Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Of course, yes, umm, by reading I can many acknowledge and I can learn many uh, skills that can umm, increase my ability and umm, make my life more careful and enrich my body and spread.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer to read on paper because I think read on paper is more healthy for our eyes. If we read on the screen it's harmful our body and is more.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
When I'm in a free time and I felt very quiet, I will I need to read carefully because if I need to pass the exam, I need to read carefully to help myself to pass my test.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
Umm, I prefer the tired reading because if I detired reading I can get some more details about the project and I will know about the area and know more things and know about the person.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁有条理,开头直接表明观点,然后用一两句具体的理由支持。注意语法和词汇搭配,例如用 "gain knowledge" 而不是 "many acknowledge",把重复的填充词(umm, uh)尽量减少。可以用连词(because, so, which)把理由连接起来,使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Reading helps me gain knowledge and learn new skills, which improve my abilities. For example, I often read articles about productivity to help me organize my daily tasks better.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要语法正确并具体说明原因,避免模糊表达。用恰当的词组如 "better for my eyes" 或 "less straining",并补充一到两个具体例子或对比(如 convenience vs comfort)。保持一到两句的补充说明即可。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because it is less straining on my eyes than screens. However, screens are more convenient for carrying many books, so I sometimes use them when I travel.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更有逻辑,先给出明确的时间或场景,然后解释原因并给出对比。避免矛盾或重复(例如不要同时说在空闲和为了考试)。可以用条件句或对比连词(when, because, but)来组织句子。
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I study for exams or when I need to understand complex instructions, because accuracy is important then. But when I read for leisure, I usually skim to enjoy the story.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: 先用正确的术语回答(scanning 或 detailed reading),然后说明原因并举例。避免词汇错误("tired reading" 非常规表达)。用连接词(because, so, for example)把观点和细节连接起来,句子保持简短明了。
Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand complex information and pick up important details. For example, when I read a research report, I read it carefully to understand the methods and results.
× Of course, yes, umm, by reading I can many acknowledge and I can learn many uh, skills that can umm, increase my ability and umm, make my life more careful and enrich my body and spread.
✓ Of course. By reading I can gain a lot of knowledge, and I can learn many skills that can increase my abilities, make my life more fulfilling, and broaden my horizons.
原句中“many acknowledge”不符合英语用法。需要用不可数名词“knowledge”并用合适的量词(a lot of / much)或动词短语(gain knowledge)。另外“enrich my body and spread”搭配不当,语义不清,改为“make my life more fulfilling, and broaden my horizons”更自然。建议:使用正确的名词形式及常见搭配;把口语填充词(umm, uh)删掉以使句子更清晰。
× I prefer to read on paper because I think read on paper is more healthy for our eyes. If we read on the screen it's harmful our body and is more.
✓ I prefer to read on paper because I think reading on paper is healthier for our eyes. Reading on a screen is harmful to our bodies.
原句中用“more healthy”比较级错误,应使用不规则比较级“healthier”,或使用“more healthy”不常见且不推荐;动名词“reading”更适合表行为;短语“harmful our body”缺少介词,应为“harmful to our bodies”。建议:注意比较级形式;在动名词前加动名词形式;使用正确的介词搭配(harmful to)。
× When I'm in a free time and I felt very quiet, I will I need to read carefully because if I need to pass the exam, I need to read carefully to help myself to pass my test.
✓ When I have free time and feel very calm, I need to read carefully. If I want to pass an exam, I need to read carefully to help myself succeed.
原句时态混乱,包含过去式“felt”和将来式“will”但实际上描述的是一般情况或习惯,应使用一般现在时。重复的结构(I will I need)语法错误且冗余。还应使用更自然的表达(have free time, feel calm, want to pass)。建议:描述习惯或一般事实时使用一般现在时;删去多余词语并保持句子简洁。
× Umm, I prefer the tired reading because if I detired reading I can get some more details about the project and I will know about the area and know more things and know about the person.
✓ I prefer detailed reading because if I read carefully I can get more details about a project, learn about the area, and learn more about the people involved.
原句中“tired reading”和“detired reading”是错误拼写与不合适搭配,句子结构重复且混乱(and know more things and know about the person)。应使用“detailed reading”或“careful reading”,并将并列成分简化为平行结构(get…, learn…, learn…)。建议:使用正确的词汇(detailed/careful reading);避免拼写错误;保持并列结构的平行性以增强可读性。