have to leave like e-mail or information to do my work.

✓ I have to read carefully when I am working, and I have to leave notes, emails, or information to do my work.

Missing auxiliary 'am' for present continuous 'I am working'. 'Lead' should be 'read'. 'Leave like e-mail' is unclear; likely 'write or leave notes or emails'. Use parallel nouns and correct verb forms.

× But sometime I don't have to make more concentrate about to leading when I chatting with my friends or send a message with my friends like not.

✓ But sometimes I don't need to concentrate much when I chat with my friends or send messages to them.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Don't have to make more concentrate about to leading' is ungrammatical; use 'don't need to concentrate much'. 'Chatting' should be 'chat' with correct tense. Simplify ending to 'send messages to them.'

× I prefer detailed leading because in my view every information is important, we shouldn't scan because it can create more mistake and I don't think it should be happen in my work because my work is need to be careful and have a details.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because, in my view, every piece of information is important. We shouldn't skim because it can cause more mistakes, and I don't think that should happen at work because my work needs to be done carefully and with attention to detail.

Multiple problems: 'leading' should be 'reading'. Use 'piece of information' or 'information' without 'every' + singular. 'Scan' here means 'skim'; 'create more mistake' should be 'cause more mistakes'. 'Should be happen' is wrong; use 'should happen'. 'My work is need to be careful' -> 'my work needs to be done carefully' and 'have a details' -> 'attention to detail'. Suggestions: use correct verbs, countable/uncountable noun forms, and appropriate collocations like 'cause mistakes', 'attention to detail'.