Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
To be frank, I enjoy reading so much because I think reading can help me broaden my knowledge and expand my version. For example, I like reading science books and historic books.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
Actually it depends on different situation. When I'm school I prefer to read on paper because in the school I didn't have a phone but but in the daily life I prefer to read on the screen because read on the screen is more convenient.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
I would like to say that I need to read the book carefully when the books are confusing, because I need to underline the words which are complex or important. And when the books are easy, I don't need to read carefully, they can make the reading more relaxed.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
Well it also depends on different situations like when I have not enough time I prefer scanning because scanning is rapidly and if I have enough time I prefer to detail reading.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 注意用词准确与句子简洁。回答时要直接回应问题,第一句说明喜好,然后用一两句具体说明原因或举例。避免不准确或拼写错误(如"version"应为"vision"或"perspective"),以及过长或重复的表达。可以用连接词让表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. It helps me broaden my knowledge and gives me new perspectives. For example, I often read popular science and history books because they explain complex ideas clearly and tell interesting stories.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 注意语法时态和句子流畅性。先给出直接答案(偏好),再解释原因并举例。避免重复词(如"but but")和时态错误("When I'm school"应为"When I'm at school")。使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. At school I prefer paper because I don’t always have access to a phone or tablet. In daily life I usually read on a screen since it is more convenient and I can adjust the font size.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁并注意词汇搭配。先给出主题句,再说明原因和具体做法。避免模糊表达(如"books are confusing"可说"material is difficult"),以及语法不准确("they can make the reading more relaxed"应更自然地表达)。
Ví dụ: I read carefully when the material is difficult because I need to underline important words and take notes. If the text is simple or just for pleasure, I usually skim it and read more casually.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 注意用词形式和句子结构。先直接回答偏好,再说明条件和原因。使用正确的名词形式("scanning is rapid"或"I prefer scanning";"detailed reading"而不是"detail reading")。保持句子简短,避免重复。
Ví dụ: It depends on my time. If I’m short on time I prefer scanning because it’s quick and helps me find key information. If I have plenty of time, I choose detailed reading to understand the text fully.
× To be frank, I enjoy reading so much because I think reading can help me broaden my knowledge and expand my version.
✓ To be frank, I enjoy reading so much because I think reading can help me broaden my knowledge and expand my vision.
这里使用了单词 "version"(版本),与语境不符,正确应为表示“视野、眼界”的名词 "vision"。这是词汇选择错误,属于形容词/副词或词性用法不当的范畴。建议积累常用搭配(broaden one's knowledge / broaden one's vision / broaden one's horizons)。
× For example, I like reading science books and historic books.
✓ For example, I like reading science books and history books.
原句中使用了形容词 "historic"(历史性的,常用于'具有历史意义的'),与想表达的“历史书”不匹配,且 'history books' 为正确名词短语。此处属于可数名词与修饰词选择问题,需用名词 'history' 作前置名词修饰 'books'。建议记住常用名词短语搭配,例如 'history books'。
× Actually it depends on different situation.
✓ Actually it depends on the situation.
原句中缺少复数或冠词,且短语不自然。常见表达为 'it depends on the situation' 或 'it depends on different situations'。这属于时态/时态相关表达与句子搭配问题。建议使用固定搭配 'depends on' 后接单数可数名词需加冠词或使用复数。
× When I'm school I prefer to read on paper because in the school I didn't have a phone but but in the daily life I prefer to read on the screen because read on the screen is more convenient.
✓ When I'm at school I prefer to read on paper because at school I didn't have a phone, but in daily life I prefer to read on a screen because reading on a screen is more convenient.
原句存在多处结构问题:缺少介词 'at'(When I'm at school),重复词 'but but',冠词和代词使用不当('in the school' 改为 'at school' 或 'in school';'on the screen' 改为 'on a screen'),以及动词形式缺失('read on the screen' 应为动名词短语 'reading on a screen')。这些都属于句子结构和介词、冠词使用错误。建议注意固定短语(at school / in daily life)、避免重复词并使用正确的名词/动名词形式。
× I would like to say that I need to read the book carefully when the books are confusing, because I need to underline the words which are complex or important.
✓ I would say that I need to read books carefully when they are confusing, because I need to underline words that are complex or important.
原句中“the book”和“the books”指代混乱,应保持一致;另外 'which' 在非限定性/限定性从句中用法需注意,改为更自然的 'that'。这是句子结构和代词指代一致性问题。建议保持单复数一致,使用一致的指代(books ... they),并用 'that' 引导限定性从句。
× And when the books are easy, I don't need to read carefully, they can make the reading more relaxed.
✓ And when the books are easy, I don't need to read carefully; they make reading more relaxed.
原句中 'they can make the reading more relaxed' 用词多余且不自然,且逗号拼接两个独立分句应改为分号或连词。这里涉及复数指代与时态/语气使用。建议简化表达为 'they make reading more relaxed',避免多余的助动词 'can'。
× Well it also depends on different situations like when I have not enough time I prefer scanning because scanning is rapidly and if I have enough time I prefer to detail reading.
✓ Well, it also depends on the situation. If I don't have enough time I prefer scanning because scanning is rapid, and if I have enough time I prefer detailed reading.
原句存在多处错误:'not enough time' 的否定语序应为 'don't have enough time';'scanning is rapidly' 错把副词/形容词混用,应为形容词 'rapid' 或 'quick';'detail reading' 应为形容词+名词 'detailed reading'。这些都属于动词-ing 形式与形容词/副词选择的错误。建议注意否定句语序,区分形容词与副词,并使用固定搭配 'detailed reading'。