Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Strengthen clarity and grammar, and slightly shorten redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct small grammar mistakes (e.g., 'well-known' and 'helps'), and avoid repeating similar ideas. Add one specific example (author or magazine) to enrich content.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. I often read novels by Haruki Murakami and magazines like The New Yorker. Reading before bed helps me relax and unwind after a busy day.

Gợi ý: Make the response more fluent and concise, remove filler words ('uh'), and correct grammar (e.g., 'on paper', 'less eye strain'). Use a linking phrase to organize reasons (firstly, secondly) and give a short concrete example of notifications interrupting you.

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because I can concentrate better. Firstly, I don't get interrupted by notifications on my phone. Secondly, paper causes less eye strain during long reading sessions.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and coherence: use concise topic sentence, correct articles and word forms ('a noisy area', 'focused'), and use linking words (however, therefore). Give a specific scenario of when careful reading is needed (studying for exams, reading technical material).

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I'm studying for exams or learning technical material in a quiet place. However, in a noisy cafe or near traffic I can't focus, so I usually go to the library to concentrate.

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition and improve sentence structure. Begin with a clear opinion, then give 1–2 concise reasons and an example. Replace vague phrases ('deep knowledge') with specific outcomes (understand arguments, remember facts).

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand arguments and remember details. For example, when I read research articles slowly, I can take notes and fully grasp the main ideas.

× I like reading books and magazines, especially novels by well known famous authors.

✓ I like reading books and magazines, especially novels by well-known famous authors.

The phrase 'well known famous' uses two adjectives with the same meaning and needs a hyphen for the compound modifier 'well-known' before a noun. Use either 'well-known authors' or 'famous authors' and hyphenate 'well-known' when it modifies a noun directly. Suggestion: choose one adjective and hyphenate if it precedes the noun (e.g., well-known authors).

× I like reading before going to bed, which help me relax and unwind from a busy day.

✓ I like reading before going to bed, which helps me relax and unwind after a busy day.

The relative clause refers to 'reading' (singular activity), so the verb should be 'helps' (third-person singular). Also use 'after a busy day' as the usual collocation. Suggestion: use 'helps' and 'after' for natural phrasing.

× I like reading on a paper because it is more concentrated than screen because, uh, for example, when I got uh, interrupted notification from screen, I get distracted.

✓ I like reading on paper because it is easier to concentrate than on a screen; for example, when I get interrupted by notifications from a screen, I become distracted.

'On a paper' is incorrect; use 'on paper' without an article. 'More concentrated' is awkward; use 'easier to concentrate' or 'I can concentrate more'. Compare 'than on a screen' and include the preposition 'on'. 'When I got uh, interrupted notification' has tense and article issues: use present 'get interrupted by notifications'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, correct prepositions, and keep consistent present tense for habitual situations.

× So that's why paper would be best. And this is not a eye strain or eye fatigue.

✓ So that's why paper is best. It does not cause eye strain or eye fatigue.

'Paper would be best' is awkward here; use simple present 'paper is best' for a general preference. 'This is not a eye strain' has article error and wrong pronoun: use 'It does not cause eye strain'. Also drop 'a' before 'eye strain' and use 'cause' to show relationship. Suggestion: use clear subject 'It' and correct article usage.

× When the environment is peaceful at that time, I can read more carefully and concentrated.

✓ When the environment is peaceful, I can read more carefully and stay concentrated.

'Concentrated' is an adjective but here needs an adverb or verb phrase. Use 'more carefully' (adverb) and 'stay concentrated' or 'maintain my concentration'. Also remove redundant phrase 'at that time'. Suggestion: use adverbial forms and concise time phrases.

× However, in an noisy area I can't read and focused on the text.

✓ However, in a noisy area I can't read or focus on the text.

Use 'a noisy area' (correct article) not 'an noisy area'. 'Can't read and focused' mixes forms; parallel structure requires 'can't read or focus' or 'can't read and be focused'. Suggestion: correct article and keep parallel verb forms.

× Mostly I like reading in the library than busy cafe or near traffic.

✓ Mostly I like reading in the library rather than in a busy cafe or near traffic.

Comparison requires 'rather than' instead of 'than' when contrasting preferences. Include articles: 'in the library' is fine, but 'a busy cafe' needs an article. Add preposition 'in' before 'a busy cafe' for parallel structure. Suggestion: use 'rather than' and include necessary articles and prepositions.

× I prefer detailed reading because it helps in it helps me in deeper knowledge rather than scanning because scanning is not a scanning is just a formality.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it helps me gain deeper knowledge rather than scanning, which is just a formality.

Remove repeated phrase 'it helps in it helps' and rephrase 'helps me gain deeper knowledge'. Use 'which' to refer to scanning and eliminate repetition 'scanning is not a scanning is'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use clear relative clauses.

× So this is not helping me in a deep knowledge to get deep knowledge.

✓ So this does not help me gain deep knowledge.

The original sentence is repetitive and has awkward structure 'helping me in a deep knowledge to get deep knowledge'. Use concise infinitive 'help me gain deep knowledge'. Suggestion: simplify and remove redundancy.